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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -GiNa-

woohoo great beinging Alina... 👏

dear u remind me old good days of Dil Mill Gaye.. Love to read ur first update... All character are sounds super kool.. Especially Ahem love to see Ahem naughty acts 😳 😆 plz pm me when post next update... 😊



Thanks for Loving it Dear.:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ff:PainKiller! Episode 2 (Patients yaa Patience???)


Epi starts with all interns following Dr.Kirti and suddenly Ahem's phone rings and Dr.Kirti stops and Ahem puts phone in Dhaval's pocket and Gopi notices this and gives a jaw dropping expression.Dr.Kirti turns and stares at Dhaval and Dhaval is smiling as he is confident that it is not his phone but suddenly notices something fishy and puts his hand in pocket and takes out phone and is shocked Dr.Kirti says"Dr.Dhaval you know na i don't like phones with dictors during there duty timings!" Dhaval says"No mam I mean yes mam I mean Sorry mam!"Kirti says ok!"

Suddenly announcement is heard"Dr.Kirti please come to casuality its emergency!" She leaves telling interns that she will be back in 2 mins!

As soon as Kirti leaves and Gopi says"Ahem Why did you put your phone in Dhaval's pocket?"
Ahem says"why are you crying I was just joking!" Gopi says"I am not crying and you were not crying you just saved yourself by putting your cell in Dhaval's pocket!" Dhaval is shocked and he says"Achaw this is your phone!" Dhaval returns the phone to ahem and Gopi again says"Why did you wink at me?" Ahem says"Wink when?" Gopi says when Dr.Kirti was giving pagers! Ahem gives a confused look and says"Oh then actually something went in my eye that time!" Gopi says you are lying you were winking as you were smiling at that time!" Ahem says"Oh please stop it why are you crying again...Kidco!"
Gopi says"Kidco??? Don't you dare to call me that!" Ahem says"You are kidco bcoz you keep on crying on little little things!" Gopi says"I don't cry!" Falak comes in between and says"Guys stop it Dr.Kirti is coming!"
Dr.Kirti comes and Jigar passes a flying kiss to Rashi and she gets irritated. Dr.Kirti assigns interns their duties and it is as follow:

"Dr.Ahem and Dr.Gopi you will be in Accident and Emergency department(Casuality)!" Gopi thinks"Noo not with him!" Ahem thinks"Oh it will be fun duty with Kidco!"

"Dr.Jigar and Dr.Rashi you will be in General ward!" Rashi thinks"Oh no with this cheapster!"Jigar smirks!

"Dr.Falak your duty will be in I.C.U no.34 and 35!" Falak smiles and nods."

"Dr.Kinjal and Dr.Dhawal you will be in Urology unit!" Dhawal says"Urology unit??" Kirti says"Yes Dr Urology Unit in which patients are admitted with urine related diseases is known as urology ward!" Dr.Dhawal says"I know that Dr.Kirti." Kirti says"good... But for what are you waiting? Christmas? go on your duties!... and yes i will come on round in 3 hours and i want you all to keep ready patients current status and treatments ready ok?" They all nod and leave.

In Locker room:


Rashi is in the room and Gopi enters and she says"Rashiben..." but Rashi completely ignores he and Gopi comes closer to Rashi and says"Rashiben Why are you ignoring me? I am noticing this since morning!" Rashi snaps and says"Don't you dare to call me ben I am not your sister and please stay away from me!" Gopi says"Rashiben why are you bringing that years before issue between us?" Rashi yells"Gopi leave me alone!" Gopi turns sad and here Ahem who was listening to all this thinks"Why kidco is calling Rashi. ben? and about which years before incident is Kidco talking about " Ahem leaves and meets Gopi in corridoor and asks"Hey Kidco about which years before issue you were talking with Rashi?" Gopi is shocked and says"Ahem how mean you were secretly listening someones conversation " Ahem says"Not someone's Kidco's !" Gopi says"whatever it is none of your business!"Gopi leaves and Ahem says "Oooh attitude that to with Dr.Ahem! Nice going Kidco "

All interns are in corridoor when falak sees Intern of the Month board and shows it to others and Gopi sayd"wow How it will feel when Dr.Shashank Gupta will announce Intern of the month and He or She will be get a chance to assist Dr.Shashank in one surgery! I will try my best!" Ahem says"Dream On Kidco only I will be Intern of The Month this month." Gopi says"Oh mr.cool Ahem for that you will have to work hard and you can show that by your actions not words!" Ahem says"We will se!" Gopi says"we will see!"Jigar thinks"Oh God who is onterested in this IOTM stuff!" Rashi is listening this and she thinks"These both idiots will keep on fighting and only I will take away the title alongwith chance to assist Dr.Shashank." Kinjal thinks"Kahnaji please help me in my work so I can also compete in this IOTM competition!"

All interns leave for their duties.

In General Ward:

Rashi and Jigar enter and Jigar thinks"Now see Dr.Rashi how I irritate you you called me cheapster na?"
Rashi starts checking patients and one patient tells Rashi that he has severe stomach pain and she says"Ok i am checking!" Jigar says"Dr.Rashi I think he has acidity!" Rashi is again irritated and says"How can he get acidity when he is in hosital and he is having hospital food which is. a balance diet." Jigar says"Lets asks patient about it " Rashi says"Oh shut up!" They both go near to patient and ask him the reason he is admitted in Hospital and the patient says"acidity!" Jigar smirks and Rashi leaves to another patient and she checks patients and Jigar continously staring at her and she feels uncomfortable and she thinks"Why is he staring at me like that is something on my face and she touches her cheek and Jigar is continously staring her and is smiling Rashi starts getting annoyed and then Jigar checks patients a d writes current status on patient files.

In I.C.U:

Dr.Falak enters I.C.U and sees a cute little girl on bed and then she checks that girls's file and is shocked to know that that girl has just undergone a open heart surgery because something was wrong in one valve of her heart suddenly Falak sees a lady standing outside the unit and is peeping in from window and she calls Falak and Falak goes out and She ask Falak about her daughter and Falak consoles her and says"aunty don't worry she will be alright." Falak returns to unit and sits near the girl and suddenly the girl starts moving restlessly and her heartbeats decrease and Falak panicks and she then gives injection to patient and girl again comes to normal and her heart beats also come to nrmal. Falak says"Allah please give this girl health her mother is very worried."


In Urology Unit:

Kinjal is reading files of patients and she suddenly reads something and says"eee!" then she approaches Dhaval and says"Dr.Dhaval will you do me a favour?" Dhaval says"Ofcourse Kinjal tell me?" KinjL handsovers 3 files to dhaval and says"Please take urine samples of these three patients and submit them in labortary!" Dhaval makes face and Kinjal says"Pleaseee!" Dhaval agrees and leaves Kinjal thanks God. and continues her work.

In A&E department(Casuality!):

Ahem and Gopi are checking patients when a lady patient is brought to casuality with lots of bruises on her body Dr.Gopi and Dr.Ahem run to attend her and They ask about it from her family and her mother says"Her husband beats her and 3 days before he left her at. our house and when today she was cooking in the kithen he came to meet her we sent him to her in kitchen and we decided not to disturb them so they can resolve their problems but when after 1 hour when i went in the kithen I found her unconcious there with all these bruises." Ahem says"loser be must be thinking he is brave by beating his wife but now I am calling police!" Gopi asks they lady"did you see your SIL beating your daughter?" The lady is crying and she answers in no! Gopi asks nurse that she wants coagiliation profile of the patient asap! Ahem says"Dr.Gopi what is the need for coagiliation profile? when her family is saying her husband beat her!" Gopi says"But I think these bruises are because of some disease !" Ahem says"Oh please don't try to be over intelligent!" They both argue on it and Dr.Kirti says"stop it. Stop fighting like kids! Ok if Dr.Gopi is right then this case will be given to Dr.Gopi and Dr.Ahem if you are right then this case is yours! So wait for reports to come!" Kirti leaves and Ahem says"see Dr.Kirti also said that you behave like a kid it means you are Kidco!" Gopi says"Oh ya Ahem we will talk afyer the reports come!" Ahem says ok if you are so comfident then bet? if you win then I will be your slave for 1 day and If I win then you will be my slave for one day and you will have to serve me!"
Gopi says"Bet????" Ahem says"Why are you scared?" Gopi thinks for a min and says"Done!"

Epi ends on confident face if Dr.Gopi!

PRECAP:

In Locker Room:

Rashi shouts on Gopi and says"I never thought that you will be so mean and cheap and these were your intentions then why do you do acting and why are you behind me always Rashiben this!Rashiben that! "Gopi turns teary!
Scene shifts to Dr.Falak and Dr.Kirti Talking and Falak says"I am really very sorry Dr.Kirti but I will not assist you in this case!" Dr.Kirti is shocked on listening this! Please do inform me if you want any type of changes or twists in ff. If you think some character is being ignored or some character is getting more space then you can inform me.Please Do Comment.:-)


Extremely Sorry I cannot Pm anyone for somedays!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the part it is nice to read the story different from usuall has full of medical terms
so Ahem constantly flittering with gopi
want to know about gorshi flashback
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: delsi

loved the part

</div>it is nice to read the story different from usuall has full of medical terms
<div>so Ahem constantly flittering with gopi

want to know about gorshi flashback



Thanks for loving it dear. I am really happy that you are loving the plot I also loved this idea when it came to me as same character but in medical terms.:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved dis part Alina
awrh why is Rashi so sad to gopi
want loads of Raji n Gohem scenes :)
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum awesum update Alina... 👏

omg Ahem were so naughty n kool i simply loved his calling gopi Kidco everytime 🤣 😳 or Ahem constantly flittering with gopi i love it.. 😳 Jigar also sounds naughty and Rashi perfect role for rashi miss attitued 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PainKiller Episode 3 (Bet bani Mushkil! Rashi ka case ya Gopi ka case?)

AT Sanjeevani Hospital:

AT Locker Room:

Kinjal Tells Rashi about Gopi's and Ahem's bet and Rashi says"How idiot she is it is clear case that patients husband beats her then why coagiliation profile? Anyways let her be! who cares!" Rashi leaves and Kinjal thinks "why she is always upset whenever Gopi's name comes?" Falak comes and She says "Hi Kinjal how is your duty going on?" Kinjal says"Good!" Dhawal enters and says"What are you doing?" Falak says"Gossip!" Dhawal says"Lets do it together I also love gossip!" Falak smiles and says"But Dhawal we were gossiping about you!" Dhawal says"Uh Oh .Ok then I am going when it ends tell me I will come back!" Dhawal leaves and Kinjal and Falak share a laugh.

AT A&E Department(Casualty):

A pregnant lady is brought on stretcher and her husband is with her and Lady is yelling with pain and Dr.Gopi asks her husband about her months and patients husband says that it's her due in two days and Gopi checks the patient and say" It just excitement and there is still time in labour pain so I am giving her injection. Gopi asks patients name and He says"I am Rakesh Singh and she is Sonia Singh!" Till then the lady says"Rakesh I want my baby alright I will die if something happens to our baby!" Gopi holds patients hand and says"Don't worry Mrs.Singh in some hours your baby will be in your hands alright,Happy and Healthy". Mrs.Singh holds Gopi's hand tightly and says"Doctor are telling the truth?" Gopi says"yes you will have your baby healthy in your hand." Mrs.Singh says"Promise?" Gopi smiles and says"Promise!" Mrs.Singh also smiles and Gopi then asks from rakesh "whose case is this?" He says it is Dr.Kirti's and Gopi says"Then No need to worry as she is very good doctor". Gopi starts leaving when patient says"Doctor what is your name?" Gopi smiles and says"Dr.Gopi." Gopi leaves.

Dr.Kirti comes and says"From Now onwards Dr.Falak will be in Casualty and Dr.Gopi will be in I.C.U". Falak and Gopi exchange their duties and Falak goes to Casualty.

AT Casualty:

A 20 years Girl named Nibarika is brought and it is said that she had got Asthma attack and Dr.Falak attends her and A person says to Falak"Dr take special care of her she is ministers Daughter." Falak nods and Then she again goes to Niharika and attends her but she gets suspicious and thinks"I think she is not asthma patient she has something else? I will have to conduct her test."

At Casualty:

Ahem says"Aah after break now I am Feeling fresh Now I will irritate kidco more!" He then comes and sees Falak instead of Gopi and He says"Hey Falak where is Kidco!" Falak tells him about Dr.Kirti exchnging their duties and he says"Dr.kirti is a bhatakti aatma She can be never happy".Falak says"Ahem why are you always irritating poor girl?" Ahem says"Who Dr.Kirti?" Falak says"I am talking about Gopi!" Ahem says"Ohhh Kidco I am never want to Irritate her but she ways invites me to irritTe her.Falak smiles and Ahem says idea.

AT General Ward:

Rashi has finished her work and says"Aah work is finished now I will get full points for today and no one can stop me from being Intern Of The Month!" Jigar is listening this and says"I will!" Rashi says"Oh not again! why you are always poking your nose in others matters can't you be quiet and do your own work?" Jigar says"You know what? I was never interested in this IOTM stuff but now I am also in this ompetition and I will be only intern of the month." Rashi says"we will see ! it is matter of work not words!" Rashi leaves and Jigar smiles.

AT I.C.U:

Dr.Gopi recieves a call from telecom which says that the reports of coagiliation profile have come.Gopi rushes to Reception and At reception she asks for Kajal's reports and Receptionist tells her that results will come next day and Ahem comes from behind and says"What do you want Kidco?" Gopi understands that it was Ahem's call and she says"Ahem I will Not leave you!" Ahem smiles and says"First catch me then don't leave me!" Gopi starst to gi when Ahem says"Do whatever you want but I will only win the bet!" Gopi leaves saying"Whatever!" Ahem smirks.

At Dr.Kirti's Cabin:

Falak knocks and Kirti tells her to come in and Falak informs Dr.Kirti that Niharika was admitted as asthma patient but she is just pretending she does nit have asthma as she has checked her reports Dr.Kirti says"I know Dr.Falak!" Falak says"You know?" Dr.Kirti says"Yes I know and she is admitted here for some other reason and that is she is pregnant before her marriage and her father who is minister want us to abort her baby without letting anyone know about it!" Falak is shocked on listening this and Kirti says"Now you are going to assist me in this case!" Falak says"sorry ma'am but I cannot assist you in this case! I cannot kill anyone!" Dr.kirti says"Dr.Falak don't forget this your profession!" Falak holds kirtis hand and says"Dr.Kirti I am not saying this as a doctor I am saying this as a human please keep me out of this case." Dr.Kirti thinks for a min and then says ok and Falak thanks her and leaves.

AT Locker Room:

Everyone is present and Kinjal says"Oh God its too late when will duty get over?" Dhawal says"I think Dr.Kirti is punishing us as we were late two mins in morning na!" Kinjal says"Dhawal Dr.Kirti would have forgot that till now!" Dr.Kirti then enters and says"Interns your duty is over and tomorrow your reporting time is 6 'O Clock and don't be late" Jigar says"Oh shit Early in the morning!" Dr.Kirti says"Dr.Jigar did you say something?" and Jigar says No ma'am! Kirti leaves.Everyone leaves except Rashi and Rashi follows Dr Kirti till her cabin.

At Dr.Kirti's Cabin:

Rashi knocks and enters and says"Dr.Kirti you are doing C section in Sonia Singh case?" Kirti says"Yes Dr.Rashi!" Rashi says"Can I assist you in it?" Kirti says"Are you sure?" Rashi says"100%".
Dr.Kirti says" Read all the details in this file and then accompany me to the patient." Rashi reads the file.

At Gopi's Home:

Gopi is sleeping and she gets dream that she has lost the bet to Ahem and Ahem tells her to his works and he tells her to massage his legs and Gopi shouts suddenly she wakes up and says"Thank God it was just a dream. kahnaji please don't let Ahem win! "Then she thinks"If I win it means Kajal has some deadly disease?" She again says"Kahnaji I don't care if Ahem wins but please save Kajal!" She again sleeps.

At General Ward:

Dr.Kirti and Rashi come to Mrs.Singh and Kirti tells Rashi to tell mrs.Singh about her case and Rashi says"mrs.Singh we will be doing your operation tomorrow and You didn't have taken immunoglobin injections after last pregnancy and this is late pregnancy plus you have diabetes and including all this baby's position in womb is not correct so the case is very complicated" Mrs.Singh is scared listening this and Dr.Kirti notices that.Rashi continues"Usaully in these types of cases there are only 10% chances of baby surviving!" Mrs.Singh holds her husbands hand and Kirti calls Rashi out and asks her what she is doing an Rashi says"Dr.Kirti I was just telling them the case and as a doctor we should not hide anything from patient!" Dr.Kirti says"you are right but there is a way to do everything and your way was incorrect!" Rashi says"I don't think so that my way was wrong!" Dr.Kirti gets angry And says"Dr.Rashi you are not going to assist me in this case".
Dr.Kirti leaves and Rashi gets angry.
Dr.Kirti goes to Mrs.Singh and tries to make her comfortable and Rakesh says"Doctor my wife doesn't wants to be treated in this hospital!" Dr.Kirti is shocked says"Don't worry mr.Singh we have the facilities in Sanjeevani." Mrs.Singh says" Dr This doctor was not nice before her one doctor came and she promised us that she will give us our baby healthy and happy in our hands please call that doctor please call that doctor." Dr.kirti says I will call that doctor only don't worry but can tell me name of that doctor!" Mrs.Singh Quickly says"Dr.Gopi!" Kirti says"Ok we will call her don't worry!" Kirti leaves.

AT Gopi's Home:

Gopi's cell is ringing and she is sleeping and her mom comes and tries to wake her up but she says"Maa let me sleep I am tired!" She says"beta Gopi call is coming from hospital and Dr.Kirti has sent you a page on your pager!"and Gopi wakes up in shock and her mom smiles.Gopi gets ready and leaves for hospital.

At Locker Room:

Rashi puts her coat and stethoscope in locker and At the sametime Gopi enters and Rashi sees and get sngy she says"You are here again.Today I know how cheap and mean you are!Always you are around me Rashiben this!Rashiben that! But you are not that innocent how yiu pretent to be!" Gopi is shocked and says"What I have done Rashiben?" Rashi says"Don't be so innocent you hVe snatched my case and now you are pretending to not knowing anthing."Gopi says"Rashiben I haven't done any such thing!" Rashi leaves angrily from there and Gopi turn teary.Gopi thinks "which case is Rashiben talking about?"

At Dr.Kirti's Cabin:

Gopi enters and Dr.Kirti says"Come in Dr.Gopi!" Gopi comes in and Dr .Kirti says"Dr.Gopi tell me clearly did you promised Mrs.Singh a healthy baby?" Gopi says"Dr.Kirti I was just...!" Dr.Kirti says"just yes or no!" Gopi says"Yes because she was panicking so I tried to console her!" Dr kirti says"Did you read her file before promising?" Gopi is confused and nods in negative and Dr.kirti throws a file infront of her and tells her to read it when gopi reads it it states:"late pregnancy,Immuniglobin injections not taken after last pregnancy,Mrs.Singh is diabetic and Baby position is upside down inwomb and in these type of cases there are only 10% chances for baby to survive!" Gopi is shocked on reading this and Dr.Kirti says"Dr.Gopi we are doctors not God and we are no one to promise!" Gopi says"Sorry doctor kirti I will be careful next time.!" Dr.kirti tell gopi that she has till some hours left so she should go and study the case. Gopi goes to library and stats reading about the case.

Next Morning:

All interns come to duty and Everyone except Ahem and Rashi congrTulate Gopi and Falak says"Wow Gopi you git chance to assist Dr.Kirti the very first day." Gopi says that she is scared and Falak tells her not to worry as she sill pray for her and Allah Almighty will do everything correct.

At General Ward:

Jigar smartly hides Rashi's patient file and thinks"If I will not be IOTM the I will not let you also be IOTM miss attitude!" Epi ends on smirking face of Jigar.

PRECAP:

Dr.Gopi is checking Kajal's file and Falak asks her "tell me who won the bet you or Ahem?" Gopi is shocked on reading the report file.Scene shifts to Rashi throwing black oil on Jigar's face infront of everybody.And Jigar vows to take revenge from Rashi.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful Alina😊 very competative
Gopi had his mom then why Rashi angry with Gopi
precape sems to be intersteing i think Ahem is going to win
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifull part Alina awrh i luv da precap oh y did da epi have to end der
i dnt like Rashi in this part shes a bit too rude

update soon Alina
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: delsi

Wonderful Alina😊very competative

Gopi had his mom then why Rashi angry with Gopi

precape sems to be intersteing i think Ahem is going to win


Thanks fornloving it dear.

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