NEW RAJI FF... :) updated part 6 7/10 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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really very nice plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww really superb one...luved it a lot...perfect start & the next part is too just awesome...plzzz continue...u made it whole raji thnxxx😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice dear:-) do continue:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR👏👏👏 EXCITED FOR THE NETXT PART. PLS UPDATE SOON😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow !! great start !! do update soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx guys!!! vll try to update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!very very nice ff
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for errors... didnt got time to proof read... please read n comment 😃


It was night… no almost morning its 3 am.. rashi couldn't sleep… she tossed n turned.. she was too happy to sleep… tomorrow is the day.. After years abroad jigar is coming back.. She still remembers the way hetal teased her with this news.. She smiled n blushed thinking about her words.. Everyone knew how eager was rashi to meet him.. She can't wait to see him.. She felt a bit sad thinking he didn't call or contacted her in any way in a long time. But she brushed away that thought as soon as it came to her mind. She was too excited to feel sad about anything. She won't talk to him first.. She decided.. As a punishment. She knew it droves him crazy if she didn't talk to him. She smiled thinking about their childhood n kept looking at the clock. Slowly she fell asleep filled with very sweet dreams..

Next day she reached mm as soon as she can she knew both kinjal n jigar arrived as she saw car going in MM gates. She stood in front of the gates confused if she should go in or just wait for him to b free n then come n meet her. But she can't wait to meet him then again now he is going to b here only so y hurry she waited this long so can wait a bit longer too. Devil n angel sat on either shoulders n kept contradicting each other.. Finally angel won n she decided to go in but she needs a reason n then suddenly remembered she forgot her pooja ki thaali in mm some days back. So she decided to ask it back. She knows everyone will know it's just a bahana but her pride didn't allow her to gatecrash.

She walked upto the front door n was about to ring the calling bell but servant mani opened the door. She looked surprised but give way for rashi to enter with a knowing smile. Rashi blushed n step inside.

She looked around n saw hetal coming downstairs. She has her usual smile on her face. Rashi always saw a mother figure in hetal. Rashi smiled back. "arrey rashi, itni subha subha kya baat hai beta?? Kuch chahiye??" hetal started her teasing with a sly smile "who … mein.. thaali… kal.. nahi parsom.. lana phool gayi.. nahi… lena phool gayi.. abhi yaad aaya toh socha ki .. mein .." hetal started to laugh at rashi n she felt embarrassed.. "poor girl.. jaane do na kakkiji we all know y she is here" ahem said from behind. Rashi turned around n saw ahem standing behind her with a grin. Ahem has always been like a big brother she never had.

She just grinned sheepishly. Hetal said she was just teasing n brought her inside. She said jigar n kinjal came that morning n is resting till then. Will come down any moment now. And if u cant wait anymore u can go n meet him in his room. She added with a wink. But kokila came there n stopped hetal saying it is not right n rashi should wait here. Rashi has always been little bit afraid of koki. But she knew eventhough little bit strict deep down she is a very good n caring person. Rashi said auntyji is right . I will wait here. Koki ordered ahem to go n get ready to go to office n he went after giving a smile to rashi. Hetal n koki enquired about her father's health n her well being. She was offered breakfast which she tried to decline but hetal practically dragged her to eat.

Just then kinjal came downwards. Rashi looked at her curiously. She really did changed a lot. She is not the kinjal rashi remembers. Kinjal's visits was even less when compared to jigar. Everything changed style dressing language etc. kinjal just glanced at rashi n gave a half smile then ordered her western breakfast saying she don't like that typical Gujarati food anymore. Rashi was surprised kinjal used to love Gujarati food. She saw a bit of disappointment n sadness in hetal's eyes n felt bad. She just hoped jigar doesn't change this much. Kinjal casually asked about rashi n her whereabouts. Rashi happily replied n asked about kinjal's life abroad. Kinjal replied its too beautiful n dreamy than u can ever imagine n ofcourse u won't understand anything. u r too much of a typical village girl now.

Rashi was shocked at this reply but tried to smile. Then kinjal left breakfast table saying she has to attend some calls. Hetal saw rashi's shocked face n said java dena dikhra she is didn't mean anything. Rashi smiled lightly.

She was waiting impatiently for jigar to come down not really interested in baa-hetal convo in front of her.. Then she saw him coming down with his mobile talking to someone. She was in her dreamland. He sure looked more handsome. She blushed at her thoughts n hetal-baa smiled at her bright blush. He came sat down n started eating without hanging up his phone. Hetal scolded him n he teased her back. So he is not completely changed rashi thought some things don't change she added with a smile. He asked her about her father b her life n all. How was she?? Whatz she doing? Etc etc.. hetal left with baa to her room. N rashi thought its best time to start complaining for lack of attention towards her n no phone calls for really long time. Just when she was about to open her mouth he got another call. He said just a sec n began talking for hours finally he said I will b there now n hang up. Yelled to his mom he is going out with his friends. Left after saying a quick bye to rashi. Rashi just sit there surprised. She didn't know what to think. She felt really hurt but thought his friends didn't see him for a while na.. so he went to visit. There is nothing wrong in that.. she smiled to herself n decided to go back home. As she was leaving she heard kinjal asking koki " mom do she always come here?? Y u allows that?? Yeah I accept she is our childhood friend and all but now it's different story.. I know she is poor n all If u want to give her food or something send it to her home.. my frnds will b visiting any time now.. I can't explain her presence here.."

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Posted: 12 years ago
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really very nice update plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab update asha...really like the way the story is going...rashi really loves him a lot...waiting to read wut jigar thinks abt her...hetal is as sweet as ever but I hate kinjal...I understand she has changed after living abroad for soo many years but how can she be soo insensitive and say such things abt rashi😡😡

plzz plzz update soon😃

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