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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is my first OS guys so please like and leave comments. Enjoy now 😊

Standing outside his room he is thinking, "wow today she has finished her work quickly. Everyday she is busy in kitchen till late night and we don't get time for us. But tonight is our night. Thank you god. Tonight I am going to give her everything she deserves, with this thought he enters the room. A strange nervousness can be seen on his face. He has never been so nervous in his entire life but then what happened today? At mere sight of his wife sitting on the bed in a beautiful red saree, froze him on his place. Thank god she didn't notice me entering. He is confused as what he should do tonight. After all its his first experience. His brother did give him some tips but he couldn't understand a word in his fear. How is she going to react? I don't know how to make her happy. I don't know her taste.

He collected all his courage and started to walk towards the bed. His heart was jumping with anxiety of what is to come. With each step his heartbeat was increasing. Strange thoughts surrounded his mind again. Afraid but excited he kept taking small steps towards her. A 5 step distance looked like 5 miles to him. At last he reaches the bed and slowly sits besides her. "aap" she asks surprised. "I didn't see you coming". He didn't responded back. She felt a strange look in his eyes that she had never seen till now. What's on his mind, she thought. He could feel that she was trembling slightly. She moved away slightly. "Ji do you need something", she asked. "No……….yes..I mean no". She got a bit confused.

He removed her pallu from the head. Wow she looks so beautiful. Her skin is so soft but I never noticed. I am a fool to not see her beauty to this day. He was completely lost in her beauty while she was looking in his eyes with a confused expression. "Ji, Why are you seeing me like this?" busy staring at her, he didn't hear her voice. Two more times she asked the same question in her gentle voice but no response. She was feeling very awkward with his gaze. At last she put her hand on his shoulder and pushed him slightly to bring him back into senses. "Ji are you alright?" "wo…wo actually" He started stammering and stood up. Oh no what is this, she is gonna come to know my fear…….No I won't be afraid now. He calmed himself down and blurted out "I…..I love you". She couldn't believe her ears. Did he really say that? She was blushing and her face went completely red. She turned her back towards him but couldn't stop smiling. He spotted the opportunity and sat down close to her and hugged her waist from behind. He put his chin on her shoulder. He started to place kisses on her neck and her back. His touch felt like a shock to her. "Ji what are you doing this". Ignoring her question he moved her face towards himself. She kept her eyes down as she was feeling shy to look at him. Her shyness added to the beauty of her already beautiful face. He cupped her face in his hands and slowly moved his lips towards hers. She closed her eyes immediately. He kept coming close until they could feel each other's breathing. He stopped there to take a look of her expression. Her breathing was getting heavy. She was confused with what is taking him so long. She tried to open her eyes to check but as soon as she opened her eyes their lips had joined. Both of them, the love starved love-birds started kissing each other passionately. They were enjoying the feeling of their first kiss ever when baa knocks on the door of their room "kokila vahu I am having a lot of pain in my knees, can you massage my legs tonight". Kokila hears this and immediately breaks the kiss. Cursing her saas, she opens the door with a heavy heart. She knew the night was ruined thanks to baa.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg maddy trust me when i started reading and there were no names i knew it would be a parag os coz i know ur love for him!! 😉 i was laughin and enjoying the romantic moments between korag. The best part was baa disturbing them so tat might be the reason why koki disturbs gohem. Hmmm wow i hope u write part two would love to c them actually romance and get together. One thing really nice was koki dint misbehave with parag. Brilliant os!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Whoa dude!

Kokila and Parag...Unchartered territory.
I wondered who the brother was at the beginning...I mean Ahem would never take advice from Jigar...But Man...that was shocking.

Excellent work!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it some how I have feeling when goham about to have there SR someone is gone came and nock on the door koki,baa ,rashi or meethi and spoil it for goham
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibz88

Omg maddy trust me when i started reading and there were no names i knew it would be a parag os coz i know ur love for him!! 😉 i was laughin and enjoying the romantic moments between korag. The best part was baa disturbing them so tat might be the reason why koki disturbs gohem. Hmmm wow i hope u write part two would love to c them actually romance and get together. One thing really nice was koki dint misbehave with parag. Brilliant os!!


you are spot on vibha. I made baa to disturb them exactly cuz she disturbs my beloved gohem😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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excellent. superb os.
i desperately needed some one to write about parag and kokila.
thanks for it.🤣
had a good laugh.
please continue some more
yeh dil mange more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ever

Loved it some how I have feeling when goham about to have there SR someone is gone came and nock on the door koki,baa ,rashi or meethi and spoil it for goham


I feel the same 😆 It will be better if they go somewhere else on their honeymoon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthi2010

excellent. superb os.
i desperately needed some one to write about parag and kokila.
thanks for it.🤣
had a good laugh.
please continue some more
yeh dil mange more



yeah sure when I get some idea I will write more on them
and congrats on your 2000 posts
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆 I had Ahem & Gopi while reading the end was something else 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great os...what a twist at the end...koki blushing and shy ..lol...incredible and hilarious...

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