OS:Greed - Page 3

👏👏👏👏I'm hooked to your writing Shilpa...enjoyed how it all played out...Pl update your SS as usual it is finger biting good and I am runnign out of fingers

Shilpa Greed was outstanding.

Originally posted by: JakeR

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Remember me? Yes its the same Jake...ahhahaha...i am first to comment finally..

Rashi aint greedy 😭 ... i loved this OS...you have really evolved into a professional...and i am proud to be ur brother 👏

PS: congrats on masters...i know i was missing n i might be for another few days.. miss ya all...esp my tantrum girl 😉 Ms. Daffy Duck

😲😲😲 You are coming back in few days, that's what you told me three weeks ago😡 And you have a nerve to ask me if I missed you.

My dearest brother Rashi will forever remain Greedy in SNS, but fear not I may have a surprise coming your way in the near future. You are going to worship your sweet sister and eat your words.

Awe..But you are my sweetest brother, and I miss you. It's about time that Hitler let you loose, run away or let me send a rescue party.😆


I am finally finished with school, received my good news first thing Sunday morning, I had been on edge since Thursday. Now on to hunt for a new position. Thanks for the congrats, but you left me when I was on the edge and biting my nails during my boards so you owe me.

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

interesting story!! loved it...too much greed brought their downfall!!!! brilliant!!!!

Thank you Anshu, it will be greed that brings them down eventually, but I hope its soon.

Originally posted by: varshu27

that was wonderful...urshi never will change...atleast now ahem knows the truth about the necklace and gopi has seen her so called sisters true face...

Thanks so much Varshu. No I don't see the Urshi duo change, and Rashi proved that to us today when she told her mom to steal the lottery tickets. Apple doesn't fall far from the tree.

Originally posted by: ShaunSA

Cool OS! 😎 The time just slipped by reading it 👍🏼

Thanks so much Shaun, glad you enjoyed the OS.

Originally posted by: sks21

wow that was just brilliant👏love it
its a perfect way to bring out their true colours in the serial too
loved the os a lot

Thanks so much Kavya. I want to see them bring out all the truths one way or another. The fact that Rashi doesn't realize that Ahem is helping Gopi could come in handy for Gopi in the future.

Originally posted by: Sandy914

Super Super Super Like.. Greedy Khaiki's, what a wonderful story shilpa.. How nice it would be , if this happens in Serial :)

Thanks so much Sandy. It would be very nice if the kalakari's were brought out this way.

Originally posted by: SNS_fan101

very interesting, lovely os! 😊

Thank you Mandy, glad you liked the OS.

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

What an OS.. all that the creatives need to expose UrShi ...

Fab take yet again S.. loved it !!

Please keep 'em coming !! 😊

Thanks Angeli. Agree they do need to expose the kalkari's but I guess they have no plans as of yet.

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

Good one.. Hope this happens in SNS.. But Rashi and Urmila are never caught like this 😭

Thanks so much, I know how you feel, I am the same way, but we just have to wait and hope some day our wish is granted.

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

RES!👏

Wonderful, Wonderful, Wonderful as usual!😛

Thanks so much Chikka. Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: Xarina

OMG. That was the best. I must admit that when I was reading it I wanted to turn Urmila and Rashi into piatas (for anyone who is not sure, these are stuffed toys, always a donkey, filled with sweets. They are hung up and people wear a blindfold and beat them with a stick to try and get at the sweets. Although these two wouldn't even know the meaning of sweet!). Felt sorry that Ahem paid out the money. Well done. X xx

Thank you so much Xarina. Know exactly what you mean, had one of the pinatas at one my kids BD party, that's what Koki should have done to those two on Gopi's BD.😆 Gopi should get the first hit, like when she beat up Rashi during the ghost track.😃

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

brilliant os!!

this is the perfect way to expose them!

Thanks so much, and I hope the CVs are reading our pleas.

Originally posted by: navyab

Loved the OS shilpa...I could imagine all the scenes in front of my eyes...Gopi being accused...Rashi & Kinjle taunting her & then Koki taking her away ...with Ahem following 😉

Thanks so much Navyab. This is what I want to see, I actually had thought about writing the Koki, Gopi and Ahem scene to end it, but left it for the future.

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

I loved this story!!! But I always love the ones where Rashi and Kinjal's truths come pouring out for everyone!!!!

Love the way Ahem supported Gopi and even though Kokila knew something was up with GoHem her trust in Gopi's innate goodness still came through!!!

I always love reading your stories!

Thanks so much Nazma. I so want to see all the truth come out and hope that CVs don't leave us hanging. Our Ahemji is a changed man, he now believes his wife can do no wrong. Koki is the best she will always stand behind Gopi.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

really nyc os..whn will thr kalakaris will cum out

Thanks so much Tina. I hope its soon we get to see these two and Kinjal exposed.

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94

Amazing os lOved it 👏

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: tangam

👏I'm hooked to your writing Shilpa...enjoyed how it all played out...Pl update your SS as usual it is finger biting good and I am runnign out of fingers

Thank you so much tangam, and you are very sweet, I happy that you like my writings, and thanks so much for the encouragement and motivations.

I am working on the update for the SS, kind of got sidetracked for few days.

Originally posted by: swasthi

Shilpa Greed was outstanding.

I could hear the turmoil backgroumd music as the events unfolded in Modi Bhavan. It was so dramatic.

Well written out and great use of emotive language.

Thank you so much Swasthi.

I actually got an idea from a friend as I was chatting with her, and this is exactly how I pictured it also. The title was her idea also, and I instantly went for it.

I have a feeling if and when the kalakari's are exposed they will be just as dramatic if not more.

wow shilpa loved the OS... cool way to bring out the necklace khalakari and also urshi's greediness... finally they are out... me happy😃