FF: The Roulette of Envy (Part 12) pg.33/Dec. 7

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Xarina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Rach. You are too hard on yourself. I like the way this story is going and you are telling in it a great fashion. Keep it up.

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suk19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wonderful i wish it could have been all in english not a very good hindi reader

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aris22l

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Superb, Rach. You can't imagine how gleefully I am reading this. And yipee, he has a private jet and a yacht. I liked the store room scene. Tells where they are both coming from. Ahemji is still so blind, but I am glad Gopi is speaking up. I like your Agni. Is he going to help Gohem or is he going to try to get Gopi for himself? He is finding out what a gem she is and he knows Anita very well.

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Rachna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: suk19
wonderful i wish it could have been all in english not a very good hindi reader

Sorry Suk--I'll try to have more English in it next time---

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varshu27

@varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

absolutely wonderful rach...loved it...at a corner of my mind i find myself rooting for agni...is that bad...i am loving the way u have clearly shown gopis state...even on fridays episode she looked tired of all this anithas drama and the modis part in it...ahem cannot just expect gopi to understand everything...like gopi said he has to travel halfway too...so that they can meet in the middle...thanks for the pm...