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Posted: 13 years ago
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This story just striked me...
If u all like and then i will continue. This is for now.
It has been almost three days of this and he had had enough!!!! Today he should put an end to all this. thought Ahem.
"The nerve of this girl. Ignoring me all along. Did she think she is someone too high??? am i a dog to go behind her all the time??? GAWAR!!!!" Muttered the great Ahem Modi under his breath. The moment he said Gawar, a small smile played on his lips.
Her eyes, her cute expressions in them. The wonder when he says something, the pride when he appreciates her, the smile that makes her eyes twinkle like stars when he smiles or even nods at her. She is Beautiful. Her beauty is her innocence, her love.
She always had a smile on her face which makes her look all the more lovely. And a special one always reserved when he said Thank you.
OH!!!! and how much it hurts to see her in pain, to see clouds of self doubt and pain and sorrow in that brown eyes. Its the worst kind of torment he could have. To see her suffer has become the worst punishment." Ahem could not stop smiling thinking about his lady love, His Gopi. 'Wait what????'
He did not even realise that he had said the last two words loud. Jigar who had been observing his bhai for quiet sometime called out "Kya Hua Bhai??" It was only then Ahem came out of his day dream "Kutch Nahi" he said rather blushed slightly.
Jigar, who had been blessed to see his bhai blush was in no mood to leave him today. He got up from his opposite chair and advannced towards him.

"Bhai, I think i know what happened" Ahem immediately panicked. "What What Hapened " struttered Ahem. Jigar smiled his ever beautiful smile and said,

J: Bhai, its Bhabhi hein na.

Ahem blushed bright red. He just glared at Jigar. Jigar taking little courage continued.

J : Bhai, just dont glare at me. I know its Bhabhi.

Ahem sighed. No use hiding. He just nodded and again sighed heavily.

J: Kya Hua Bhai. You seem little off mood today. Is anything wrong. U can trust me Bhai i know Bhabhi too well. Care to take a few tips???

A: Stop it Jigar. Just go and do your work.

Jigar shrugged non ' chalenly. He then pretented to be overly interested in his cell phone. As Ahem looked Jigar got call from Rashi.

R: Jigarji, where are you.

J: Rashi mein Bhai ke kamre mein.

R: Oh wow !!!! Thank God . Just answer yes or no ok. Dont ask any questions and just do as i say.

J : Rashi but .

Rashi cut him short.

R: Jigarji please!!!!!

J : Ok done.

R: Is Jiju kind of moody and pissed off?

Jigar looked at Ahem. He seemed to be moody and edgy today.

J: Ya.

R: Did he seem lost in thought?

J: Ya

R : Did he say something about Gopi?

J: Rashi !!!!! Ya!!!!

At this Ahem looked up suspiciously at Jigar. What is going on here he thought.

R : Thank God.. All as i expected. Now Jigarji do exactly like i say ok. Talk like you are talking to Gopi.

J: Haan Bhabhi bolo na.

Ahem 's head immediately jerked up at the mention of the word Bhabhi.

J: haan bhabhi teek hein.

Ahem became restless at the mention of each Bhabhi.

J: Bhabhi, you dont have to ask me. I know what you will ask. I will get it without fail but then you have to do me one thing.

Ahem was getting angry looking at this. Three days, three days he had tried to talk to her tried to apologise and she ignored me and here she is talking to Jigar for so long. She is so dead.

Jigar noticed the play of emotions in his brother's face. From the moment he started talking to Rashi as though to Gopi Bhabhi, his bhai's nose started to flare. He was sure as dead today. Rashi what have you dragged me too???? He wondered.

R: Jigarji, is he tensed??? Angry??? Hurt???

J: haan Rashi. Tell Bhabhi not to worry. I'll get it for her.

R: Wow Jigarji, not bad you are indeed truly my soul mate.

Jigar Smiled.

R: Now Jigarji, say something else that will make Ahem jiju miss Gopi badly and pull him home. We'll see your smartness.

J: Rashi, I Love You.

There were two people who were dumbfounded listening to this open exclamation of love. Time stood still. One wondering how on earth did she get this lucky to deserve love from a person like her husband and the other wondering when on earth will he be able to say the same to the one women who at this very moment rules his heart, mind, body and soul.

Enough!!!!! Ahem decided, today he will somehow make her talk to him.

Please comment and say if i can continue or not.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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excelllent ss.👏..!pls continue soon...!😃
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Wonderful dear, pls continue👏
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Sahraa...enjoyed it so much ...u shuld not even ask if you shuld continue 😉
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Lovelyyy pls continue !!!! Vvv cute

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Pm me when you update.. .Please Please Please!
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I loved it. Plz update soon.
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Wicked part
You should continue
Update soon
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WOW 👏👏👏 you must continue with this very good start like it well done dear 👏👏👏👏👏
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Oh yes plz do continue...it was so much fun to read this ...would love to read what Ahem does next 😎

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