OS:Azaadi...shayad(freedom...perhaps)part8 pg17 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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really good dear👏👏👏 plz hurry with the update and plz punish rashi cos the cvs wont do it😡😡😡😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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punishing rashi..i'd love that to happen...but...oh im scared to do that!!!
the rashi fans wont spare me coz i think it may hurt them,isn't it
Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx guyz for all ur liking and encouragement...now i know what to write..-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------PART-2Gopi cried untill there were nomore tears left.She compeleted all the preparations for tonight's dinner,and tried to show that she was totally normal which she failed to do.After an hour or two of waiting for the men she thought she rather enquire koki about them.
After she had asked kokila she knew it is going to take a while for them to return home so she went to her room and sat for a while on the couch,she quite tired after a really tiresome day.While gopi started rearranging her almirah and sorting out useless things in a bag, anita was walking towards gopi's room as she was feeling a bit lonely.Gopi had a good impression on anita too which made anita to look up on gopi whenever she needed something.So gopi must also have the therapy of anita's boredom.When anita was at gopi's door she found a very unexpected scene and that she thought that gopi was leaving.Anita was terrified at the site before her,and proceeded to stop her.But she was stopped half way by hetal.She noticed her as normal as ever,but still had a confusion.
Kokila called on to meethi and said that the men would take time to return so it's better she serves dinner to anita or it would be late.But rashi said that she would serve it instead.On the way to guest room rashi found gopi going downstairs.She grabbed the golden chance to piss gopi and asked her...
"Gopi sun kya tu mera ek kaam karegi,kya tu ye..ye khaana ja kar anita ko parose degi mujhe na kitchen mein kuch kaam yaad aa gaya hai..please"
Gopi hesitated but then agreed and rashi gave a smirk as she saw gopi enter the guest's room.Anita was just sitting lonely near the window as if in a deep thought.Gopi called on to her and anita turned and was quiet amused to see gopi in her room,she said...
"Gopi..ermm..tum..kya baat hai?"
Gopi answered that she just came to serve her food as maaji has asked to.Anita thanked her and said..
"Gopi you are very nice to me and also everyone in this house even after what happened yesterday..."
She glanced at gopi who was almost teary...
"Arre tum khadi kyun ho betho na?"
gopi answered..
"nahin mein thoda vyast hoon...aap khana kha lijyega..ermm agar aapko kuch chahiye ho to mujhe ya meethiben ko bula lijyegaa"
She was about to leave when anita stopped her by saying..
"Gopi kal jo huwa us ke liye main bohut sharminda hoon...gopi tum bohut sahas wali ho aur ek smart wife bhi ho...main bohut khush hoon ki ahem ko tum jaisi beevi mili..."
and she gave a smile.Gopi liked the way she said things but she went all teared up as she thought that, she does't deserve such a kind husband like ahem.
It was almost night at rajkot,and the modi men returned at 9:30 to MM.Meethi opened the door and the women welcomed them with greetings,but gopi and soon rest of the women noticed that ahem wasn't there with them.Gopi wanted to enquire about her ahemji but thought that she has no right to know his whereabouts because those rights were never once hers.But koki asked chirag about ahem...
"Mota bhai,ahem kyanche nazar nahin aa raha?"
Chirag replied perplexed...
"Kokila tum ye kya keh rahi,ahem to teen ghante pehle hi office se nikal chuka tha"
Kokila and everybody got a shock.Then jigar said..
"han kakiji ahem bhai to bohut pehle nikal gaye the,kya wo abhi tak ghar nahin pohunche?"
Kokila answered...
"nahin jigar ahem abhi tak ghar nahin aaya"
PRECAP:
gopi sat at the stairs of the temple with the tears trickling down her cheeks,while anita eavesdrops her say...
"Kanhaji ek baar ahemji ko ghar waapas sahi salamat le aayi ye phir main hamesha hamesha ke liye ahemji ki zindagi se nikal jaongi"
Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
I like your os, great work 😊 please do continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice os. Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Liked it...please continue 😊 !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
how did u like the new suspense...
will update part 3 tommorrow..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
This is really good. Carry on.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
can't wait to read more of it...it is really good!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
good part...waiting for the next one

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