FF: The Tempest, chapter 11 - Epilogue, p 32

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Amal Aziz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

mindblowing !
Excellent part... loved it ...
waiting 4 the next part !

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doc4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Finally got around to catching up with this!! 😃 Such a treat to read and beautifully written!! ⭐️ 👏

Thanx Swasthi..looking forward to reading more and more!! 😳

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Justlikethat1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

So he finally told that aloud.. He loves her😃 It was to the doctor but yet😉

Superb update Swasthi👏 I knew this was coming.. Ahem is finally seeing the consequences of just letting his feelings show without talking😊 Hopefully the girl on the bridge is Gopi.. But will she be convinced? Or will she think he is making up the story as he knows she is pregnant..

I can see her mind work like that.. Ahem is going to find it hard to convince her otherwise. Superb plot Swathi. It is awesome⭐️

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Nihira-fan

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

thanks for sharing swasthi!

i haven't read yet but will read soon!

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Archana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Finally read all the parts Swasthi😊 Awesome update ⭐️

Its nice to read ahem is so happy that gopi is going to have his baby eager to know will gopi believe ahem when he confess his love to her. Looking forward to next update😊

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Hetal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

awesome update swasthi👏...Ahem has confess his feeling in fron of doctor but not gopi..its a need now...

glad...that he is happy about the news that gopi is pregnant...😛so it would be now exciting..how he will actually start the talk with gopi...how he will confess his feelings in front of gopi...and most important...how he will handle the situations henceforth

eagerly waiting for next update😛

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: delsi
Fabulous part swathi 👏
this part revels Urmila's true nature in the story always want Gopi to suffer😭
on the other side Gopi became happy because of new development in her body,⭐️ but she strongly believe that Ahem loved some one was wonderful
here Ahem knows the truth what i felt is instead of saying his love for Gopi to doctor at once in farm house he had said means thins would be different.
its better that doctor informed about Gopi's condition, Hope he ill find Gopi soon
waiting for next Saturday

Thanks so much Delsi.

Really glad that you are enjoying the story.

The next part is coming up soon.

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swasthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: -GiNa-
fantastic update swasthi.. 👏

urmi always threw all household chores to gopi..or poor gopi suffer.. 😒 omg gopi is pregnant just after one day 😲 poor girl still beleive that Ahem wont love her.. Im glad n happy Ahem loves is ture n happily he accept gopi pregnancy or his child..😳 hope soon Ahem reached towards his gopi n tells her abt his ture feeling n love for her... 😳

Much appreciated Sherry.

Really glad to read that you are enjoying the story.

The next part is coming up soon.