OS: Ahem threatened by...

Hey, guys I have come up with another OS. I hope you will enjoy...you may find the first paragraph borrowed from the show and feedback from others on forum...Chika this one is for you.

Part 1

Kokila is angry and disappointed that the bangles were not for her but for Rashi instead. She observed Ahem giving it to Jigar and came to the conclusion that he was helping Rashi and Jigar out. The family have noticed that Jigar is rather cold towards Rashi. Kokila however feels that Rashi deserves this. She feels Rashi is still under her mum's influence and have not seriously repented for her actions.

Jigar is right in being angry with Rashi. Kokila went up to Ahem and asked him what was he thinking? You got Gopi Vahu to order kangan for Rashi , did you get one for Gopi vahu? No Mum I did not. What are you upset about? I got you a kangan which is coming in two days time? Wah, son I am really proud of you. You think of your sahli but not your wife! Tell me son other than the saree when have you ever gifted Gopi anything?

Mum I already told you before I am unsure of my feelings for Gopi. We are good friends for the moment...I want to take things slowly and make progress only when I am sure of how I feel about Gopi. I don't want Gopi to misunderstand how I feel by giving her a gift.

Kokila was shocked to hear this and just shook her head.

Kokila questioned Ahem, how long are you planning to make Gopi wait for you???

To that Ahem did not answer, he simply made some excuses and walked away. Ahem had not realised that Gopi witnessed this incident.

Part 2

The colony was celebrating Valentine's Day in a big way. There was going to be a big dinner and dance with a glamorous bollywood theme. Most of the rich and well known Gujarati family will be present and the Modis have bought tickets to the event.

Kokila and Hetal decided to purchase some sarees for this event. Since it is an exclusive event their sarees should also be exclusive. They decided to get designer sarees. Kokila remembered Tejas Patel and decided that they should get their sarees from him.

Upon Kokila's request, Tejas came to MM with his collection of sarees. However, no one was impressed with his current range. Tejas informed them that he was working on a new collection, however he needed time as he has hit a brick wall and unable to complete his design due to lack of creative ideas.

Kokila told him that money was not an issue, all they wanted was the best...Kokila thought for awhile and asked Tejas if he would work with Gopi to come up with the designs for all their sarees. Kokila reminder Tejas about Gopi's design on his previous outfit that he gifted her.

Tejas was very pleased. He himself said that he had thought of asking for Gopi's help but was unsure how the family reaction to it. Tejas was please with the decision and agreed to come to MM until the project is finish.

Kokila made space in the guestroom for them to set up their workshop. Tejas had a working table, instruments and materials delivered to MM.

Part 3

As planned, Tejas arrived just before the men left for office that day. Ahem was surprised to see Tejas. Tejas explained that he is here to work on his new designs with Gopi. This idea did not sit well with Ahem. He turn to look at his mum who simply ignored him and ask Tejas to have some breakfast before he starts work. He asked Gopi vahu to serve Tejas breakfast. He had not liked him for giving Gopi a gift.

Ahem and the rest left for office. Gopi and Tejas set to work. Tejas was a very easy going person like Jigar. He made Gopi comfortable with him almost immediately. While working they came up with some very good ideas. Tejas appreciated Gopi's talent and intelligence. He really enjoyed working with her.

Ahem decided to come home earlier than usual that day. He was looking for Gopi and was told that she is working in the guest room. He walked in and was shocked to see Tejas with Gopi . Both were sitting very close to one another , heads bend over a large piece of paper. They seem to be laughing over some private joke. Curiously he walked over to them. Gopi on seeing Ahem quickly put her pallu on her head. Tejas noticed this. Decided he will ask her why later.

Ahem had a scowl on his face and asked Gopi for tea. Ahem turned to Tejas and asked him how long does he intend on working with Gopi. Before Tejas could respond, Kokila who was standing behind him replied as long as it takes for the designs to be completed.

Ahem did not like the sound of that but did not let on his feeling by keeping on his poker face.

Auntyji, I must tell you that I really enjoyed working with Gopi today she is so talented and has a beautiful personality. You are so lucky to have her as a daughter in law. My mum would have love to have a DIL like her too. Ahemji you are lucky to have a beautiful and talented wife. She is such a good cook too.

Instead of feeling proud, Ahem could not understand why he was feeling annoyed that another man was singing praises and admiring his wife. Ahem was glaring at him. Kokila noticed.

Later that day she called both Rashi and Jigar to her room. She gave both of them a lecture about relationships. She explained to Rashi why Jigar was still annoyed with her. She asked Rashi to repent and truly change her ways if she wants to save her marriage. She also told them how Gopi has been helping them mend their relationship with Ahem's help. Ahem is too blind to see that he loves Gopi and really needs a kick up his bump, for this she would need their help. They both willingly agreed.

Part 4

Two days later... Ahem went to work early in a foul mood. Snapping angrily at everybody. Jigar walked into his office pretending not to notice that his bhai was in a bad mood. Instead, he casualy mentioned that he noticed a difference in Gopi Bhabi. Since working with Tejas, she seems extremely happy and confident.

Ahem thought to himself, Since Gopi has been working with Tejas, she has hardly been in their room. She is constantly working in the guest room and for two nights in a row had slept there as well. Ahem actually missed her presence in the room and for the first time in his life he actual felt empty without her in the room. He could see that Gopi was more comfortable with Tejas than with him. But isn't that what he wanted, he asked himself confused?

Again he came home from work as usual and found that Tejas was still working with Gopi. He was about to walked into the guestroom when he witnessed Tejas questioning Gopi about her pallu. Why do you have it on only when Ahemji is around? Does he not like seeing your face totally? Gopi looked at him shocked. She gave a sad and embarrassed look instead said that it is out of an old and shy habit of hers. Tejas then went on to tell her that if she was his wife , he would never allow her to cover herself with a pallu, he would want to see all of her face as she is beautiful. Gopi felt embarrassed by the compliments.

At that moment, she turned around to find Ahemji looking at them. This time you could almost see the green eyed monster in him. He was furious. Tejas said they had done enough for the day and left. Ahem asked Gopi for his green tea. When she took it up to the room, she found him pacing up and down. She asked him if everything was alright, he just glared at her and left the room. Gopi felt worried and confused. She could not understand what she had done wrong.

Part 5

The day came when Tejas work with Gopi had finished. He told her he would miss her company and truly enjoyed working with her. He said this in front of the whole family. He took out the sarees they designed for Kokila and Hetal. Both were very impressed by the colours and design of their sarees . Hetal has a turquoise and yellow combination in soft crepe silk with lots of embroidery and mirror works. Kokila's was different from the saree she usually wears. She also in a soft crepe silk in deep pink with a combination of black embroidery and mirror works. Rashi's was a black and red combination gahgra designed for her with lots of stone work. Rashi was impressed with her outfit. To add to the surprise all the gentlemen were also presented with a kurta to match their wives outfit.

Kokila paid Tejas for his work. Tejas took the money but he felt that Gopi truly deserved half of that money as he could not have come up with a better design without her help. He knew that Gopi would refuse payment and had hence on his own designed a saree for her. It is in organza soft gold with lots of stone work; very elegant and tastefully designed.

Ahem did not like the idea of Gopi wearing something that Tejas gifted her again. By now, he was fuming and therefore did not open to see his kurta.

After Tejas left, they all went up to their rooms to admire their outfits. Ahem just threw his box aside.

He close the door, turned around and faced Gopi. Gopi asked him to open his box. Ahem's kurta was in a two tone green blue combination. He was angry. He asked her why she had designed his in those colours. She simply said they looked good on him and they were his favourite colours.

Again not satisfied with her answer, he asked why his outfit did not match the outfit Gopi is going to wear to the function. He asked Gopi, you are going to wear what Tejas gifted you aren't you?

Gopi asked him, Why do you care if our outfit match or not?

With that question Ahem snapped. He asked Gopi if there was something on between Tejas and her. Gopi looked at him hurt. Why should there be, she asked. I noticed you were getting particularly close, Ahem replied. He always seem to be in the need to present you with a gift. Gopi just replied, that Tejas makes her feel comfortable like Jigar. He is simple nice, friendly and easy to talk too.

Gopi asked Ahem why does it bother him so much that she is friendly with Tejas. Something also snapped in her. She has always loved Ahem so much and never once thought of the way he had treated her in the past. Today however, she felt different, she felt she deserve to be treated better and Ahem needs to be clear as to where she stood with him.

Gopi could not stop herself, once again she said why it bothers you that our outfit does not match. As far as we are concern we are not a couple. Our marriage is in name only. Have you forgotten that I had taken back our marriage vows to keep you happy.

Only recently, you told your Mum that what you feel for me is only friendship. So I do not understand why you are upset over Tejas and the fact that he gave me another gift.

With that Gopi left the room to cool off. Ahem was amazed, he has never seen Gopi angry before. He has always seen the kind, giving, loving and selfless Gopi. He felt ashamed of himself. He realised that Gopi has always done everything according to his wishes. She made every effort to put his needs before her own. She never complained. She was right unless he made things right between them, he really had no rights over her. He could not go on treating her like this. He has to make a decision as to what would be best for them.

Part 6

After what happened the night before, Gopi was in no mood to go to the function. First time she has really felt hurt by Ahem. How dare he think so lowly of her, questioning her about Tejas. Doesn't he know just how much she loves him.

Gopi told Kokila that she does not feel well and does not want to go to the function. Gopi had not realised that Rashi had spied on Gohem and told Kokila exactly what took place in Gohem's room.

Kokila thought hard and came up with a plan. She told Rashi to persuade Gopi to go. So both Jigar and Rashi went on with this task. Finally Gopi agreed. Rashi also told Gopi that she will help her dress for the function.

Under Kokila's instruction, Parag and Chirag made some excuse about a community meeting , left early. They told their wives that they will see them at the function. Kokila asked Ahem to drive Hetal and her to the venue early. Gopi could come later with Jigar and Rashi.

Ahem realised that since the night before Gopi has been avoiding him. He did not blame her for her reaction. In order to appease her, he wore the kurta she designed for him. He looked really good in it. Gopi was quietly admiring him from the corner of her eyes. He told Gopi he will see her later at the function and left.

As soon as Ahem left, Rashi got on to work. She got set on the task of doing Gopi's hair. She side parted her hair. She took a pair of hot rods and made some light curls on Gopi long straight strands, pinned her hair up on one side. She applied some light make up on Gopi. Instead of the lipstick Gopi usually used, she applied some simmering gloss on her lips. She looked so sweet and kissable. Wait...she is not finished yet.

She took out the outfit Gopi was going to wear, helped Gopi put it on. She refused to put the pallu on despite Gopi's insistence.

Both Jigar and Rashi admired Gopi. Jigar told Gopi, Ahem will not be able to resist her. Gopi however looked doubtful.

Once everyone was ready, they set off for the function. At the entrance of the function hall there was a flower stand, it was cute to see Parag and Chirag buying a rose for their wives. Jigar rewarded Rashi with one too.

Ahem has been patiently waiting for Gopi to arrive. He kept looking at the entrance. Kokila noticed this and kept distracting him with questions about his work. Finally, he saw Jigar and Rashi walking in together but he could not see Gopi. He got up and walked up to them. He asked Jigar,"where is Gopi?" Both Jigar and Rashi parted, Gopi was right behind them. Ahem never looked so surprised before. Gopi looked stunning.

Gopi lowered her eyes feeling shy. Like a reflex action, she quickly picked up her pallu to cover her head but Ahem stopped her. Then he noticed something else, she was wearing a ghagra and not the saree that Tejas gave her. Her gargra was in the combination of the colour of the sea and similar to his kurta. At that moment, he felt like a total idiot for the way he had behaved towards Gopi.

He took her hands and headed for the gardens outside the function hall. He looked nervous and hesitant, he finally told Gopi that she looked stunning. He held a rose up to Gopi and asked her if she will be his Valentine's.

Gopi did not respond immediately, just looked at him puzzled. Ahemji, do you know what you are asking of me? He said yes, I love you very much Gopiji and I want you to be my Valentine. Gopi's eyes started brimming with tears. Ahem asked her not to cry, she looked too beautiful it will ruin her face. He asked her to give him another chance, he wants to spend the rest of his life making up for all the mean things he has said and done to her. He told Gopi that he realised that life wouldn't be the same without her. He has never loved anyone the way he loves her. He was once foolish enough to think that he loved no one other than Anita. Today, it is Gopi that held the key to his heart and only she had the power to crush it.

Gopi could not help herself, she threw herself onto him and said "I love you very much Ahemji."

Both were oblivious to the fact that the rest of the family was watching on with tears in their eyes and smiles on their faces. They all went back into the function hall, giving Gohem some privacy.

Ahem held Gopi's face in his hand and brought her lips to his. Gopi felt shy at first and tried to pull away. But Ahem anticipating this held her tightly; he continued kissing her gently and only increased the pressure when he felt her responding to his kiss. He thought of the night ahead and how much fun he was going to have with his shy and innocent wife in the privacy of their bedroom.

No one deserved to be loved more than Gopi did and finally Kanahji has rewarded her for all her selflessness.

The end.

Wow it was really very cute. A vday confession and sr!! Raji helping gohem i like that as well! Chika will be really happy that tejas is in it as well

really great OS...thank you so much for this...

great os 👍🏼... wish koki gives a lecture to rashi..romantic v day indeed😛

That was so beautiful ,I think this os catered for everybodies hopes , chika definitely got her share with both her men playing active roles and her tejas was played such an important part.raji fans would be thrilled ,on behalf of goki fans I would say I loved it and thank u but the happiest by far would be the gohem fans aawwwesuuummm os , beautiful storyline , fiesty gopi and a jealous ahem but eventually romantic ahem wot more could we ask for except the we see this onscreen. Thank you again ,I loved it ,loved it ,loved it

Thank you so much for all your wonderful response and encouragement. Cheers

wow fantastic.. great OS..

Tejas( where is chikaa... she will feel very happy) :)

realllyy too good.. thanks for such a lovely OS

Oh Scarlett. I love you for this OS. You gave Gopi some grit and made Ahem realise what a prize fool he had been. And it was frok start to finish. I love how you brought Tejas into this and how all the characters were so positive. In the words of Ahem, "perfect.".
X xx