FF: The Roulette of Envy (Part 12) pg.33/Dec. 7

Xarina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Great update. I like the way you are unravelling Agni's story. I am excited to read more about him.

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Great update.

I will be certainly pondering on the questions you have put up.

Between the last update and this update was there another update?

Looking forward to the next update.

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Rachna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: swasthi
Great update.

I will be certainly pondering on the questions you have put up.

Between the last update and this update was there another update?

Looking forward to the next update.

All parts are hyperlinked on the first page. You may have missed the last one, Swasthi.

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Rachna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: kafa
Wow, another amazing update. Really beautiful and will wait for next part to know more about Agni's...

Agni's??? Shoot-on-sight encounter with the pataka called Mahua? 😆😳 Thank you!
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Rachna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: reimaz

i liked this part

She backed away, until she felt the cool metal of the shelf touch the back of her knees. And then she couldn't move anymore...

I am too awaiting for more...

Reimaz,

Even I felt very proud when I wrote that part! Thank you for reading.

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Rachna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Xarina
Great update. I like the way you are unravelling Agni's story. I am excited to read more about him.

Awww, Xarina. Thanks buddy! 😃

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Sunnyahem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Lovely and thanks for the pm!!! Pls make ahem super jealous for some reason !!!!

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Rachna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: poonamahem
Lovely and thanks for the pm!!! Pls make ahem super jealous for some reason !!!!

I haven't forgotten the title of my FF, Poonam. He will be envious soon enough. Rahiman dhaaga prem ke, mat todo chitkaye...😈😆

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princess09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Wow, Rach,you are a star⭐️!! you hav just left me hooked!!! amazing, just too good for words!!! I wonder wht Ahem will do to Gopi, probably a little bit of romance, i hope!!

Lets hope Ahem realizes how lucky he is to have a wife like Gopi, haha lol although im a bit too young to be reading these sorts of things, but nothing can stop me as i am a pure gohem fan, inside-out.

Once again, thank you sooo much you've cheered me up on this awful day👏!!!!!

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princess09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

So, Gopi doesnt listen to Ahem and just walks out of the storeroom...omg Rach THAT IS FABULOUS!!!!!!!! And hilarious🤣, she's ignoring him now!! She's giving Ahem a dose of his own medicine, and he deserves it for treating her like that. You've made a good character of Gopi, although this Anita you've made is excellent but she pisses me off in a weird sort of way. Can't wait 4 the next update!! Keep up the excellent work and i can totally see that you've put your 110% in it!!

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