OS: Ahem dikra aur meri Gopi vahu

Justlikethat1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

⭐️👏.. What else can I say Shilpa but awesome.. The story was so real and heart wrenching but I am glad the end was so beautiful.

I really do hope that Koki has a hidden agenda like your story. And I also hope Ahem misses Gopi like this when she stays away from him.. Thank you for the wonderful piece of fiction..

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Shilpa an outstanding OS. Well done.

You have described the three main characters thoughts very well indeed. You have brought out their true inner feelings and have made it look so real to the show.

This certainly could be one of Kokila's ideas for her bigger agenda. Aptly named titled too where Kokila is doing all this for her love for them.

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Chika I meant to tell you Dr. Joshi in my FF was accidental, I forgot about the Dr. Joshi of SNS, but I am glad it worked out for you. My Dr. Joshi is way sexier.😉

AAHHH WAYAHHHAAAY!🥳

Party time, Thanks anyway!😆

P.S SORRY for the massive quote box i.e onversation on your fab OS!😆

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Dhabu89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

I was wondering if we could e-mail this OS to those useless CV's? I think this is something that they can work with..I loved this story. What a lovely thought of how things should go and be...Thank you for this wonderful story👏

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aNsHu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

omg!!! this was just heavenly!!!!! absolutely loved it!!!! i would be sooo happy if it plays out like this...its just brilliant...koki was sooo good...felt bad for gohem though...lolll this story made so much more sense than the crap that is shown on tv!! ugh!!!!! great os!!!!

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kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wow that was just brilliant...
shilpaben really wonderful
felt bad for gohem a bit but in the end it turned out well
and koki was right...
loved the os

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ANJ4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Aw shilpa that was fantastic ... what a nice OS ... I have been feeling crappy most of the week from SNS... atleast with you OS i feel pretty good. Thanks

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maddy311

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Shilpa that was awesome. Loved reading it and loved the positivity in it. Hope that's what CVs have in mind. Thanks for writing this😃

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taniks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Omg that was incredible , a little light at the end of the tunnel , I am holding on to this like a security blanket until I get disillusioned again on monday . Brilliantly narrated shilpa and immensely captiviting , those raw emotions of longing and pain was vividly portrayed. I read it twice loved it more the second tym , good old fashioned love ,selfless and sacrificing. You are a brilliant writer, thank you so much for trying to salvage kokis character.

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641345

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

wow...very nice OS, ben. I hope something like this happen...

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