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Posted: 18 years ago
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heres the update for 23rd-im writting it as i watch the repeat.this is the first time im ever writting one for anyting because i normally just read updates and posts. let me know what you think of my first update.

it starts off with the carpet being pulled and rajiv and suman fall. prem catches suman and rajiv hurts his foot or knee not sure which one. rajiv is in his room and he asks prem to take suman to some sunset bridge or something. suman does not want to go but rajiv insists.

prem takes suman and he takes her to get something to eat but she is thinking bout rajiv being hurt. prem keeps making hints to how rajiv got hurt- saying that accidents happen in these hotels. suman doesnt like it when he says that. he holds sumans hand saying that could i do something like that. suman says sorry for doubting him. prem is talking to himself saying that he will do anything to get suman even kill rajiv.

rajiv calls home and talks to his sister(dont no her name) and the evil sister in law (dont know her name either) listens in. she thnings that i have to tell choti maa or sje said badi maa not sure

sumans mum is talking to someone bought how her husband died. she asking the woman that what happened that shocked and worried him so much that he left me. the womans telling her to let it go and to live for her daughters.

prem and suman at the mountain place. prem is doing all the talking.sumans phone rings and its sumans mum. prem picks it up and talks to her and tells her that he is with suman cos he wanted to be with her.he is kind of horrible to her sayn "aapke sooe (needle-cant spell it in hindi) ek jakha par atak gehe hai". prem takes pictures of him and suman but some feels uncomfortable saying we shoud not be doing this. she says to prem that we shud leave now cos it getting dark.

sumans mum is thinking about what prem said to her and also has flashbacks of when he came to the house after sumans dad died. she realises that prem went to meet suman at her in laws.

prem and suman are in rajivs room. rajiv says thanks and asks prem bout his lover and when they are going to get married and prem says in 6 months. suman is shocked.

sumans mum calls her asking if prem came to meet her and suman explains that she does not know how he got there. rajiv takes the phone and sumans mum is talking saying i dont believe you and rajiv hears and her mum saves her by saying bout his accident. suman tries to get the phone from rajiv because he says "your daughter left me when i was hurt"- suman says "that you sent me and now you want sympathy when i didnt even want to go". rajiv grabs sumans hand when she tries to get the phone and prem gets all jealous.

all three are at some temple. prem sees a man making bhang(i hope i spelt it right).rajiv has some after prem persuades him. prem keeps of giving him glasses. i think he has 3 in total. but from the look on prems face i think he has put something in it.

the evil sister in law goes to her mother in law and says the rajiv is in an accident. they all get worried- and she says that it was not serious other wise suman would have not left him to go out. all the others get mad and ask why did suman do that. they are about to call suman when the sister in law says i already called saying take care of her.

rajiv is high on bhung and all happy- acts a bit dissoriented. they take him back to the hotel room and prem puts him to bed. prem goes to suman and says now we can spend time together. prem says to suman since rajiv is asleep we should go to my room. suman tells prem to leave and go to his room because she wants to rest. prem doesnt like her answer so he walks towards her.suman is against the wall. prem puts his arms on the wall, with suman against it and says "come into my arms." rajiv is half awake(well his eyes are open a little. suman is scared. prem puts his hands on sumans face and she looks like she about to cry.it ends on prems face and he looks determined. end of episode.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great update.... 👏 i think suman will slap him.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good update.......u hav done a good work.... 👏 👏


anyways i cudnt hav done tht bcos no video is posted
Edited by rish_withluv - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice update tulip. u r a good writer. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi tulip. superb update on yr first try. 😊 👏. thanks......love to watch sathi re.....rocks.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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rajiv's two sister's names are tanu and rashi (married), brother is aadesh and dhanesh and sis in law's name is shalaka.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey good update...u did a good job for the first update... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice update n im beginnig to hate Prem he is such n idiot. i swear. tanks for the update 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks 4 da update,i cnt believe prem,he needs a gud slap!!xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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what if rajiv comes to know abt PS

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