V'day Contest: Suman&Rajiv (e.g. PG 2) - Page 2

Hey guys,

great idea..please go ahead with the contest. It is great to see activity :-).

love, Puja

I am trying to write a v'day's romantic scene for cute couple suman-rajiv.

There is only a day left in Valentine day and Rajiv decide to throw a valentine day surprise for his valentine suman. He wants to give a sweet surprise to her, not larger then life type. So he plan his surprise in this way.

On the way back to home from office, Rajiv purchased all the stuff that needed for decoration just before the v'day. As he lives in joint family so he decided to give a surprise bash to suman at the outhouse. So he decorate the outhouse secretely with lots of flowers, heart shape balloons. In centre of the hall there is a table with big heart shape cake written with words "I luv u suman from bottom of my heart" on it. Also there is a champaign besides the cake and to make this special occasion more memorable, he arrange very romantic music.

Rajiv goes to his bedroom and awake suman exactly at 12.00 a.m. she asked the reason for it. Rajiv said he wanted to eat something & there is nothing eatable in the house and if she prepare something in the kitchen, noice will disturb everyone in the house. So let's go to outhouse and you prepare something for him. They goes to the outhouse.

Rajiv first enter in the outhouse. He take suman in the middle of the hall. Then he switch on the light. Suman was surprised to see the flowers, balloons, cake and champaign. Suddenly music play on and Rajiv bent on his knees, take suman's palm in his hand and ask her "will you be my valentine?" suman was so touch by this that first she didn't be able to say anything. (after her marriage she was already touch my rajiv's tenderness and with each incidence, she more & more touch and fall for Rajiv. This was the ultimate stroke) Then very shyly she said "yes, I want to be your valentine" and she hug Rajiv so tightly like never before. Like she wanted to admit her love for Rajiv by hugging him so tightly and affectionately. After that the sweet couple cut the cake and have champaign. Then they dance with the very romantic tune as if there is no one the universe. As if there are alone in the universe. They dance till the morning…………so the journey of marriage with love begins for suman and Rajiv…………..

Hope you like my idea of suman-rajiv's v'day's sweet surprise bash………….

I tried to write it. Guys please feel free to comment…..

Nice one. I do hope to c other ppl get involved in this contest

Desi_punjaban can't you extend till sunday....

Sorry guys.. it is too long...

It is morning, Shalakha goes to prepare tea and she hears the doorbell ring. Rajiv has left for office. There is courier boy who come with a bouquet of flowers.
Shalakha to herself : kya baat hai. Aaj kisi ne phool beja? Waise bhi aaj toh kisi ka birthday bhi nahi hai. Toh kisne phool beja??. She is thinking who must have sent….
The courier boy :Madam oh Madam kaha koh gayi thi… madam phool le lo plz.
Shalakha: aaj taarek kya hai?
The courier boy: 14th Februaury
Shalakha: kya khaas din hai aaj ki kisi ne phool beja hai? Aaj hamare ghar main toh kisi ka janamdin nahi hai ?
The courier boy: arey madam aap ko pata nahi kya aaj ka din kya hain?
Shalakha: nahi to….Mujhe nahin maloom. tum mujhe baton?
The courier boy: Aaj valentine day hai madam? Bache bache bhi jaante hai ki 14th feb ko valentine din manaya jaata hai…
Shalakha: kya address yehi ka hai kya?
The courier boy: Ji madam kya yeh Rawal house hain na?..
Shalakha: ji
The courier boy: yehi ka patha hai… toh phool toh le lo. Mera haath dhuk raha hai.
Shalakha : [she takes the flowers] acha acha…. theek hai theek hai… Kisne ne beja hai?
The courier boy: Madam yeh toh koi Suman Rawal ke naam pe hai….
Shalakha is stunned and ask: Acha kisne beja hai jaldi batao?
The courier boy: kya madam deko na …..phool pe ek card hai? Padiye toh sahi….. apne aap pata chalega ki kisne beja…
Shalakha makes a face and read the card and it is written To Suman with love…Shalakha makes gives a sly smile.
The courier boy: Oye madam, kaha koh gayi aap wapas?
Shalakha comes to present and see the courier boy and angrily ask him: ab kya hai?
The courier boy: arey Madam sign toh karo? Jaldi karo… Mujhe aur jagah main bhi jana hai…
Shalakha: theek hai …theek hai and she signs it and the courier boy leaves.

Meanwhile in Suman bedroom, Suman mobile rings.
Suman: Hello!!!!
Rajiv: Arey Suman main Rajiv bol raha hoon.
Suman: kaha ho tum?
Rajiv: Main office main hoon.
Suman: Aaj aap bahut jaldi office gaye..
Rajiv: Sorry Suman.. main tujhe bin bataye chala gaya.
Suman: it ok.. atleast aap ke liye chai toh bana leti..
Rajiv: Sorry, next time bol ke jayunga theek hai
Suman: ok.
Suman: Achha phone kyun kiya?
Rajiv: lo.. jo baat karna chahta main bhool gaya?.
Suman: kya baat hai?
Rajiv: Aaj hum dono ko ek party main bulaya hai….
Suman : Lekin mujhe party pasand nahi hai…
Rajiv: humko toh jaana hi padega kyunki jisne hame bulaya hai. Woh mera dost hai. Main inkaar bhi nahi kar sakta.
Suman: theek hai.. kabhi jana hai…
Rajiv: Arey Suman tujhe koi bhi lal sari pehni padegi theek hai.
Suman: Lal sari kyun?
Rajiv: pata nahi bol rahe the ki theme hai party main auraton ko lal dress yeah sari aur gents ko black suit.
Suman: theek hain..
Rajiv: Main shyaam ko aayunga aur hum dono saath main hi nikalenge. Tayar rehna.
Suman: theek hai main tayar ho jaungi. Bye
Rajiv: bye..

Suman again gets a call from Rajiv..
Suman: kya hua kuch bhool gaye ho kya!!!!
Rajiv: tujse baat karta hoon toh main sab kuch bhool jaata hoon..
Suman blushes: Acha.!!!!
Rajiv: Sach hai Suman. Kya karoon… kabhi aise nahi hua mere zindagi main
Suman: still blushing….Sachi
Rajiv: Haan Sachi.. Main soch raha hoon ki main office chodkar, tere samne baitoon aur tujhe dekta rahoon
Suman suddenly gets tensed and does not answer.
Rajiv: Arey Suman … Tum wahi ho na.. baat kyun nahi kar rahi ho…
Suman: Haan main…main yehi hoon .. acha kyun phone kiya? Chalo main phone rakti hoon. Mujhe bahut kaam hai…
Rajiv: hmmm theek hai.. par main ek baat bolna he bhool gaya?
Suman: kya hai…
Rajiv: Arey Suman courier aanewala hai. Please le lo aur main chahta hoon ki tum hi courier le lo..(Suddenly Durgesh comes in Rajiv 's cabin and tells him to come for the meeting) Theek hai.. mujhe meeting main jana hai bye..
Suman: theek hai bye… she puts the phone down….

Downstairs in the hall, Shalakha keeps giving a sly smile and kep the flowers on the table..
Shalakha to herself: ab maja aayega.yeh mauka nahi chodna chahiye… Jethaniji ab ka kair nahi… hahhahha
Suddenly Damini comes in the hall
Damini: Shalakha waha pe kyun kadi ho aur kya soch rahi ho?
Shalakha: Kuch nahi mummyji
Damini looks at the flowers : Shalakha yeh phool kisne beje hain.
Shalakha: Maloom nahi mummyji. Yeh phool toh Jethani ki liye hai.
Damini: par aaj kya hai…
Shalakha : pata nahi and gives a sly smile. Mummyji aap kyun nahi suman se puch leti? Wohi jawaab degi?
Damini: theek hai bulao usse niche?
Shalkha : theek hai mummji main usko bulake lathi hoon.
Shalkha leaves with a sly smile.
Shalkha to herself : aaj jethanhi ki kair nahi..hhehehe all the best jethaniji..

Suman is ready to come outside…. when Shalakha comes in the bedroom
Shalakha: arey jethaniji.. kya kari rahi ho..Aap ko niche bulaya hai?
Suman is tensed: kya baat hai shalkha ji..
Shalakha: Mummji aapko bula rahi hai… bahut gusse main hain?
Suman: kyun
Shalakha: pata nahi..niche aaogi toh pata chalega…chale jethanhiji
Suman nods yes and both leave the room.

Damini is fuming in anger.
Suman: Kaki apne mujhe bulaya hain?
Damini: yeh kya hai.. she points to the flowers. Suman is shocked see it.
Suman: Mujhe pata nahi kaki.
Damini: Kya pata nahi, tere liye tho phool hai..
Suman then remembers that Rajiv talked about the courier.
Suman :Par kaki…
Kekti, Neela aur Nani come to the hall. ALL are stunned that Damini is shouting at Suman.
Kekti : kya hua didi? Kyun chila rahi ho? Ab Suman ne kya kiya?
Damini: dekho na teri bahu ko kisne ghulab ka guldastaan diya hai. Main pucha kisne diya . tho bol bhi nahi rahi he.
Neela is stunned and thinks Prem must have send it and goes to Suman and slap her. All are stunned.
Neela: tere vajay se kya sena pad tha hai..
Suman: but Mama.. meri baat toh suno.
Kekti: arey Suman ko bhi do bolne do na. Bolo Suman beti kya hua?
Suman: Mujhe Mujhe Rajiv ne subah phone kiya tha ki koi courier ane wala hai aur main hi courier loon.
Shalakha is stunned.
Damini: tune pehle he batana chaheye. Sorry beta. Tujhpar maine gussa kiya and Damini goes and hugs Suman who has tears in her eyes.
Neela fels sorry that she slapped Suman and leaves from there.
Ketki: Shalakha zara who phool Suman ko dena.
Shalakha is so fumed up and she takes the flowers and gives it to her and leaves for her bedroom.
Shalakha to herself: hamesha Suamn bach jati hain. Mauke milta hain par..hamesha bach jaati hain.
Aur yeh jinesh ko meri parwah hi nahi hain.
Shalkha calls up Jignesh
Jignesh: Hi darling kya baat mujhe miss kar rahi ho?
Shalkha : Nahi mujhe tumpe gussa aa raha hai?
Jignesh: Kyun kya hua darling?
Shlkha: dekho na jethji ne flowers laye hai Suman ki liye aur tune kuch bhi laye mere liye
Jignesh: acha yeh baat hai? Theek main bhi laoonga shaam ko. Phir hum bhaar chalte ahin. Kissi restaurant jake khana khainge. Theek hai shyaam ko tyaar rehna.
Shalakha: theek hai. Happy Valentine day…
Jignesh: Kya baat hai darling…. Tum mujhe wish kar rahi ho…
Shalkha : chalo main rakhthi hoon.. mujhe kaam hai.

It is evening time. Rajiv comes home and sits down in the hall.
Kkekti: kya baat hai Rajiv..
Rajiv: kya baat hai? Main kuch samjha nahi.
Damini: haan pata hain ? Courier wala aaya tha.
Rajiv: aaya tha. Suman ne liye.
Damini and Kekti: haan liya and start laughing
Rajiv: Kyun haas rahe mummy?
Kekti: chori chori chupke chupke.
Rajiv : mujhe batayon kya baat hain
Damini: arey tune tone Suman ko ghulab diya tha.
Rajiv shocked: Maine.. Maine koi ghulab nahi diya Suman ko.
Damini and Kekti are stunned.
Damini: Par Suman keh rahi thi ki tune usko diya.
Rajiv: nahi badi ma, mujhe toh a file courier main aa raha tha. Isiliye Suman ko bola tha lene ko..
Suman comes in and gives everybody smile.
Damini: Suman tune keh rahi thi ki woh flowers Rajiv ne diya par Rajiv ne nahi diya.
Suman is shocked.
Suman: Aap ne nahi diya toh kisne diya.
Damini: bolo Suman kisne diya..
Suman: Main such much nahi jaanti ki kisne diya.
Damini: main wapas puch rahi ki kisne diya?
A voice is heard and says Maine diya….
All turn around to the entrance and see Adesh and Chaitali.
Adesh : Maine he bhabhi ko diya that bhaiya naam se.
Everybody sighs and is happy.
Rajiv: tujhe woh file nahi mila.
Suman: kaunsa file.
Chaitali: Sumi woh courier main aapke drawer main rakh diya. Duphar ko courier wala aaya tha toh tum kitchen main busy thi. Main tere room main rakh diya…
Suman smiles and says thanks.

Rajiv to everyone: accha Main aur Suman ek party ke liye ja rahe hain.
Everyone is happy and Shalakha is angry.
Rajiv: chale Suman. Tum tayar ho.
Suman smiles and nods yes.

They both leave. Next scene:
In the party, full room was deck with heart balloon and lights and music going on. Both Rajiv and Suman look everywhere. Suman smiles and then the host welcome them and introduces to the crowd. Everybody is clapping for them. The host requests a special dance for the special couple. Rajiv and Suman. Both are stunned and Rajiv offers his left hand and Suman shyly takes his hand and hoes in the center of dance floor. And focus light is put on them the music starts. The songs starts

Both look and star at each other and keep dancing. The song is over and everybody claps. Both Suman and Rajiv blush and Rajiv takes her to the patio. They have dinner and Rajiv turns to Suman and keeps staring at her.
Rajiv: yaha pe bahut beed hai. Kahi aur chale..
Rajiv drives and takes her to a mountain and they reach a quiet spot.
Rajiv: this palce is so nice.When I want some peace I come down over here.
Suman looks at the stars and see a full moon. Suma smiles.
Rajivsees her smiling and goes into dreaming.
In the dream Rajiv takes her hand and bring her in his arms and looks at her and he kisses her.
Suman looks at him staring him : Rajivji … rajivji kaha ko gaye aap.
Rajiv comes back to reality and tells nothing..He smiles.
Rajiv comes let go home.
Suman is about to sit in the car when her mobile rings. She picks up the line it is Prem.
Prem: How are you sweetheart?
Suman: hahn meena I am fine
Prem: Meena .. kaun meena main Rajiv bol raha hoon.
Suman: pata hain.
Prem: do you get my bouquet of lowers?
Suman is stunned.

Originally posted by: poo_supi

Desi_punjaban can't you extend till sunday....

Poo I have extended the date 4 u. i'll put them on voting on monday the 19th if u guys want more time do tell me i can extend the time. just tell me how much time do u guys want. oki

WOW POO. u written a whole epi. but if u don't mind can u just make it on rajiv and suman don't add the other characters. I hope u don't mind. but it's just an advice. if u want it like that it's oki. but i just thought if u just had rajiv and suman's scenes in their it would've been more romantic.

Thanks desi_punjaban for the time limit.

Regarding Suman and rajiv romantic i had thought of a great idea but after writing the shalakha one. i got totally exhausted and it was time to log out before that i tried to finish the scenes between rajiv and suman. there are lot of mistakes in the ending.

Dont worry, i will write the next one only between rajiv and Suman....

i wont be able to write the next one....i am Sorry desi_punjaban