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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: katrinasalman

Well, I have not watched any Pakistani movies but I want to make the theme different. So i brought gohem. I checked Parsa. It is little different from Lamhe but, one thing is sure that her daughter Momi, marries her mom's ex-fiance. In Lamhe, that was one sided love. In this FF, Dharam's love for Gopi is one-sided. I am planning to write it without killing any characters.



Hmm in parsa love of the lead n parsa's daughter become two sided eventually 😳
Gd luck ...#excited
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I know you guys had expected Tanya to play a double role like Sridevi did. In one of my ff, amar played a double role in my ff, undivided family. I intend to make this ff a original & a unique one without killing any characters.

Part 2

Dharam is happy for Gopi & inwardly says, "So what if I didn't get Gopi. Her happiness is my happiness."

He goes home. Gaura finds that Dharam is lost in his thoughts and is looking dull.
She asked, "Did you reveal about your feelings to Gopi?"
Dharam: I tried but I couldn't. She loves someone else.
Gaura is shocked but she comforts him. She asked,"Do you have any other girl in mind? If not I will find a girl for you."

Dharam: No mom, I cannot think about anyone else.


Meanwhile, Rashi had developed feelings for Dharam. Urmila and Jeetubhai takes Rashi's proposal to SV house. However Dharam said, "I know we have been family friends for many years but I 've not thought about Rashi as a life partner. I'm sorry. I won't be able to accept this proposal."

Jeetubhai: No problem. We can always be good friends.

Both take a leave.

Jigar and Rashi are family friends. Jeetubhai plan to send Rashi to London for further studies. Chirag too has a plan to send Jigar to London for the same purpose.

Jigar & Rashi meet daily & come close to each other.

One day

Jigar: I wanted to tell you something personal for many days. I can't control my feelings anymore. You are always in my thoughts and dreams. I love you. Will you marry me?

Rashi blushes: I love you too and I want to spend my entire life with you.

Ahem & Gopi go to the restaurant for lunch.

Gopi: I wish you had really come for my college annual day. I missed your presence.
Ahem: I very much wanted to come but I was held up in a meeting. Btw, who was the guy stretching his arms for you? He put them down as soon as you hugged me.
Gopi: I'm not aware of that. I only saw you. That's it. I don't have anyone in my life except you.
Ahem: I trust you dear, You didn't see him as you were focussing towards me but I saw him. I think he loves you. I feel sorry for him. But it isn't your fault. Anyone, who sees you would fall 4 you.

Gopi & Rashi complete their final year. Jigar & Rashi go to London for further studies as planned by their familes.

Ahem comes with Parag & Kokila to Jeetubhai's house with the proposal for Gopi. Jeetubhai & Urmila accepts their proposal. A month later, Ahem & Gopi get married to each other. Both go to London for their honeymoon. The background song is



Panchhi baadal premi ke paagal
Ham kaun hain saathiya
O yaad nahi bhuul gaya
Panchhi baadal premi ...
Hamako kisi ki bhi koi zaruurat nahi
Duniya mein is pyaar se kuch khuubasuurat nahi
Le jaae jaane hamein ye tej dhaara kahaan
Hamako to koi gam nahi duuba kinaara kahaan
Hai bahata paani ye zindagaani isaka bharosa hai kya
Panchhi baadal premi ...

Khoye rahen -2
Dhuundhe zamaana hamein ham yuun hi khoe rahen
A a a
Aramaanon ki sej pe din raat soe rahen
Aao zara aur bhi nazadiik ho jaaen ham
Ek duusare ki javaan baahon mein so jaaen ham
Sapane hi sapane biich mein apane koi nahi duusara
Panchhi baadal premi ...

2 years later, Jigar & Rashi complete their studies & return. Jigar joins the family business. Jigar & Rashi get married. Gopi is now carrying. Days pass by. It is time for Gopi for delivery. She wants Ahem's presence.

Ahem: I will come as soon as possible.

He kisses her forehead & leaves. Gopi is in Urmila's house for delivery. All are waiting for her but Ahem didn't return. His mobile number was unreachable. He was held captive by one of Dharam's ex-tenants.

Out of his vengeance, he had caused damage to Modi industries leaving Jigar jobless. Gopi undergoes the complications during her delivery. Finally, she delivers a girl child. However, she goes into depression thinking her Ahem is dead. Kokila, Parag, Urmila & Jeetubhai takes care of Gopi. Dharam accommodates Jigar in his house & business in London, taking Meera with them.



Gaura takes utmost care of Meera whereas Dharam avoids her.

Gaura: What is the matter? Meera craves for you but you are going as if you have not seen her.

5 Years passed by. Gopi is still under the impression that Ahem will come back. Ahem on the other hand is struggling to escape from the kidnappers to return home to see his Gopi and child. Gaura calls Dharam for the breakfast. She said,"All are having their breakfast. Why don't you have it with everyone?"
Dharam: I've got important work. I need to go.
Meera:Kunwarji please have something and go.
Dharam ignores Meera's words.
Meera cries. Gaura and Rashi pacify her.
Meera: I will not leave Dharam Kunwarji. When I become big I will marry him.


Gaura: Of course, I will get you married to Dharam kunwarji. He will definitely marry my little princess.

Ahem comes back escaping from the kidnappers. The cops arrests the kidnappers.

Kokila: Why did it take so much time to get this person arrested?
Insector: He is not an ordinary criminal. Years ago, he tried to capture Dharam's land illegally and he was imprisoned for 3 years. He wanted to take revenge from Jeetubhai so he had done this.

The court sentences 8 years rigourous imprisonment to those kidnappers.

Gopi recollects everything and comes to normal.
Ahem: Where is our daughter?
kokila tells him all that had happened during and after Gopi's delivery.

Dharam gets a call form Jeetubhai.
Jee: One good news. Meera's mom has recovered and her dad has come back.

The Modi family comes to Dharam's place to take Meera who is happy to see her parents. However, she said, "I like London very much. I want to study here."

Gaura: Meera is very much used to this environment. She will get better education here. You can come here whenever time permits you & come here for the business purpose.

Jigar & Rashi: Gaura is right.

Ahem & Gopi agree to let Meera do her studies in London.

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Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Dharam... Is he still in love with Gopi? Hmm... Let's see... Thank god they released Ahem...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Nice update loved it
Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
i loved dharam saying that Gopi's happiness is his happiness.Rashi having crush on dharam was a shock.but as expected dharam rejected.loved rashi falling 4 jigar.loved their confession.Gohem scene was nice.Ahem noticed dharam's luv 4 gopi,it was unexpected.loved ahem saying that anybody wud fall 4 gopi.Gohem n Raji r married.Gohem's honeymoon song was gud.Ahem's kidnap n gopi losing mental balance post delivery thinking that ahem is dead ,dharam helping jigar by taking raji abroad with meera as gopi is unstable were totally unexpected.y is dharam avoiding meera?meera saying cutely that she wants 2 marry dharam n gaura supporting her was cute.poor gaura doesnt know that meera wasnt joking,she is serious.ahem returned n kidnappers r caught by d cops n gopi has recovered,gohem united with meera.so happy.but meera wants 2 b in london.mayb she wants dharam's presence.do RaJi have kids?gud that u did'nt kill gohem unlike d movie lamhe.waiting 4 meera to grow up
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Wat??? Meera seperated from her parents even in this!!! 😭😭😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Very good update keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Jigar and Rashi Part was so Cute.😳
Ahem and Jigar Conversation was so Nice.😊
The Whole Part was so Nicely explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
wow excellent update loved it thank you for pm.

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