Youth Stars SS last part pg19 Gohem,RaJi,Viren Devoleena - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 7
Loved the new entry of Anita, she is his childhood buddy and looks like she is too clingy and this was needed. Viren telling Ahem abt Anita is too hot and he got another choice after Gopi. Ahem tells him to shut his mouth. Gopi is jealous seeing them together, loved Rashi trying to know whether she is feeling for him.Anita cannot understand anything and Ahem told her, he will make her understand. They both embarrassed each other, Gopi who entered the library seen this and got frustrated. Ahem was sad .Ahem tells Anita who is Gopi to him .I hope Anita brings Ahem and Gopi together by making each other realize their love.Gopi comes back and tells them that why are they are being so intimate, she calls Ahem a flirty. Anita teaches her a lesson that she rejected him and he can do whatever he wants as it's life nice move of Anita, loved it .
Valentines Day was nice as you showed the romance of Jigs and Rashi cutely he slipped on a ring to her finger which she loves.Vivaan and Paridhi excepted their love in front of everyone. Loved it .so cute .I just love the edit of Devo and Viren it's beautiful loved their romance loved Viren saying it's the day of love and he wants to love her so romantic, seeing Ahem and Anita getting close it couldn't be tolerated by Gopi. So nice.
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was beautiful ,when Ahem came and stood behind of Gopi and told her to confess her feelings ,she was numb and didn't had words to say as Ahem's love made her weak.He told her that Anita is just a friend .Finally Ahem made her to say that she loves him but isn't ready to marry him.Gopi tells him that once he learns abt hee family he won't accept her ,she left him and went. He caught her hand and he wanted her to fell the truth but she didn't say .loved the rain ,the song was perfect for this situation. All were wanting to know what had happened between them. Gopi, Viren, Jigar, Rashi all were questioning her and calling her rude which hurted her,she was in a delimma ,she finally told her feelings, they all said that his love is so deep that he can accept all her worries but she wasn't able to tell him as she was worried what will he say .she told everyone to keep it a secret. Waiting to know what's the secret?continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wondeful update dear...i loved gopi confession and ahem's care for her...though i felt a little ba when all the freinds shouted at gopi but yet it reveals their love for ahem...i loved it...waiting eagerly to know gopi's past...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting Update

Ahem tells Gopi that Anita is only his friend and he loves Gopi only
she after a while too confesses she loves him too but when he ask her to marry him she denies saying she does not deserve him as she does not even know who her parents are and shocks Ahem too
his friends defending him trying to make Gopi see that love has no place for anything else
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Posted: 9 years ago

Youth stars Part 9

Friends..I'm ending this SS.Thx a lot 4 supporting this SS.

Plz write ur favourite scene,favourite character n favourite jodi.



The next day in College...
Gopi does'nt look at Ahem.But Ahem's eye balls are always rolling on Gopi.

Ahem is in the canteen.He is only looking at the juice.He is not drinking it.Anita comes and sits there:I thought my childhood friend Ahem is very smart.But you are not.Why did you leave Gopi even after knowing that she loves you?Just to be another Devdas?Go and get her back man.
Ahem stares at her.
Anita:Instead of wasting time like a loser go man.Get her back.

Ahem goes to the classroom.He sees Gopi reading something.He and grabs Gopi's hand.
Gopi:What are you doing?
He keeps her closer to the wall.He stands very close to her.
GOPI:Ahem!
AHEM:You thought i will leave you alone?Never.Because you are my life.You are my breath.I will go mad if i lose you.So don't avoid me like this Gopi.I love you so much that i can't lose you.
Gopi's eyes are full of tears.It looks as if her eyes are adorned with pearls.
GOPI:But you will hate me if you know who i am.You will hate me Ahem.If you hate me...no..i can't bear that pain.
AHEM:How did you think that i will hate you?You don't trust me.You have no faith in me.You are disgusting Gopi.
He leaves her and walks forward.He holds his hand.
He looks at her.
GOPI:You want to know who i am?I am a bas***d.I don't know to which family i belong to.I dont know anything about my origin.
Ahem is shocked:What..?
Gopi's tears fall down like rain drops.
GOPI: I'm the adopted daughter of a sweet couple.They love me like their own daughter.They don't differentiate between me and my sister.My sister also loves me a lot.But everyone else hates me.Because...i'm a...
AHEM:Don't use that word Gopi.It does'nt suit you.You have lovely parents.Then why do you say that you don't know anything about your family?I'm angry with you for thinking like that.
GOPI:But in the eyes of society..
AHEM:Forget about the society.Your parents and sister love you.They don't care about what society says.Even i don't care about what you are in the eyes of society.For me you are an Angel.I don't care about your origin.
Gopi can't believe it:Ahem!
AHEM:Gopi...for the first time i have fallen in love.That is with you Gopi.For the last time i have fallen in love.That is with you Gopi.You are my first and last love.For me love is you Gopi.

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.

Tears dwelled in Gopi's eyes.She surrenders to his arms.

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.

Gopi:Ahem...I never thought you will accept me after knowing who I am.

Ahem:Because I love you Gopi and you are a gem.

Dil ne kaisi harkat ki ha
Ahem wipes her tears.Both of them smile.
GOPI:I love you Ahem.I want you always.

Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai,


His eyes touch her eyes.She becomes shy.Her eyes are fluttering.
Their heart's romantic music is flowing out through their lovely eyes.


'Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai..'{Kaminey}.

Their friends clap their hands.Ahem and Gopi are shy.

Anita,Jigar Rashi and Viren-Devoleena come smiling seeing Ahem Gopi in each other's arms.Seeing them Ahem Gopi become embarrassed and they move away from each other.
Viren:Why did you guys stop it?
Ahem-Gopi are shy.
Viren:Are you that shy in front of us ?Then see what we are going to do.
Viren pulled Devoleena closer.Devo said in a naughty manner:Smooch..


Jigar took Rashi in his arms.Seeing them romance Ahem Gopi's shyness disappeared and they got engrossed in a romantic embrace.
After a few days...



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Posted: 9 years ago
Gopi reaches home.Suddenly a girl came:Surprise!
Gopi is surpised:Radha!When did you reach?
Radha:I came 2 hours back from UP.
G:Yesterday also we talked a lot.Still you did'nt give me a hint that you are reaching here.
Radha:If I had told you that I'm coming today on vacation how would I surprise you?By the way how can I tell you something on the phone?You are always busy talking to me about your sweet heart Ahem.
Gopi blushes.
Radha:Hearing ahem's name itself you are blushing.
G:Radha...stop teasing me.You have not changed a bit even after going to another state.
Radha:But you have changed after falling in love with Ahem.You look very romantic.
Gopi becones shy:Stop it Radha.
Radha laughed.
Radha:By the way what do our parents tell you about this relation?
Gopi:I told them about Ahem.They want to meet him.
Radha:Don't be nervous.I am sure that when they meet Ahem immediately they will make him my Ahem Jeeju.
Gopi smile.They both hug.



Gopi brings Ahem home.Madhu and Jayanti look at him with confusion.
Gopi blushes:Papa mumma...this is Ahem Modi about whom I told you.
They becae serious.
Ahem:Namaste Uncle and aunty.
He touched their feet.They touch his head.
Gopi:I will bring coffee for all of you.
Gopi goes inside.
Ahem:Uncle and aunty...I love Gopi and i want to marry her after I get a job completing our studies.
Jayanti:I am impressed with your behaviour beta.But before we conclude we want to tell you an important thing about Gopi.We feel very painful to tell you that.But I don't want you to break our Gopi dikra's heart just before the wedding or after wedding.That's why now itself I am telling you the secret.Gopi is...

Ahem: Gopi is not your own daughter by birth,but relationship wise she is your dearest daughter.Right?
Jayanti and Madhu were shocked.
J:You knew it?
Ah:Yes.Gopi had told me everything and still I love her.In fact I don't think that's a reason to leave her.
They r surprised.
Madhu:But will your parents agree?

Ahem smiles:My parents are also happy with my decision.
Jayanti and Madhu smile emotionally,
Madhu:You are my Gopi's luck.
Jayanti hugs Ahem:Our Gopi won't get a guy better than you.
Ahem smiles.Gopi who comes back with coffee smiles happily seeing how Ahem is bonding with her parents.
Radha came:Hi...sorry..I became late in coming.I had gone for shopping.
Ahem is confused seeing her.
Radha:I am none other than Gopi di's little sister..your going to be sister in law.
Ahem smiles:I did'nt know that i have a bubbly sister in law.I am so happy to meet you.
Radha:I am also excited to meet you Ahem jeeju.I can't wait for you to become my jeeju.
Ahem:Same to you my dear saali.
They both hug.They all smile happily.

Gopi introduces Radha to her friends and Radha becomes closer to them and Radha too became a part of their gang.They start hanging out and enjoying.








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Posted: 9 years ago
Final year classes get over.They give final exams.After studies Ahem's parents Kokila and Parag come with Shagun to Gopi's house.
Kokila:I loved Gopi a lot and I can't wait to take her home.

Gopi as well as others smile.
Koki:We will fix the engagement date.
Ahem:Mom...dad...we friends have decided that we all will get engaged on the same day in the same place.
They all smile.
Kokila:It's good to see such friendships in today's society.
Parag:Right.Ok we will fix the engagement date according to their convenience.

They all smile.

Engagement day...
Rashi dresses in saree according to Jigar's wish and Gopi wears traditional attire according to Kokila's wish.Jigar and Ahem wear sharwani.




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Posted: 9 years ago
Devoleena and Viren wear western clothes as they wish to wear them for their engagement.

Paridhi and Vivaan come together.
Jigar:Wow..Pari and Vivaan!You both were in a secret relationship.How did you both decide to make your relayionship public?
Paridhi and Vivaan smiled.
P:Finally papa has agreed for our marriage.
Vivaan:And very soon we are going to get engaged.

Jigar:I am so happy for both of you.
Rashi:Me too.
Pari:You are looking so pretty Rashi.You have to be beautiful as you are Jigs' sweet heart.
Rashi blushes.
Radha hugs Ahem and Gopi.
Radha:You both are a perfect jodi.I am so happy that finally you both are going to be one.

Ahem-Gopi smiled at each other.

All the couples get engaged on the same place at the same time as they wish.

The End
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome beautiful ending
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the late response.
Ahem ready to marry Gopi despite knowing that she is illegitimate.
That is the great thing. It is not her fault.
Both the families agreed for Gohem wedding.
All the engagement took place on the same day & same time.

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