FF: The Roulette of Envy (Part 12) pg.33/Dec. 7 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update.

It is incredible what your very own friend can do to you. He instantly brought Ahem down to his knees making him feel utterly inadequate, insecure and green with envy, and at the same time shell shocked of his inability to find things in their bedroom. Him yanking away the shawl off Gopi was enough to start getting him to stake his claim for his wife.

Looking forward to the next update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful update...I like Ahem jealous...hehe...more please!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice 2 see a green ahem . lets see wat happens 2 gopi bcuz of this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chenling

Wonderful update...I like Ahem jealous...hehe...more please!



😆 Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsk16

very nice 2 see a green ahem . lets see wat happens 2 gopi bcuz of this



I love writing about Ahem slamming doors and pacing around angrily. 😆 He deserves it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: swasthi

Lovely update.


It is incredible what your very own friend can do to you. He instantly brought Ahem down to his knees making him feel utterly inadequate, insecure and green with envy, and at the same time shell shocked of his inability to find things in their bedroom. Him yanking away the shawl off Gopi was enough to start getting him to stake his claim for his wife.

Looking forward to the next update.



Yes, he is realizing that he doesn't like Gopi near Agni. I don't think he has labeled that emotion with jealousy yet, but he'll do that soon. I don't want to make things too easy for him. 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
This is the best ff I have read till now.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Awesome update. I m enjoying reading ahem to have insecurities. U hv described the scenes very well. Update soon and thanx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written... Think ahem really really needs this !!! Keep it up pls and update jaldi jaldi!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful update with a jealous Ahemji. Good. Will be waiting for next part.

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