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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Pollyanna



I will as soon as someone does the next part



C'mon nina. Give your best shot 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anondo.R



C'mon nina. Give your best shot 😛

😆

Doing now!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Pollyanna




Meera, I need to go out soon, I will be back a bit late this evening"

" DharAmji, you can't go anywhere today. I am really worried. I don't understand how Durgaji has come back from the dead, And she escaped before the police got here. She is still out there and can hurt you". Meera was in tears.

Dharam was puzzled himself but he needed to put Meera at ease before solving The mystery of Durga's return. He also wanted to make her birthday very special. Meera looked scared and he hated having to leave her but there were things he needed to arrange for the next day.

" I am sorry ! But I have an important meeting today and I have to go. " Meera was upset and tried to move away but he pulled her close to him and wiped her tears . Meera wouldn't look at him, he slowly lifted her chin up so she had to look into his eyes. Meera could see how much He cared for her, she couldn't be upset with her Dharamji for long. Despite everything she founded herself smiling .

She put her arms around his neck and stood on tiptoe and gently bit his earlobe and then she whispered something in his ears. Dharam was taken back but he couldn't stop grinning .

" Meera, you...,,,,,,,"




...are so naughty!

Still he managed to untangle himself from her passionate grip! Kissing her tenderly on her lips he left but not for the office as he had told her. instead he drove to the jewellers to choose a gift for meeras birthday. He had already purchased beautiful designer saris and countless other gifts for her but he wanted to buy her something unique and something Meera could pass on to their daughter.

Dharam was in no rush. He took his time at the store eventually selecting a beautiful diamond necklace and earrings. Pleased with his purchase he carefully walked back to his car. The day was burning hot and Dharam felt uncomfortable. Not just because of the stifling heat but also because of Durga. How could she just come back he wondered. She was dead. She had died in front of them. What the hell was going on? Dharam sat in his car absentmindedly and started the ignition. In the drivers mirror he noticed something stir behind him. Before he had the chance to look back a blade was pressing against his neck. Too scared to turn around he looked again into the mirror in front of him. It was
Durga. "Drive" she hissed.

Dharam put his foot on the pedal and started to move off. As they weaved through the traffic Dharams mind raced. He desperately tried to thing of a tactic to distract Durga. She obviously had lost her mind. She sat in silence knife still pressed to Dharams neck.

Dharam cleared his throat.

"So where are we going"?

"Take me to hotel paradise" Durga replied unemotionally.

Five minutes later they pulled up at the shabby motel. Dharam was aware it had been raised by the police a few times for drug and prostitution rackets.

"I don't want a fuss". Durga spoke again. "Come with me to room 202 if you put a step wrong or try to be clever I will have Meera killed. Understand"? Dharam nervously followed Durga up to the room.

The room was absolutely filthy. Half eaten food was left on the table, clothes were strewen across the unmade bed. The room stank and looked as if it hadn't been cleaned for weeks.

"Is this where you have been staying"? Dharam asked. Durga laughed. Where else can I go? I don't live in luxury like your other maharani wife.
She laughed bitterly. I bet you were happy you thought I was dead? You could be with HER. Did you think I set you free? I bet you are wondering how I am still alive. I will tell you. But you must promise me you will take me as your wife again. Otherwise your beloved Meera will die. I have the right to be Mrs Suryavanshi. Not that bitch". Dharam rose angrily. "Shut up and sit down" Durga shouted pushing him onto the bed. Dharam had never heard Durga use such foul language he had
Never seen her angry before. "You see weeks before Gaura maa shot me she had promised Me to give me back my rights. She wanted me to fool you and that marriage wrecker wife of yours that I would support your union. But all I want is to see Meera dead so I can have my husband back. Don't you understand I'm the one who truly loves you? Dharam sat stunned by what he was hearing. "So you and Gaura faked your death so you could get revenge? "exactly replied Durga. "maa went to prison. I had to hide from you. Waiting for the right time to carry out my plan. Now that time is here. Now I want you to put that beautiful jewellery on me. You will fill my maang with sindoor. Then you will kiss me Dharam or your wife will die. You will dance to my tunes now".



Edited by ninag - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Nina!, your update is fantastic. So Durga is back to get her rights and she is working with Gaura. We can bring Gaura back into the story now.
Edited by Pollyanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I will do my update tonight.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update Nina! Your storyline is way better than the rubbish the script writers of SNS were giving us. Look forward to reading your update soon Raji
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Nina it's awesome Durga came back for her right 😒as Raji suggested now we could also bring Gaura in it 😉waiting for ur update Raji
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks guys. Look forward to the next part Raji.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ninag




...are so naughty!

Still he managed to untangle himself from her passionate grip! Kissing her tenderly on her lips he left but not for the office as he had told her. instead he drove to the jewellers to choose a gift for meeras birthday. He had already purchased beautiful designer saris and countless other gifts for her but he wanted to buy her something unique and something Meera could pass on to their daughter.

Dharam was in no rush. He took his time at the store eventually selecting a beautiful diamond necklace and earrings. Pleased with his purchase he carefully walked back to his car. The day was burning hot and Dharam felt uncomfortable. Not just because of the stifling heat but also because of Durga. How could she just come back he wondered. She was dead. She had died in front of them. What the hell was going on? Dharam sat in his car absentmindedly and started the ignition. In the drivers mirror he noticed something stir behind him. Before he had the chance to look back a blade was pressing against his neck. Too scared to turn around he looked again into the mirror in front of him. It was
Durga. "Drive" she hissed.

Dharam put his foot on the pedal and started to move off. As they weaved through the traffic Dharams mind raced. He desperately tried to thing of a tactic to distract Durga. She obviously had lost her mind. She sat in silence knife still pressed to Dharams neck.

Dharam cleared his throat.

"So where are we going"?

"Take me to hotel paradise" Durga replied unemotionally.

Five minutes later they pulled up at the shabby motel. Dharam was aware it had been raised by the police a few times for drug and prostitution rackets.

"I don't want a fuss". Durga spoke again. "Come with me to room 202 if you put a step wrong or try to be clever I will have Meera killed. Understand"? Dharam nervously followed Durga up to the room.

The room was absolutely filthy. Half eaten food was left on the table, clothes were strewen across the unmade bed. The room stank and looked as if it hadn't been cleaned for weeks.

"Is this where you have been staying"? Dharam asked. Durga laughed. Where else can I go? I don't live in luxury like your other maharani wife.
She laughed bitterly. I bet you were happy you thought I was dead? You could be with HER. Did you think I set you free? I bet you are wondering how I am still alive. I will tell you. But you must promise me you will take me as your wife again. Otherwise your beloved Meera will die. I have the right to be Mrs Suryavanshi. Not that bitch". Dharam rose angrily. "Shut up and sit down" Durga shouted pushing him onto the bed. Dharam had never heard Durga use such foul language he had
Never seen her angry before. "You see weeks before Gaura maa shot me she had promised Me to give me back my rights. She wanted me to fool you and that marriage wrecker wife of yours that I would support your union. But all I want is to see Meera dead so I can have my husband back. Don't you understand I'm the one who truly loves you? Dharam sat stunned by what he was hearing. "So you and Gaura faked your death so you could get revenge? "exactly replied Durga. "maa went to prison. I had to hide from you. Waiting for the right time to carry out my plan. Now that time is here. Now I want you to put that beautiful jewellery on me. You will fill my maang with sindoor. Then you will kiss me Dharam or your wife will die. You will dance to my tunes now".





But friends I want to share something with you all .I can't even imagine that underlined sentences become true .That is such a horrific dream to me. Nina I am sorry .Don't think me wrong .I am not criticizes your script .But I can't see Dharam do such things on anyone's blackmail . I really loves your twists Nina but sorry both my heart and brain can't tolerate such things .I want to see him like Singham. . Jo bhi next part likh raha hai Plz if possible don't write some thing like that .Plz if you people make him brave and strong that will be good .I know everyone has that right to write what they like .But as a DhEera fan and friend of you I want to share my opinion with you all people .But If you want to write some thing like that I can understand .But don't think me wrong Friends .This is my request only not anything .
But If anyone hurts by my words plz forgive me .I am sorry 🤗.

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