OS: The medicine won't work

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Vinder90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Absolutely loved it: very great piece of work, too awesome

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Sravas

@Sravas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Hey its just like what CV's think...showing the episode in a slow and sweeet manner...do continue what happens after reaching kitchen... really loved the whole article.. nice that gopi and ahem had some good chemistry and will continue too...

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@Arnisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

awesome post Aish love this great 1...

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GiNa_kavya

@GiNa_kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Aish!😊 By coincidence the background of SNS Ahem_and_gopi_background_song(the theme background music) was playing repeatedly(...I have by mistake selected repeat instead of shuffle) in my Media Palyer when I was reading the OS and I was having tears in my eyes when i finished it😭!

Awesome👏

Thanks a lot for the PM😳

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indu_shah

@indu_shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

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Originally posted by: Aish3003

Ahem (his voice husky from the fever, from what he was feeling) : Kahaan jaa rahi ho tum? ((T: Where are you going?))

<Gopi was shivering by now... This was all too familiar... Was she dreaming? But didn't she just get up... Kanhaji... She struggled to get free but his hold tightened around her waist and her hands... Gopi tried looking away but couldn't... She had to look him in the eyes>

Gopi: Ahemji, woh aap ko halka sa bhukaar hai... Mein aap ke liye dawayi le aati hoon ((T: You have a slight fever, Ahemji... i will get the medicine for you ))

Ahem: Nahi, dawayi nahi kaam karegi... Mujhe dawayi nahi chahiye((No, the medicine won't work... I don't want it))

Gopi: Ji... <still struggling and failing to get up> Main...

Ahem : Main kya?

<Gopi closed her eyes... praying for strength and wondering where and when he had bhaang again>

Gopi : Mujhe jaane dijiye ((T: Leave me...))

<Ahem frowned. Clearly not liking her saying that. He pulled her closer so her face was nearly touching his>

Ahem : Aur agar naa jaane doon toh? ((T: And what if I don't leave you?))

<Gopi wasn't breathing now... Not wanting to believe where this was leading to... Before she could even try to figure out what to say or do next ... The most unexpected thing happened... Ahem let out a deep sigh and leaned his forehead on hers... Closing his eyes... Gopi nearly let out a faint cry as she saw a tear roll down his cheeks... one tiny tear... so small.. she would have missed it had she not been so close to him... Slowly her right hand went up to wipe it off...>

Gopi: Ahemji, kya baat hai? Aap ne koi bura sapna dekha? ((T: Ahemji, what happened? Did you see a bad dream?))

Ahem: Nahi sapna toh achcha tha... Bas woh... ((T: No, it was a good dream... Just that...))

<At this point he looked at her... Trying to find the love he dreamed of seeing in her eyes... and he did see it... but he also saw a veil of hesitation... fear... And it tortured him... He knew she loved him... He also knew that she was scared of him... Never free around him... This realization clicked something in his head and he loosened his grip on her, but not completely... He would never ever be able to get to her unless that fear left her... But it had... they had come so close and then suddenly...

aish..this part is the most awesome part of ur OS...gave me butterflies in my tummy..i got so shy..if i ever gopi..i wud have skipped many a heart beats...having ahemji so close and in this haalat 😆 😛 god u spinned such a fanstastic OS..cant stop reading it again and again...😊