Hold My Hand (PG 4 Ch 1)Note Pg7 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice intro plz continue want hear mre this is great...





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Thanks a lot for the wonderful response you all have given me to be able to write the first part so soon! I value each and every comment, so please keep them coming.. I promise you all that i will be updating it regularly...
Jasmine


The Unforgettable Memories

Hello, it looks that you are a new admission here! came a husky voice from about 2 steps away from where she was standing..
She turned around to check who called her.. yes, i am a new admission..
Hi, i am Ahem.. May i please know your name?
My name is Gopi and i am here to study BCA.
Oh, what a coincidence.. i am also doing BCA 2nd year..
Thats good, thanks for telling me.. um, can you please guide me to the reception?
Yeah sure, so miss Gopi, can I know more about you and your family?
gopi does not utter a word, instead runs away...
Gopi... hey what happened? did i say something wrong? i am sorry dear... common now smile please...
Gopi looks at him as if asking him why did he ask about her family and runs away from his sight

What made her run? why was she crying? Oh, God i can't believe what have i done just now... i have to find out the reason why did she cry... But how will i do it...

Gopi is running frantically and all the students are giving weird looks to her... she reaches the girls hostel and runs into her room...

she takes out a photograph of her parents and cries her heart out.
she talks to the Photograph

Why did you leave me? why did you save me that day...? if you all had to go, then why did you not take me along with you? Mom, Dad i miss you a lot...
Gopi is crying and Ahem is in deep thoughts...
i wish everything is fine with her... i am so stupid i could not even taker contact number... i am very sure that she was hiding something from me... but how will i figure it out... will she talk to to me??

on the other hand Gopi is remembering all the moments she had spent with her parents and is crying...

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so in this part i have just tried to bring out the characters of Gopi and Ahem.. what had happened to the parents of Gopi, what will Ahem do to know the reason behind the strange behaviour of Gopi... will Gopi ever forget her past, and will we ever get Gohem... to get answers to all these questions, please keep on reading my FF Hold My Hand!


How was this mini update?? did you like it? or you have some other ideas brewing up in your mind...? please feel free and share them with me..
Jasmine


Edited by jasminedayal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great part.nice update.poor gopi.hope ahem brings a smile on her face
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THAT WAS LOVELY TO READ,IT WAS A PLEASURE,AWWW OMG POOR GOPI,I FEEL SO SORRY FOR HER AND AHEM UNKNOWINGLY HURT HER,AWWW WHAT A LOVELY AND EMOTIONAL BEGGINING!,SO SWEET.PLEASE PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE :) CONTINUE SOON,I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE (SORRY FOR CAPS LOCK)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start Jasmine, continue soon! love this part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing start Cant wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update!! really nice...poor gopi, ahem will hold her hand for sure!! continue soon!! ...xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start . Cant wait to read more. Poor gopi i wish ahem helps her bring a smile on her face
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start ... can't wait to read the next part ...
ohh poor gopi😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsk16

great part.nice update.poor gopi.hope ahem brings a smile on her face




Thanks a lot!! Ahem will keep on trying to bring a smile on her face, and we may see some more scenes too :P

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