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Posted: 13 years ago
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This OS follows the precap from Friday.

Special thanks to Shilpa for her amazing artwork in the magical VM - see her post below.


OS: Feelings of love

Ahem looked on at Gopi's face after telling her that we would go another time due to it being late. She looked so crestfallen and detached. Mum did say that the pregnancy will bring about frequent changes in her mood and wants so he thought that he had to bear with this for now.

Just then his phone rang.

"Yes, Dinesh... one minute," Ahem interrupted the speaker and looked around for Gopi, who was slowly walking out of the room.

Ahem called out to Gopi and asked her what her favourite chaat was.

Gopi looked on at Ahem with the phone on his ear thinking that he needed her help, she replied, "Aloo chaat."

Ahem smiled and nodded at Gopi then turned around and told the recipient on the phone this.

Ahem had it all planned out. He arranged for the package to arrive while dinner was being prepared so not to attract any attention and keep it ready in the room for when Gopi comes in later.

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Ahem kept on straining his ear out into the corridor for her sweet payal sounds while attempting to work the latest budgets for an existing project but nothing as yet.

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It wasn't until some time when Kokila brought Gopi into the room and made sure she was comfortable on the bed.

"Ahem," Kokila began with authority in her voice.

"Ji mum."

"I brought Gopi vahu to rest for the night. She wanted to clear up after dinner. She needs to remember that she has to take care of herself. Jai shree Krishna," Kokila continued straightening her pallu.

"Ji mum. Jai shree Krishna," replied Ahem and watched his mum walk away. Ahem followed her to close and lock the bedroom door.

Ahem looked on at his Gopi who was looking down at the bed cover. He knew just what he had to do to pep her up.

He picked up the paper bag from the coffee table, called out her name, making her look up at him then walked up to her.

He placed the bag on the side table saying, "I have something to tell you."

Gopi transfixed at her Ahemji nodded.

"Can I sit here?" Ahem pointed at the side of the bed. Gopi nodded, lowered her eyes again and moved further onto the bed to make place for him.

Ahem, thanking her silently, sat in on the side of the bed looking on at her.

"Gopi, I have something for you," he said while reaching out to the bag and taking out the plastic container and a spoon, at the same time, not leaving his eye contact with her.

"Aloo chaat. It's your favourite. This is why I did not want to go out today. I had ordered this already," Ahem concluded hoping to make her more comfortable.

Gopi was surprised and looked on at her Ahemji giving him her radiant look. A look Ahem had being craving for all evening since he returned from office. She is back with me, he thought. He opened the container, spooned a bit of chaat and brought it to her mouth.

"Nahi Ahemji, I will take."

"Gopi, I will feed you."

"Nahi, I will."

"Gopi, I am here."

With that Gopi had no choice but to open her mouth, took in the spoonful of chaat and began eating. Ahem could see his shy wife. Yes, he thought silently agreeing with Baa, she is so much like me, this is why we are where we are. If he wasn't like her, their relationship would have been so much more different. I am going to change this for sure, his determined self expressed with a smile at her as she was half way with her eating.

Interrupting his thoughts, "Ahemji ... your turn now, you too eat some," she said lowering her eyes.

Ahem was happy inside with this turn from Gopi and willingly let her do so. He loved every morsel she took to his mouth as he looked at her. The sweet and sour favours ignited his heart and body making every little idea he had for this evening becoming real.

With the meal finished, he packed away the empty container into the bag, placed the glass of water near her mouth to drink. Before placing the glass on the side table he too had a few sips. Gopi's eyes widened with amazement at her Ahemji's actions.

He took hold of her right hand and placed it on to his, raised it to his lips and kissed the back of her hand. He sensed her hand jerking away and immediately tightened his grip, only to gently tease her by pulling the skin of the back of her hand with his teeth and giving her a wet kiss in the process. He looked on at her with a glazed look waiting and taking in her every expression and reaction.

Gopi sucked in her breath gaping back at him.

Ahem proceeded to give her little kisses up her hand keeping his look on her. His left hand held on to her hand while his right hand travelled up her other hand holding her shoulder by which time he had reached her neck. This time he again pulled her skin with his teeth giving her a soggy kiss and another here and there up her neck and throat squeezing her left shoulder and hand in the process.

Gopi was feeling excited beyond belief. Her Ahemji was happy with the baby coming and was caring towards me because of the baby and now he wants to enjoy me, she thought.

He lifted his head and his hand from her shoulder, still looking on at her with desire in his eyes, only to remove her pallu from her head.

Gopi jerked slightly lifting her free hand to put it in place, "Nahi Ahemji ..."

But Ahem placed his finger on her lips and quietly shooed her stopping her in mid sentence. He caressed her lips before removing his finger and stared down at them now, they were plumper than a few seconds ago. He closed in on her while his hand removed her pallu completely.

Gopi looked on at Ahem and felt his finger grazed her lips sending electric waves through her whole body down to her toes. She could not hold back and longingly looked back at his lips too as he went closer to her. She could feel her pallu fall, his hand pulling her string on her blouse at the back and moving towards her hooks.

Ahem took her right hand and placed it on his chest inviting her to explore him.

"Gopi," Ahem whispered switching his eyes from her plump lips to her eyes, "show me the colours of love you have for me?"

Gopi shot her eyes up at his and blushed before looking away.

"Ji?"

"You said colours of love in the song competition?" Ahem reminded her.

Gopi blushed even deeper and was overwhelmed with emotions as she remembered her words ' her sindoor...her mangalsutra...her chunderi... She immediately took hold of her Ahemji's shoulder with her left hand, clutched his kurta with her other hand and came forward onto him and hid her face in his chest.

Gopi's actions instantly encouraged Ahem to embrace her giving him access to her now bare smooth back caressing it and wanting more of her skin on his palms. At the same time, he bit her lightly on the other side of her neck, pulled her skin and gently sucking her skin giving her another soggy kiss. He trailed gentle wet kisses up her neck while his both hands unhooked her sari blouse and bra bearing her whole back for his exploration. There was no stopping Ahem as he kissed her on either side of her neck for ease of removing these clothing items and placing them onto the side.

Gopi once again felt secure and protected as she felt before Rashi had told her those words. She forgot those nasty words and let the moment take her with. She readily moved her right hand which was on his chest and began unbuttoning his kurta allowing her palm which desperately sought for his skin too. She raised her head to his neck bravely kissing him very lightly around his neck and throat.

This sensation far exceeded Ahem's wildest imagination and realised that she too felt the desire and want to be satisfied. His lips burned for her and his tongue wanted to taste her. He took hold of her face with his hands, met her at eye level taking in her intoxicated eyes and her swollen lips.

His drunken love eyes did not pass Gopi's vision. She felt so admired and beautiful in his touch and by his gaze on her. She wanted to feel more of him and began lifting his kurta up while he stared at her. He let her take the lead in removing it but towards the end he helped her in shedding it after seeing her confidence she held in her eyes through this process. She looked on at his bare chiselled masculine chest as her mouth dried up and her look deepened. Ahem took both her hands and placed them on his chest closing his eyes momentarily taking in her touch which just awakened his deeper emotions.

Gopi's breathing became heavier as she explored his arches and valleys on his chest while he looked on at her well shaped bosoms ' plump like her lips and large enough to cup in his hands. He too explored her soft, smooth mounts caressing them with as though they were as fragile as thin sculptured glass, admiring its beauty it his wake.

She melted into his touch and desired much more from her Ahemji wanting it sooner than later. Ahem observed the look she had put on now gazing into his eyes then travelling to his lips, he lifted her from her half laying position, placed her on his lap and captured her lips with his hungrily sucking and caressing her lower lip with his tongue. She gasped at that feeling and he dug into her her mouth tasting her sweetness.

She clung onto him with all her life then ran her palms all over his back where she could reach. Ahem loved this moment so much wishing he did this more, had he remembered their Holi day union. His arms embraced her tightly never letting her go then loosen and moved down to her waist pulling out her sari and searching for the drawstring to have more of her skin. With that done he ran his hands all over her bare skin before allowing both to come up for air.

He turned to the right taking her along with him, while allowing her sari to fall away and removing her loosened skirt, and laying her across the bed with his upper half self on top of her.

He caressed her cheek with the back of his hands drawing circles around then moved on to remove her hair clips. At the same time he kissed her on her forehead, on her eyes and cheeks one at a time, unhurriedly, lightly and dotingly. He lifted himself and began to kiss her chest leading onto her tummy. Now resting on his right arm with his hand on his head he placed the other hand on her tummy drawing gentle circles enjoying playing with their baby.

He leaned forward nuzzling her tummy and giving the baby a soft kiss then he talked like a father to his child, "Mummy and I love you very much and I love your mummy so much."

He leaned back only to pick up on of her breast peaks to taste it and tug it with his lips by which time he took each of her hands and raised it holding them above her head on the bed. He did the same for her other peak before heading up to her waiting mouth for more to discover by each other.

Gopi felt so loved and so blessed. She wanted this moment to last forever. Never to feel unwanted, never to be demeaned and never to feel pained. Only to have her Ahemji's love now and always.

She was so into him she did not feel her underwear being removed or his taken off but she did feel his body lift and come over her just like he did on Holi day. This time Gopi was waiting for this moment as he entered her. She felt him easing into her as she assisted in making him access her with ease, accelerating her excitement within.

Ahem simply absorbed her every giving love he was getting from her as he entered her. He felt her body shift with the want for more as his energies quickened to please her. She gave and he took. She took while he gave. They were in synergy with each other in time, in mood and in love.

He rolled backwards taking her with him allowing her to feel more comfortable with less pressure on her. She lifted herself and sat astride on him feeling him inside her while he amorously admired her domineering position allowing her to take the reins. He looked on at her with long hair in motion to her action. She was gorgeous wild in love. He reciprocated her movements making a mental map of her curves on her body as he fondled her all over. They intensified their want for more and more of each other until their hearts, minds, body and souls where filled with completeness and fulfilment.

Ahem took hold of Gopi and lay her next to him hugging her and kissing her with immense tenderness on her lips. They lay there side by side satiated and worn with physical exhaustion but renewed with feeling of their love for each other before dozing off.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here is the VM
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ph617uWFCc&hd=1[/YOUTUBE]


Fantastic OS Swasthi.

I couldn't take my eyes off the screen. Very well written with all the emotions and feelings equal on both sides.
Fabulous expression of love from Ahem.

Thank you for this treat.
Edited by sbp1971 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm emotional. That was a lovely piece of writing, Swasthi. Love how they are so comfortable with each other.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kya baat hai ab toh sochte hain ki serial dekhna padega taki pata toh chale iss sab ke hone ke chances hain
wow what an os truly good
pm me if you write anymore cheers for this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Swasthi i never thought you would write a wicked os!!! It was beautiful hot sexy sizzling . Thank god gopi was on top otherwise the poor baby. Ahem knows how to talk dirty 😲 i was laughing when i read that. Its so unexpected from him. This was beautiful. I can go on but i will get banned. 😛

Shilpa really beautiful vm:-)
Edited by vibz88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx 4 de special pm...it was nyc..but our cvs will never make it happen😆
anyway sorry, i only read de 1st half.mujhe sharam arehe...see...i m chota baccha😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one swasthi & shilpa.. a nice imagination 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Swasthi, that's a really beautiful feelings of love. You surpass yourself. Awesome. Just love reading it, all feeelings, emotions, hope Ahem overcomes Gopi's feelings of being loved only for the baby.

Thanks for pm.
Edited by kafa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful OS Swasthi! ⭐️
@Shilpa: Loved the VM...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, nicely written and a great imagination! Bold yet sweet at the same time 👍🏼

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