SS: Ahem and Gopi Leave Home. Updated 04/08/2013

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

really great update.loved it totally.lets see what he does next.

keep going.

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Justlikethat1

@Justlikethat1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wonderfully written Xarina..👏 Will love to read more and see what Ahem decides..

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Xarina what a mindblowing first part of your SS.

A new concept of an independent minded Ahem. I am looking forward to reading the next part. Update soon.

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aNsHu

@aNsHu_tEjPaL

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

very interesting...u left it at a such interesting point...i am glad for once ahem is using his mind and thinking about his wife and child...can't wait to see how it plays out...will gopi be able to retain her new found independence or will she succumb to pressure of being kokila's dil

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Fahima

@famzii05

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

fabulous!! loved it soo much!!

i am old but not dead!!! 🤣

its your first SS and its great!!!

continue soon! xx

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hey xarina that was awesome , loved ahem making a life away from mm with gopi. Sad that two ppl who would move heaven and earth for her happiness she won't do the same for them . I am dying to know wot the husband and fsather in ahem will now do . Pls upate asap , beautifully written ,different from ut usual style but incredible nonetheless. The storyline is a breathe of fresh air ,very gripping was easy to be engulfed into the story.

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Wow really nice. But you should ve referred koki as kagdi would ve made me really happy! I cant wait to know wat happens next. Update soon. Thanks for the pm

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Xarina 1st off thanx for the pm.

that was alot for a start and loved it ...did you not miss a big part of the fb queen of steam (just kidding)...

that is def a path that Ahem can take and will not be done by the show so woohoo glad you took it upon yourself cos you know I love your stories...so...happy bigginnings...lookforward to baby Modi and his families journey...

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Scarlet28

@Scarlet28

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Hey Xarina, what an excellent SS. Hope they do not move back. Kokila should be taught that she cannot take things for granted and treat people like shit. You portrayed her very well. Another excellent idea for CV's to take on board.

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

xarina that was wonderful dear...
wish ahem will be like this in the serial...
gohem have a son now aww so sweet
so what will ahem decide? will he go back home??
looking forward to next update

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