OS:Bond Couple - 4th Update -Pg-11(Feb 18th) - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

munni great update.
bond series are going to reach iconic status. i love each update and it is fun and intriguing to reach one.
i just cant get enough of bond series.
after reading each update i go to the show and see it in the light of bond series.
well done, great work, keep posting.


hahaha thank you shruti dear... glad u like them... truly they look so different from the bond angle😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: arampras

really enjoyed 1st part


thank you😃

Originally posted by: arampras

OMG .. what a wonderful imagination... i Just love your story , thank you for put it down on paper for us to read... please keep going.


awww thank you ...glad u like them😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: saathiya93

I just read the first update, and it is really interesting, it reminds me a lot about Mr & Mrs Smith movie!

do agent ahem and secret agent gopi (😆) have the same director?! and who might it be?!
I go for baa!!!
I'm gonna read the second update now


hehehe thanks Mina... yep it's similar to Mr and Mrs Smith...but SNS style😆

Originally posted by: saathiya93

hehe nice!!

hmm nice scheme for the kangan!


thank you Mina... yeah kangan story😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: tangam

Hey Munni

Could not read over the wknd so catchin up now...
lame is what the cv's r givin us yours is genius babe...



haha thanks tangam...glad i am not lame😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Dasuni

Excellent work munni...! Love the way of agent 007


Thank you nilu glad u like it😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Mission : Staying Home


Gopi tried all possibilities to get the card to the locker room from Ahemji's chain... she tried with the pigeon Mr.Grey Kite...but that instead of a hug landed as a kiss creating a distance between them...But gopi being the spy thought quickly and started talking to him in the pretext of gifting something to Rashi on behalf of Jigar..They started talking...now gopi's hopes are on Rashi's birthday party... so that somehow she could come close to him...

She further thought ...even by the pretension of helping raji... she is not able to get close to him as to take the card from the chain... so she thought enough is enough... need to stop this RaJi drama... but then Ahemji will go to office all day...how will she get to him... thinking seriously she
she made a phone call...

Before the party... she calls parekh bhai "ji parekh bhai.. can you please send the bangles to the party.. it's very near to your shop" "nahi beta..i don't mind sending it to home" "nahi parekh bhai we are just starting and we need the bangles at the party venue" saying so gopi hang up '.
Parag bhai called Agent 007 "Ahem dikra ..is it ok if i send the bangles to the venue" "but why"asks Agent 007 "u all will be leaving by the time i send the bangles home" said parekh bhai "ok" Ahem hangs up the phone...

In the party venue, gopi is thinking very cleverly to get close to Ahemji at any cost...she sits beside him...when jigar asks her to shift ...even before she could say a word the Agent sprang up and ordered jigar to sit beside Rashi...which worked in gopi's favour... she is trying ways to get close to him...but no chance with RaJi sitting right across them...After the cake cutting... After receiving a call Ahemji goes out to take the bangles from the store guy... once inside... she starts... Ahem was about to give her...but she looks at koki staring at them...and implements the next step...

"Ahemji why don't you go and give devarji yourself"...Ahem leaves to give the Kangan to Jigar..this infuriates koki to the end...Koki overhears Ahem telling jigar that it was his plan to get the kangan... koki is in maha anger mode...

The couples are asked to dance...gopi who is waiting for the golden chance is ready to dance... but the Agent who has to act all innocent in front of his mom and others just stands there...gopi stands their cursing him and her stars ...but still gives a fake smile to him...and stands there... party is over ' still gopi did not succeed in the plan...and still she has to get herself and Ahemji out of RaJi's issues


think gopi think...you are smart enough... she said to herself..."Gopi why don't you go and get the kangan from the store... the money is in the closet" said Ahem leaving to work...gopi calls her chief "Chief i have a plan up my sleeve... can you just find out the number of Mr.Desai and tell him to complete his meeting by 3:30 p.m. with Ahemji...so that Mr.Desai could be in Ahemedabad by night for another meeting" "ok gopi i trust u..and your sincerity towards your work"...

Gopi's chief pulls few strings to help gopi...meanwhile "Ahemji...i am really scared to go alone and get the bangles" "ok gopi wait for me will go out .." "but maaji" "don't worry i will talk to mom"
gopi smirks..that her mission is on the way..."mom me and gopi are going out " "but dikra where are you going" "mom i can't tell you now...will tell later" koki who is already pissed off with the bangles in party is further infuriated...

Agent 007 and his spy wife are out - gopi texts her chief ...chief pulls a few strings makes Mr.Desai come for the meeting a good one hour before...luckily Jigar was doing the presentation...Koki is superly duperly pissed off...Meeting is over... Agent and his spy wife are back... gopi thinks "Tagged the target..." seeing kok's anger which is ready to blast off
Mr.Desai leaves...

"Gopi go and give these to mom", said the agent..."no Ahemji ' she will feel happy if you give yourself to her...so you only go and give them to her" Ahemji super impressed with the suggestion... unaware of the storm he is going to face walks to his mom's room..."Tada tada tada...blast off" Ahemji all sad for making mom angry...gopi smirks outside...Gopi knowing her maaji expected her to punish Ahemji and blast him not to help RaJi...

As gopi felt helping them is no way being any benefical to her... so to get them out of their lives...she planned out cleverly so koki knows about Ahemji giving kangan to RaJi...ignoring his work to help gopi and rashi...As expected koki blasted Ahemji for helping Rashi...for which gopi was very happy... as now they are officially out of the RaJi thing...

but the icing on the cake for gopi is Ahemji staying home... she felt if Ahemji is staying home that means lot of chances to get close to him...she saw him pressing the clothes...went to offer him some help...but he did not give in...but her dreams are short lived as her maaji said not to disturb Ahemji...and divert from his work '."divert from work ..what work...is pressing clothes a work" gopi thought in her mind...

She started covering her pallu and avoiding him making yearn to come near too her...she used to go to the room only after he sleeps,...was waiting to get a chance to take the card from his chain...

will the future events let gopi succeed in her work...
What will happen if Ahem goes back to work...
How will she find her opportunities with the hide-n-seek game...


p.s: bond take on the last weeks episodes...nothing interesting and captivating...as there were not many gohem scenes



Edited by munnihyderabad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Jeeej me first😳
Amazing Update Love your ff very Funny

Cant wait too read the next part
Thanks for the pm dear
Edited by X.Sisi94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Nice take on the week's episodes. I like how you play them off against each other. Good.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
wonderful munni...liked the part where the agent just stood instead of dancing cos he had to act innocent in front of his mom..lol...hopefully we get more gohem this week and u can pen ur magic again...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
An interesting take Munni!!!!
Loved it!!!
Really enjoying it being Gopi who is manipulating the situations like this!! Poor Ahem!!!

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