OS: Ahem dikra aur meri Gopi vahu

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

sweety

@sweetsugar

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

The OS was absolutely amazing , i really want to see Ahem miss Gopi on the show like this , the ending was soo cute :D

Quote

ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Laila132

...im speechless.. Great work!!! Loved it! Hopefully things will improve and turn out positive.

Thank you so much Laila. I don't think CVs are stupid enough to turn Koki in a negative character. Whatever the track now, in the end it will all work out.

Originally posted by: NazmaJ
Brilliant OS!!!!!!!!

Absolutely loved and enjoyed it!!!

You've tapped into the hope that Koki is doing this ultimately to enhance GoHem's relationship and make them realise how important it is for them to concentrate on themselves rather than others!!!!

Thank you so much Nazma. Koki has always come up with the most off the wall brand of punishments, so I am not surprise by her behavior right now. Like locking Gopi in the store room because she thought Gopi broke her fast on Teej, or feeding Gopi after the dance competition because she thought Gopi's studies were more important and this is why she lost the competition. She hates losing at anything and recently, things have been building up in her mind more and more, Gohem helping Raji and in the process Ahem missing the meeting is the last straw for her.

Originally posted by: varshu27
fantastic shilpa...this scenario is a dream come true for us...hope the cvs have something even slightly remote like this planned...gopi and ahems pain was so real...absolutely loved it...🤗...thank u

Thank you so much Varshu. It is a dream scenario and lets hope something like this happen, because anything else would be unbearable.

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1
⭐️👏.. What else can I say Shilpa but awesome.. The story was so real and heart wrenching but I am glad the end was so beautiful.
I really do hope that Koki has a hidden agenda like your story. And I also hope Ahem misses Gopi like this when she stays away from him.. Thank you for the wonderful piece of fiction..

Thank you so much Harini. Yeah I too hope Koki is lot smarter than she is acting at this moment and hope she hasn't completely lost it.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: swasthi
Shilpa an outstanding OS. Well done.

You have described the three main characters thoughts very well indeed. You have brought out their true inner feelings and have made it look so real to the show.

This certainly could be one of Kokila's ideas for her bigger agenda. Aptly named titled too where Kokila is doing all this for her love for them.

Thanks so much Swasthi. These three are my favorite characters on the show, and I hope CVs are not stupid enough to turn this into a typical Saas/Vahu relationship. The will lose it's charm if they do.

The title was suggested by a friend of mine as we discussed what could make Koki act the way she is acting at this moment. I see it with my own eyes, but my heart does not believe, Koki has always come thru in the end and I expect nothing different this time.

Quote

ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Dhabu89
I was wondering if we could e-mail this OS to those useless CV's? I think this is something that they can work with..I loved this story. What a lovely thought of how things should go and be...Thank you for this wonderful story👏

Thank you so much Dhabu, I wish there was a way to send the CVs all of our OS and FFs but I don't see how this can be achieved, and even if they do see our posts, they have their own agenda.

Quote

ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL
omg!!! this was just heavenly!!!!! absolutely loved it!!!! i would be sooo happy if it plays out like this...its just brilliant...koki was sooo good...felt bad for gohem though...lolll this story made so much more sense than the crap that is shown on tv!! ugh!!!!! great os!!!!

Thank you so much Anshu. It would be nice if the story went something like this but for now we just have to wait and watch.

Originally posted by: sks21
wow that was just brilliant...
shilpaben really wonderful
felt bad for gohem a bit but in the end it turned out well
and koki was right...
loved the os

Thanks so much Kavya. I think we will get many bad moments before it gets better, we just have to hope CVs know what they are doing.

Originally posted by: Daisy15
Very nice...enjoyed readng it...

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: ANJ4
Aw shilpa that was fantastic ... what a nice OS ... I have been feeling crappy most of the week from SNS... atleast with you OS i feel pretty good. Thanks

Thank you so much Anju, glad this made you feel better for a while. Hopefully things will get better soon.

Originally posted by: maddy311
Shilpa that was awesome. Loved reading it and loved the positivity in it. Hope that's what CVs have in mind. Thanks for writing this😃

Thanks Maddy. Well we don't know what the CVs are doing, but it doesn't hurt to dream our version and hope for the best.

Quote

ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shruts18
lovely shilpa...😊

Thanks so much Shruti.

Originally posted by: taniks
Omg that was incredible , a little light at the end of the tunnel , I am holding on to this like a security blanket until I get disillusioned again on monday . Brilliantly narrated shilpa and immensely captiviting , those raw emotions of longing and pain was vividly portrayed. I read it twice loved it more the second tym , good old fashioned love ,selfless and sacrificing. You are a brilliant writer, thank you so much for trying to salvage kokis character.

Thank you so much Taniks. I really do hope this is little light at the end of the tunnel and I am reading Koki right, otherwise the CVs have wasted a year of my life. Lets wish for the best and hope it end in positivity.

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

wow...very nice OS, ben. I hope something like this happen...

Thank you so much Monyka, and I also hope this is what Koki has in mind rather than to see Gopi and Ahem apart.

Originally posted by: Scarlet28
Hey Shilpa, wonderful OS, another great idea for CVs to take on...very positive and i hope CVs do not turn Kokila more irrational and ugly.

Thank you so much Scarlet. I wish CVs would come read many of our posts and make some changes, but lets see what happens and hope the show doesn't loose it's charm.

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
shilpa... amazing,...beautiful...brilliant...perfect...superb...awesome...OS(any words missing)

now feeling better with koki...hope to see this in SNS... and

this is from me to you big barney 🤗😃

Thank you so much Munni. You are too kind. I think we will come to hate Koki even more before any of this gets better. Thanks for the big barney hug.😊

Quote

ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: tangam
A nice gentle easy going OS Shilpa..Just attended a funeral and needed some relief...you were balm to my shredded emotions thanx

Awe..Thanks so much tangam, I am glad this was able to lift your spirits a bit.

Originally posted by: angelirebelli
Fab OS !! Trust you to find Koki's hidden agenda 😉

Jokes part.. beautiful take on track..Loved the way Kokila played it all out and got the couple together !!

Great take, loved reading it...👏

Thank you so much Angeli. You know how I am Koki along with Gohem is my favorite SNS character and no matter how she breaths fire at time, she comes around eventually, it this right? No, but she has her own issues.

Originally posted by: _Precious_
lovely os shilpa. Hope CVs have some bigger plan like this from Kokila-Ahem rift track.

Thank you so much Precious. I too hope the CVs are planning something bigger than what they are showing now. Fingers crossed for the best.

Originally posted by: arampras
OMG Great OS loved reading it

Thank you so much.

Quote

ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: indu_shah
absolutely fantastic and awesome..shilpa..u did it again...the scenes are so much in sync with the show...if CVs are really intending to get gohem together...they can directly lift and shift ur OS into the show;s story...it is that perfect..and amazing..lovely...thank you for coming up with such a nice OS..lovely indeed...thanks for the PM dear...

Thank you so much Indu. I wish they would show it something like this, but sometimes it's hard to keep hoping because they have disappointed us many occasions, but lets see how this takes shape.

Originally posted by: SriB
A truly wonderful OS

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: lovv
nice...

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: navyab
Shilpa---liked the koki in your OS...hope she has a hidden motive with her current behavior...

You should continue this into an SS 😉 greedy me !!!

Thank you so much Navyab. I wish I could turn this into a SS, but my heart is not in writing anything related to show anymore, as nothing we wish for ever takes place. This is just my wish and hope that CVs are not stupid enough to turn Koki.

Quote

ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Dhabu89
I sincerely hope our Koki has a agenda similar to this...that is the only we I can see her becoming our favorite again😳

Thanks again Dhabu, I am hanging on by the thread here, but I did notice Koki's expression that is keeping my hope alive. The other thing is she has acted out like this in the past and come around. Yes this time it is worst than others, but this time more than one thing as made her frustrated and edgy, and Ahem's involvement in the whole situation has made her loose her cool big time. And to be honest with you if I were in Koki's place and my child hurt me to this extent to help someone like Rashi, I wouldn't be in my senses either.

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan
such a lovely OS!!i love the way you tell a story!i loved it!

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: sweetsugar
The OS was absolutely amazing , i really want to see Ahem miss Gopi on the show like this , the ending was soo cute :D

Thank you so much Saba. I hope we do get to see him miss her and get restless and frustrated.

Quote

shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

hope i m not late to comment shilpa. i m having netwrk prob.
i really loved this os. oww after a frustrating epi, your story was soothing to read. i hope that the real koki thnks like this.
i dont want to wait too long for aham and gopi to patch up.
this story was great

Quote

1 2 3 4 5

OS: Ahem dikra aur meri Gopi vahu - Page 4

Related Topics

Explore Topics