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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ___PARI___
I read both the part 2-3that was awesome👏 keep going 😳updated soon,plz pm me when u updated.😛

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ___PARI___
I read both the part 2-3that was awesome👏 keep going 😳updated soon,plz pm me when u updated.😛

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2nd and 3rd party are awesome

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kavita

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Part 4

Ahem: Thanks Gopi! Now I understand why people are not as close to me as they are to Jigar.
He shares about his personal life with Gopi.

Gopi: I'm sorry to hear that. But life has to go on. You should not allow anything to ruin your happiness.

Ahem: I know and will try my best.

Gopi: Nothing is impossible. Leave all your worries & stress to Kanhaji. He will take care.

Ahem: From now on, I will do that.

Meanwhile Jigar & Rashi have a casual talk.

Jigar: You look good smiling.

Rashi: Thanks. You too look good.

Jigar: Will you have some tea or coffee?

Rashi: Sure! But even you should have.

Even Ahem and Gopi decide to have some snacks. Both go to Jigar's cabin.

Ahem: Shall we have some snacks as well?

Jigar: Sure!

They spend quality time. Then Ahem and Jigar drop Gopi and Rashi to their place.

Rashi is happy.

Urmila: How was your day?
Rashi: Fine! Do you know that Jigar dropped me here.
Urmila: Yes and that is a good beginning. Try to know about his life.
Rashi: I will tell you if I see something.
Urmila: Create such a situation for him so you will get the right answer.

At MM
Ahem comes home smiling. All are surprised and happy.
Kokila: After a long time, I could see this smile on your face. What is the matter?
Ahem: Nothing special. My new manager cracked 90 billion deal.
The entire family is happy. Kokila blesses him. Ahem goes to his room and thinks about how could he share about his life with Gopi. She is a new joinee. Is anything happening to me? No, I don't want to love again. It has only given me pain. It took away all my happiness but I have to keep her words in my mind.

He goes to the temple and asks for Kanhaji to guide him and show him the right path. Kokila had found something more in his smile and wonders there could be some special reason as to why Ahem is happy. Deals always crack. I need to find out. She decides to surprise him.

At the workplace
Rashi overhears Jigar saying my girlfriend Purvi... Rashi wonders who is that Purvi. She gets the clue about their relationship and gets to know that she doubts him and gives him hard times. Purvi is actually his cousin sister but a distant relative. She is very forward who freaks around but is possessive about Jigar.

At the end of the day both submit their report. Jigar looked upset about Purvi's behavior.

Jigar and Rashi discuss about the office schedule and routine. That was the task assigned to her after everyone else leaves.

Purvi enters Jigar's cabin and misbehaves with Rashi. Both of them fight and argue. Then a loud voice is heard. STOP IT. It was Jigar.

Rashi got upset tears started rolling out of her eyes. Jigar gives her a tissue paper and apologizes to her for Purvi's behavior.

Jigar: I will speak to you later.

Rashi leaves.

Jigar and Purvi have a verbal fight. Ahem comes out and confronts Purvi to leave as it is an office. He also blasts Jigar after Purvi left.

He tells Gopi about Purvi coming often and creating a nuisance in the office who tells him to keep his cool and giving him a glass of water. He then drops Gopi to her place and goes home.

At MM
Ahem apologizes to Jigar for blasting him.

Jigar: Its ok. As an elder brother and a Managing Director, you have every right to scold me.

Ahem: I scolded you though it is not your fault. I understand that she is related to us. She can come to the office but tell her to behave accordingly.

Jigar: She only comes to check me what I do. I am fed up. I was discussing with Rashi about the office schedule and she misbehaved with her.

Ahem: Why don't you spend time with her? Take her out for lunch or dinner. I was spending time with Anita in USA during my college days but my marriage with her didn't work out. I never knew about her intentions. She has been double-crossing me and I didn't get any clue. As an elder brother, I advise you don't take any hasty decisions. Ring up Rashi now and ask her how she is feeling.

Urmila Mansion
Rashi is crying.

Urmila: What happened now? why are you crying.

Rashi: I got to know about Jigar, he has a girl-friend. Her name is Purvi.

Urmila: Purvi! Yes, I know her very well. She is related to the Modis and is after Jigar.

Rashi: I heard him saying "My girl friend Purvi" over the phone.

Urmila: No that can't be. I don't think he really loves her. We should do something to break their relationship.

Rashi: When she was abusing me, Jigar supported me.

Urmila: That is a good sign.

Rashi: So this is the reason why you told me to find out. It all happened by itself. I got the information effortlessly.

Urmila: That is much better.

Rashi: Hope even this relationship breaks without our efforts.

Urmila: Don't expect things to happen. You should make them happen. I have a plan.

Rashi's phone rings. It is Jigar's call.

Jigar: Are you alright now?

Rashi: Yes but I want to tell you something.

Jigar: Tell me.

Rashi: You told me everything about yourself. We have studied in the same college in USA but you were senior to me and Gopi. But our timings were different. You told me everything about yourself in the cabin but you didn't tell me that you have a girl-friend. I only heard over the phone and it was casual.

Jigar: No dear, she is not my girl-friend. She is my cousin sister. She is our distant relative.

Rashi: But you love her.

Jigar: No, I don't love her but she loves me. I don't want to marry till I establish myself in business. But she wants to marry me immediately. She wants to have a physical relationship with me and she seduces me but I don't budge to it.

Rashi: But what about girlfriend you were mentioning?

Jigar: I was talking to my classmate over the phone and he was pulling my leg. I said it for fun. I will see you tomorrow. Bye & Good night.

Rashi: Bye and kisses her phone.

Jigar blushes

Rashi calls her mother.

Urmila: What happened now?

Rashi: Jigar called me up. He told me that he does not love Purvi.

Urmila: That's good news but we have to focus on make Jigar free from that chudail.

Kokila starts searching a girl for Ahem. She tells Panditji I want a DIL who will listen to me. Pandit shows her the girls who had asked for the groom but she is not satisfied.

Kokila: I want someone who does not talk much. But you are showing me a wrong girl.

She then decides to come to Modi industries for a casual visit.

Modi family decides to conduct a Gokul Ashtami Pooja in the office. People are seen working and things are smooth. Kokila sees Gopi and gets impressed. She then recollects as to why he is happy these days. She says to herself, "Yes that is the girl I am looking for. She is the one who brought back the lost smile in his face. Though she is highly educated, she is different from others. She is quite modest. I think he has fallen for her and has made a right choice."

Gopi had made sweets from home and she distributes them to everyone. Kokila too tasted it and she liked it.

Kokila: You have prepared a nice dish.
Gopi: Thankyou Aunty.
Kokila: Don't call me aunty. You can call me by my name. I know it is the tendency but aunty is only called to the relatives. My name is Kokila.
Gopi: Kokilaji.

Ahem realizes that he has developed feelings for Gopi.

Days pass by. Ahem calls Gopi in the cabin.

Ahem: Good job. The management has decided to promote you as a CEO.

Rashi too gets the promotion as a Vice President.

Next Day

Gopi comes by rickshaw to the office. It was getting late that day. She reaches on time. Auto rickshaw stops. She has 500 rupee not and does not have a change. Auto Rickshaw fellow also does not have a change. She asks at all the places for the change. Ahem sees her.

Ahem: What is the matter.

Gopi: I don't have change. I have 500 rupee not.

Ahem gives the money to the rickshaw wallah but shouts at her for asking the change from the strangers.

Ahem: If you don't have change, come to the office and ask. Anyone of us will give.

Gopi feels bad and starts crying in private i.e during lunch time. Ahem too feels bad for shouting at her and gives her a tissue paper.

Ahem: I am sorry for shouting at you. Those people are not good. Most of them are drunkards so I told you that if you want something please ask us. We do this for Rashi too. Don't feel shy.

Gopi: Usually, I don't come by rickshaw. I come by walk. This is the first time.

Ahem: That is fine but henceforth you should do that.

At the end of the day, Ahem feels this is the right time to speak to Gopi.

In comes Gopi.

Ahem: I want to tell you something important.

Gopi: What?

Ahem: I don't know how to start but I want to ask you one thing.
Gopi: Yes, tell me.
Ahem: What do you think about love and marriage?
Gopi: Love is Kanhaji's gift. It is the innermost feelings of a person. Marriage is a sacred relationship between man and and woman.
Ahem: After my divorce I began to think Love is a bs and is a time waste. But you have given me a hope. You restored my smile. You have always stood by me and have solved the most complicated problems. When I was angry at Purvi incident, you have not let me lose my cool. I had those feelings for you from the time you have joined us but I didn't want to love again. I had suppressed my feelings. I want to spend my life with you. Will you be my wife? Will you marry me?

Gopi is shocked.

Gopi: Are you telling me to be your wife?
Ahem: What is wrong in that? I know you have the same feelings for me as I do.
Gopi: I'm a poor and a simple girl and you are very rich. Don't show me those dreams.
Ahem: You are not poor. You are rich at heart. Your inner beauty has captured my heart.

Hearing this, Gopi runs away. She starts avoiding him from the next day. She too has been suppressing her feelings.

At Modi Mansion

Kokila: Son, I want to tell you something important. It is about your life.
Ahem: Before you start I want to tell you something. If it is about my marriage, I'm not interested.
Kokila: What about Gopi?
Ahem is shocked. He starts wondering how does my mom know that I love her?
Kokila: I could figure it out when I saw your changed behavior. I have been observing you for many days. It was my decision to conduct Puja in the office so that I can see her. You have made a right choice.
Ahem: I proposed to her and because of that she is now avoiding me.
Kokila: Call her to the cabin and speak to her. I will give one more visit tomorrow. I will be preparing the food in the office.
Ahem: As you wish.

Workplace
Things are going smoothly.

Receptionist: Gopi, Ahem's mom has come. She wants to talk to you.
Gopi is reluctant but she goes to Ahem's cabin. They hold her till everybody leaves.

Kokila: I called you because I want to talk to you something important.
Gopi: I know what is it. Ahem told me that but I won't be able to accept as I have a lot of responsibilities.

Kokila: You are not different from us as all of you are working together.
Ahem: I have shared about my personal life with you. It is an open book but you have not told me anything. What is your responsibility?

Gopi: My mother and sister. My mother is not keeping well. Radha is too young. She has to concentrate on her studies and other activities. She does little work but I take the entire burden. My mother is in a mental shock from the time she heard the death about my father. I need to treat my mother, educate my sister and pay off the education loans. I have been taking tuition for children upto 10th standard, doing embroidery and tailoring work along with my studies and extra activities. My uncle took care of them after I left for US. I need to repay him.

Ahem: Why didn't you tell me this before. You should have told me at least when I proposed to you. I love you. Your priorities are my priorities.

Kokila: Yes, Ahem is right. We will take care of everything. You can help him in his business after you enter our house as my DIL. What happened to your father?

Gopi: My father had gone to Saudi Arabia for job purpose. He has not been in touch with us for long. After we got a news about his death, my mother lost her mental balance. She is not able to recognize anybody. She lost her memories. I can't marry till my mom gets well.

Ahem: I can understand. Btw, where was he working.

Gopi: He was working in Deltas Ltd in Jeddah.

Ahem: We are going to meet the client at the same place for business purpose. So we can get some information there.

Kokila; When you are going let Gopi and Rashi come with you.

Ahem: They are coming with us as we have promoted them and given them more responsibilities.

Kokila: What does the doctor say about your mother's condition?

Gopi: He says try to do similar things so that she will remember everything. She has not fully recovered. She believes that dad is alive and will come one day.

Kokila: Then chances are there for her to recover if your dad is alive and if you succeed in bringing him back.

Part 5 coming up

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago

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Pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

That was Superb update,Ahem propose Gopi for marriage that was awesome 😛Keep it up😃 updated soon Thanku for pm😳

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 5

Ahem informs Jigar and the family about his decision to go ahead with Gopi. He tells the family about meeting the client at Jeddah at the earliest as Gopi's dad can be traced. He tells them about her condition. Everyone in the family offer their support to him. He calls up to the client for the earliest appointment and gets it within 2 days.

Ahem: We have to meet the client day after tomorrow.

Kokila: Start your packing at the earliest.

All start packing their belongings. Rashi and Gopi too packed their belongings.

Jeetu: If you get any information about your dad, please tell me.

Gopi: I will.

Madhu: I will also come. I want to see him

Gopi: You need to take rest. I will inform you about dad. Please pray that he is alive.

Jeetu: Gopi is right. It may take some time as they are going out for business purpose. They will search for your husband on the way.

Madhu: Ok.

All go to the airport to catch the flight. As soon as they get into the plane, Ahem and Gopi sat together. Jigar sat next to Rashi.

Jigar: I want to ask you one thing which I couldn't because Purvi was around.

Rashi: Tell me

Jigar. I heard the kissing smack after we talked over the phone. Was if for fun or did you kiss me seriously?

Rashi: To be honest, I was serious. If you have felt bad, I'm sorry. I don't know what is going on in your mind and your feelings for Purvi.

Jigar: No need to be sorry. It is fine with me. I don't love Purvi. It is true that her parents had brought the proposal at my place. No one likes her but at the same time my parents cannot refuse. I accepted the same as I don't want to hurt them.

Rashi: You should tell your parents about it as you are their only son & they want the best for you. They will understand your feelings.

Jigar: You are right. I will tell them.

Rashi: Do you have any other girl in your mind?

Jigar: Yes

Rashi: Who is the lucky girl?

Jigar: It is you.

Rashi is happy.

Jigar: I liked you from the time you joined us but I was shy & Purvi has been blackmailing me. Her father has been favoring us whenever we needed loans for business. If her mom tells her husband to stop our loans, we will get doomed. I'm able to talk to you freely as I will be away from her at least for few days. Once we come back, I will talk to my mom.

Rashi: Fine.

The flight takes off. All of them reach Saudi. Ahem informs the client about their arrival. Kokila comes to Saudi taking the next flight. They are in the hotel room. Ahem asks the receptionist about Jayanthi's company & gets the details. All of them go for sight seeing & spend good amount of time there. All of them went with their heads covered.

Next day they reach the clients place. Gopi shows the presentation. Modis get the project. From there, all of them go to Jeddah in search of Jayanthibhai. The Modis find that many Indians are captured there & are tortured when they protest against terrorism & drugs supply after they complete one year. If they want to leave, they have to pay the huge amount to get their passport & they don't have money.

They were locked inside the room & it was difficult to trace Gopi's dad. All of them spread to different places. Gopi finally finds her dad. He is happy to see her. Gopi informs everyone that she found her dad. All of them come to that spot.

Gopi hugs her dad.

Gopi: Thank God, you are alive.

Jayantibhai: What happened? How is Madhu?

Gopi: She is not fine. Someone gave her the information that you are dead. She lost her mental balance. She is waiting for you. She tells daily that you will come.

Jayanthibhai feels guilty for leaving the family.

Jayanthibhai: I was unable to reach out to you people because they extended our contract. They seized our mobile phones when we refused to use the computer for the wrong cause. They have kept us captive. I don't even have money to give them to get out of this contract.

Ahem: Whatever is the amount we will give.

Jayanthibhai: It is 15 lakhs (According to Saudi currency).

Kokila and Chirag tells them they might be upto some tricks. We need to take some safety measures. They contact the clergy and ask for help. All of them came to that spot. Ahem meets Jayanthibhai's boss and hands them the cash. When he refuses to release Jayanthibhai, the clergy seized him and gave him a rigorous imprisonment. They returned Jayanthibhai's passport.
Jayanthibhai is rescued.

Part 6 coming up

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago

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Tanika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

All parts are too good. Just loved it. Purane din yaad aa gaye rashi ke😃

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grao

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Very nice Kavitha... Keep it up...😃

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Part 6

Jayantibhai checks the passport expiry date. Luckily, time was still there for the passport to expire and there were enough blank pages.

Jayantibhai: thanks for saving me.

Ahem: Welcome.

Jayantibhai: I don't know how to repay you. You helped me though you don't know me.

Chirag:Your daughter Gopi is working with us. As soon as we came to know about it, we got our appointment preponed from the client.

Jayantibhai: Thank you once again.

Kokila: You don't have to thank us. You are safe. That is enough for us.

Jayantibhai: Why did you take so much trouble for me?

Ahem: It is not a trouble for me. I did it for Gopi, her mom and myself. I want to marry your daughter. So I consider you as my father.

Jayantibhai is happy.

Gopi: Mom is waiting for you so we have to make a move now.

All of them go to the airport and catch the flight to India. They reach home. Madhu sees her husband and is elated. She starts recollecting everything and gets her memory back. She recognizes everyone.

Kokila and Ahem put the proposal before her parents. Ahem then kneels doen before Gopi with the ring and proposal. Her family accepts it.

Kokila: We are now taking leave. Now we have to do a lot of preparations.

At MM

Jigar tells his parents about Purvi's behavior and he doesn't want to marry her. Ahem and Kokila back him. He also tells them about his liking for Rashi.

Hetal: It is a good that you told me. We too don't like her.

Chirag: We have to look for another bank to apply for the loan because we cannot expect anything fron Purvi's dad. Nothing is as important as our sons happiness.

Rashi tells Urmila about herself and Jigar. She also tells about Jigar's condition.

Urmila: So that is the condition. I know a financer. He will definitely help.

Rashi: Let the Modi family come here with the proposal. After that we will tell them.

Jeetubhai gets the news about his BIL's return and is happy that Madhu recovered.

Hetal and Chirag goes to Purvi's place and reject their proposal. Her father gets to know about her behavior and apologizes to them but her mother began to throw tantrums.

The Modis decide to conduct both the engagement and marriage on the same date.

Jigar calls Rashi and gives her the good news. Everyone goes to Rashi's place and brings the proposal. Shah family accepts it happily.

Gohem RaJi engagement within 2 days and marriage is within 15 days.

Part 7 coming up

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago