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Remaining Ending part of the 1st feb

Suman tells Rajiv that I will go to the washroom and adjust the bindi and is about to leave when Rajiv catches her elbow and stops her. Suman is astonished and Rajiv tells her that I will adjust the bindi and saying that he takes out the misplace bindi and puts it in its place. While doing that Tanu comes in, she sees both of them together and she cough and tells them that I came at the wrong time. Rajiv and Suman look to Tanu and both of them start blushing. Rajiv gives justification that we weren't doing anything wrong and I was just putting for her bindi. Tanu tells him that I don't want to know any justification and I came here to call you Devki Bua is come and she has called you down. Rajiv tells fine, tell we are coming down. And she leaves and Rajiv and Suman look at each other and smile.

Rajiv, Suman, his father and Ketki, Damini and her husband, Tanu and Shalakha and Devki Bua are all sitting down in the hall. Devki tells Rajiv father that bhaiya. I am inviting Rajiv and Suman to my house and Rajiv dad says ok. Devki is sad and she worries about her son and tells I hope he understands and Ketki tells not to worry and by meeting each other. He will realize it. Devki asks Suman and Rajiv that I hope you don't have any problem coming to my place and I hope you are free. If not we can take some other time. Rajiv says no, we will come as you say. Devki is happy but suddenly Rajiv dad says No. They will not go and Devki think but bhaiya just now you told me that they could go. Everybody is shocked. Rajiv dad tells that only they will go, that is not possible but we all will go everybody gives a sigh of relief and smile and Rajiv dad tells that I long to eat your jalebi. Devki tells that no but I want to make Suman favorites. Shalakha is shocked and angry. Suman looks at Rajiv and Rajiv encourages her to say something and she reluctantly tells that my favorite also is jalebi and all everybody smiles and Rajiv dad tells all of them that saw Bahu ho tho aisi. Everybody laugh and Shalakha is jealous and angry.

Rajiv, Suman, his father, Ketki, Nani, Rajiv other kaki, Damini and her husband, Tanu and Shalakha come to Devki house and the door is opened and Rajiv dad calls out for Devki and see the hall will everything ransacked and they are shocked seeing it suddenly a box of jalebi is thrown at Rajiv dad feet and everybody is shocked seeing it and they are all puzzled. Devki is trying to snatch a photo frame and tells that this is my husband photo please give it to me and the goon tells to leave it and Rajiv tells Devki. Devki is shocked and comes to him and tells that today morning, these people came to my house and showed me some papers and told me to get out of the house and they aren't giving me my husband frame and she turns to the goon and tells that please give my husband photo frame. Goon tells no I wont and Rajiv dad tells that to give the photo frame what harm will it do and he tells him to give it to him and the goon tells him what you got to do? Who are you and tells him to not to interfere old man and is about to hit him. He raises his hand and then a hand stops him and the goon turns behind. It is Rajiv and tells that that man is her brother and I am the son and he snatches the photo frame from the goon and passes to Damini kaki husband and tells him this is not the way to speak to my father and I will kill you if you touch him and Rajiv hits the goon and the goon falls down. Everybody is shocked and ends the serial with Rajiv angry face.

5th Feb update starts here.....

Rajiv is very angry and hit the goon hard that the goon falls down. How dare you and he is about to hit him more but his dad and his uncle stops him and Suman and dadi are shocked and Rajiv goes on kicking him when the lawyers comes. The lawyers tell how come all of you here? Rajiv dad tells the lawyers to stop all this? This is my sister's house.

One among the lawyers tells that it is too late coz your sister has taken a loan and she hasn't paid that loan. Rajiv uncle says fine that we pay the entire loan but please tells those people to leave the house. The lawyer says sorry sir it is too late. The last date has expired. The other lawyer tells that your real sister is in such a condition. Both the brothers are shocked and sad. Devki Bua is crying bitterly. She had no words to say. Rajiv and Suman are sad too. Rajiv uncle says fine.. Tell your men to stop the work. The lawyers tell the men to stop the work and go. Devki Bua is crying bitterly and Rajiv comes to Bua and tells that I want you to come to our house and stay. Ketki also tells yeah I want you to come there. Shalakha is angry hearing this and shocked too. Devki tell how can I come? If I go with you, my son will get angry. My son is coming tomorrow. Rajiv tells that we see that your son also stays with us. Damini tells that you will come and stay in our house. You will come wont you? Devki who is crying looks at her bothers and sees her brother smiling and she smiles and says yes.

It is nighttime and in Rajiv Suman bedroom, Rajiv is reading a book and Suman gives him a glass of milk. But Rajiv does not bother to even looks at her coz he is reading a novel. Suman looks at him and is in mood of playing pranks on Rajiv. She goes behind and puts of the lamp and room is full of darkness. Rajiv says what is this and puts of the light. And continues reading the book. Suman then snatches the book from Rajiv hands and tells let me see what are you reading with so much of interest. Rajiv is angry and looks at her with a stern face. Suman goes through all the pages and gives a sly smile to Rajiv and Rajiv demands Suman to give the book back to me. Suman is shocked and smiles and tells sorry and gives the book back and tells I am going. Rajiv continues reading the book. Suddenly there is part of a sari goes in Rajiv ear and Rajiv gets very angry and tells stop it and Suman is shocked and she feel sad and tells I am sorry and she turns her back to Rajiv. Rajiv looks at her and smiles and tells that I am not angry with you. I was teasing you. Suman smiles and tells I got scared for a moment. He tells Suman that you are my life. What ever you say, it will be fulfilled. No matter even if I have to lose my life for you. Suman is astonished and puts her hand near his mouth. Rajeev takes her hand and tells that I be with you by your side. But yeah one thing I don't like is dishonesty and cheating. Suman hears this and is shocked and Rajiv gives her a smile and tells goodnight. Suman reluctantly smiles and tells him goodnight and Rajiv goes to sleep on the sofa while Suman comes to the bed and tells that what will happen when you will come to know that your life has not been honest and has been cheating on you? What will happen then and Suman is sad.

It is morning and everybody is sitting in the hall. When Prakat comes inside the house and calls his mother. Suman is surprised to see him so is Rajiv dad, Rajiv, Ketki, Damini, Jignesh and his dad are also surprised to see him. He keeps calling his mother. Devki comes and is happy to see him. And tells Prakat and Prakat tells Devki c'mon ma come with me. You are not staying in this house. What do you think I can't afford a room for you to stay? You have remained one day over here in this five star house. We will give them the rent for that. All are astonished hearing this. Devki tells this is your Mama's house. Prakat tells so what there is no mama for me. How could you forget how badly they have treated you and how they have insulted you every time? Devki cries He tells her to come along with him and she does not have to stay here. Devki tells this my brother's house. Everybody stand and Rajiv dad tells Prakat we can understand your feeling but you have a right to stay here with us. Prakat tells his mother that you will have to choose between this family and me? How can you stay with strangers? And not come with me when I am your relation. Rajiv dad says it is your decision but Devki is staying in this house and not going to go anywhere. Prakat says fine you stay her and I am going and leaves and Devki cries bitterly and Rajiv comes and tells Bua don't worry. I promise you that I will get Prakat to come her. I feel he is right regarding his feelings. Rajiv then hugs Devki.

In Neela house, Chaitali comes and tells Mama and she comes in front of Neela and tells to take the sweets and Neela asks her what is the happiness of bring the sweets? Chaitali tells her that I have got the job and Neela is very happy and kisses her forehead and tells her that I am very happy for you. And Chaitali tells her not to worry. She gives her the sweets and tells her I am going and she is on her way to her room when her mobile rings and it is Adesh on the line. Chaitali tells that arey I was about to call and tell you the good news. I got the job. Adesh is very happy and congrats how come you got this job? He tells her that I will tell Suman bhabhi about the good news. Chaitali stops him and tells her that you know what tension we have gone through? Don't tell her regarding our problems simply at all she will be worried. I don't want to give her any tension. Adesh tells her when will I get the treat? Chaitali tells her that you are asking of treat. You can ask me anytime I will give it to you and how is your job going? Adesh tells that job is going on well. Chaitali tells that I have some work and chalo bye and cut the phone with a smile so does Adesh who keep smiling and blushing.

Jignesh is coming down from the stairs and is taking to a person and tells him for little, little things don't call me to the office. And goes and sits down. His dad is talking to Rajiv and tells that today we are going to meet the health minister and I know him personally. Rajiv I want you to study the report and mostly focus mostly on the technical aspects. Rajiv nods and studies while Jignesh is sad but he looks at his wife and gives a smile and Shalakha is full of anger and tells herself why only Rajiv is going for the meeting? Why not her Jignesh. Why only Rajiv and suddenly Rajiv dad gets a call and he is happy and tells yeah great. Today…no no we wont cancel the meeting. Fine and he cuts the phone everybody asks who had called. Rajiv dad says it was Samuel he is the distributor for MNC Company and he wants a joint venture with our company. Rajiv and his uncle say great news. Rajiv dad but there is a problem and he wants the meeting today. Rajiv uncle say today but it wont be possible and we have to meet the health minister. But Shalakha tells her that Jignesh will go. Rajiv dad says that no no he can't go. Shalakha is shocked and tells why bade papa why cant he go and she tells that even he can do it? Everybody is shocked and tensed and Damini is very happy to hear it. Shalakha forces Jignesh to say something and Jignesh tell that yeah I will do it and it is so easy. Rajiv dad tells that don't think it is easy it is very difficult and these MNC is very smart in dealing with things. Jignesh tells what do they know about our markets. I will be able to do it very easily. Rajiv dad say fine then get ready to go but before you go just read the report and Jignesh tells them that Rajiv bhaiya is there and wont you help me bhaiya. Rajiv says sure and says best of luck. Jignesh shows thumbs up sign to Rajiv and Shalakha is very happy. She tells Rajiv dad that her mother used to tell when ever you are going for a good work then you should see your face in the thali of milk. And she is so happy and she goes to the kitchen and brings the thali full of milk.

She comes to Jignesh with a smile and Jignesh points it out to Rajiv. Jignesh father tells that if you are giving the shagun first give it to Rajiv coz he is going and not Jignesh. Shalakha is shocked and tells why dad? Jignesh dad says that we have decided that I will go and meet the health minister while Rajiv will meet the American

delegate and Shalakha is shocked and goes to Rajiv with sad face. Rajiv comes in front of her and Shalakha is about to show him when the thali of milk falls from her hands. Everybody is shocked and Nani tells her what are you doing? They are going for an important meeting. This is a big upshagun. Damini says so why are you blaming Damini for it she hasn't done it deliberately. She tells Shalakha to go and take rest. Shalakha tells sorry and Rajiv says no problem. Shalakha says sorry ma I had done this deliberately coz Rajiv should not get the deal. I will see that this upshagun main kitna asar hai hai.

Suman is watching TV and Tanu comes and tells her that what are you watching the TV for? I need your help coz there is a college annual programme and the theme is tradition and i don't know how to dance dandiya? She asks Suman do you know how to dance dandiya? Suman says yeah I know and she tells her it is very easy I will teach you new steps. And she teaches her some steps and tells her that I have a cassette and we will dance and she puts the player on loud and dances with Tanu. Shalakha comes and puts off the player and tells that Suman don't you know Bade papa does not like loud music and Suman tells sorry. Rajiv dad comes and tells that this is a traditional music and I would also dance with you and starts dancing Shalakha is very angry. Ketki, Damini and Devki also come and start dancing. Shalakha gets angrier and then Jignesh dad comes along with Rajiv and sees everyone happy and Rajiv dad says what happened? Rajiv uncle says that both are being finalized. Everyone is happy and dancing and then a phone rings and Shalakha with anger picks up the phone and is shocked and puts of the music and tells bas. Everyone is quiet. Shalakha puts on the news and there is news reporter saying that a person has taken a pill from a pharmaceutical company and there is nothing in that capsule. Not only that the entire market, there is fraud in that medicine. Everybody is shocked and the serial ends...

Thanks for reading. and sorry for the late update. I was so engrossed in writing that i missed the show at 9pm. but dont worry i will write the update tommrow as soon as possible......

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kiah71 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks poo for the remaining part of the 1st week. we will wait for the 5th update. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah thanx a lot!! was looking forward to it!! 😊 No worries...take ur time 4 it...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnk u for the update 😃 😊 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx supi for the update......good work....keep it up 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful update poo and gr work. 👏 👏 👏 poo i feel very awkward in writting this. there is no doubt that your update are so good that we feel like watching serial but can u pls. make it more lovely by adding your special comments in it? that will make update more supurb.

if u don't like my suggestion accept my apology. i would love to do update but i m a bad writer. 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow....loved the way suman was teasing rajiv....but even i got scared that he loved her more than she unknowingly loves him.....so why on earth would he be angry at her when even he knows she's teasing him...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice update
excellent work 👏

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