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Posted: 13 years ago
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Enjoyed the SS...well Im sure the last thing Gopi can take is Ahem's dinner with Anitha...& thats when she should turn around & say Im done with this relationship...😛 Let me hurt even badly then what he has done to her !!!
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its very nice love it jst little sad for gopi she will be hurt when she will learn about anita but i think it will be a nice part to coming im sure ahem will realize the love for gopi when he will be with anita please pm me for next part come soon cant wait to long
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you for all your wonderful feedback. Here goes the next chapter.


Chapter 4

Gopi hands were busy folding the clothes in her room while her thoughts were all over the place. She wondered about Aham's phone call this morning and the one after that when he asked her if she was ok. Her husband was a really complicated person. "Why does he have to ask me if I was ok like 10 times on the call?" She thought. and automatically smiled to herself. Her husband was also such a sweet person at times. It just made her fall in love with with all over again.
"Stop Gopi." She chided herself. "Pull yourself together. How many times will you have to fall before you understand that the concern he shows is only because he thinks you are his friend. Nothing more remember. He has made it clear.. So just don't ruin what you have by dreaming for what you cannot have.."
Gopi sighed. She knew she should be grateful. Before Aham she had not had friends. And he had been a true friend to her that day. Hence she had made her Maaji promise that she would not have pressure Aham to say anything he did not want. But Maaji had disagreed. She had been angry and disappointed at Ahamji that day. That day was still fresh on her mind. It was the day when Gopi's hopes had come crashing down. Again but this time it had not been Aham's fault.

It had all started after Rashi Ben's kidnapping and Gopi's hospitalization. When Gopi opened her eyes, she saw her Ahamji and Maaji, both with a look of happiness on their face staring at her. The days that followed had been bliss. Ahamji had made sure that he was by her side all the time and Maaji.. Maaji had been there like a mother. Gopi's eyes started to water as soon as she remembered those days. It was the first time she had experienced what a mother would do for her daughter. She had seen it when her Maami took care of Rashi ben but she never was fortunate to experience that kind of love. Her Maaji had made it possible. Maaji had been stern on her diet and exercises. She had showered her love on her and had told her that all Gopi had to do was get well quickly. And Ahamji.. He had been no exception. In between them Gopi had quickly and steadily gotten better everyday.
Gopi gave a silent laugh. It was also around this time that she discovered that Ahamji was an expert in board games. When she had come back from the hospital, she had been bored to death and one night she had asked Ahamji to play Ludo with her. She still thought that her boredom had made her go crazy that day because otherwise she would never have had the courage. Surprisingly Aham had said yes and had played the game with great interest. They had played well into the night and Ahamji had been late next morning.
Gopi cringed inwardly. The next day morning had been embarrassing for her and Ahamji as Maaji had come in inquiring why he was late. Gopi had been frightened when Ahamji told her about the Ludo game. She thought Maaji would be angry. But instead Maaji had given a long look at Ahamji, told him not to repeat it again and had left. Gopi had not been able to meet Ahamji's eyes after that...

"Gopi Vahu.. Are you finished with the clothes?" Kokila came in to see Gopi deep in thought. She trailed off and stood looking at her Bahu and her face softened. "Thank you god for sending her to me." Kokila thought and then she saw Gopi's expression became sad. "Aham Dikra. When will you realize?" She scolded her son mentally.

Kokila had really thought that her son had changed after Gopi's near death experience. It was so obvious to see. Aham had been ready to kill the next person. He had been so distraught that day. And after that his obsessiveness with Gopi's health. God. Kokila could not help but smile at how childish her son had been that time. He had missed work!! And played Ludo all night?.. She shook her head. But then sobered. "What went wrong after that Dikra that you had to deny me my greatest joy?"
Gopi had gotten progressively better. Rashi had been getting better at work too. Then Baa had come home. Kokila had been overjoyed. She was sure that Baa would be happy when she came to know about Aham and Gopi's relation. But one thing worried Kokila. The strain of being strict to Rashi was showing on Mota Bhahi. She had become very quiet. And Jigar had also gone into a shell. But Kokila thought Rashi was really trying.. What a fool she had been..

The family had decided to arrange for a Pooja to celebrate Gopi vahu's successful operation. She had herself helped Gopi vahu get ready that day. What a picture she looked. Gorgeous. Aham should have thought so too because he never let Gopi out of his sight that day. Maybe that was what had made Kokila make the fateful decision? She never knew.

The Pooja had started and Baa had recited lines from various holy books. Rashi had suddenly come in and had offered to recite slokas from the Geetha. To questioning looks she had informed that she had learnt it when she was at home with her mother. Kokila had looked at her with suspicion. She saw the same feeling mirrored in Mota Bhabhi's face. But Rashi had come out with flying colors. Not only had she recited the sloka but had explained its meaning as well. Everyone had been impressed and Baa had been overjoyed. Their happiness was to be short lived,

Kokila came out of her thoughts to see Gopi's forlorn face. She called out to her. Gopi came out of her thoughts when she heard her Maaji. "Ji Maaji. I am done. Do you need anything?" "No beta. The 2 new extra servants have been working really well. Everything is done. I just wanted to see if you would like to have tea" Gopi smiled and tol d Kokila that she would love it. Kokila asked her to come down in 1/2 hour and left Gopi to continue with her thoughts..

Gopi saw Kokila leave. She smiled at her Maaji. "She still does not know that Ahamji had sent the servants from Office." Gopi remembered her conversation with Aham last week when she had yawned quite often. At one point Aham had understood and asked her if she wanted to finish the call. But Gopi had not been ready to let those few precious minutes go. So she had told Aham how due to the upcoming festivities they had more work around the house. Aham had listened and then they had jumped to other topics. The next day there were 2 new servants at home. When asked they had said that they had been sent from office. Everybody assumed it was Jigar and had praised his concern. But when Gopi had gone to his room that evening to thank him, Jigar had said it was not him. With a small smile playing on his lips, Jigar had told Gopi how Aham had called and had requested him to send a couple of servants home to help. "Bhabhi. You should have heard him. He ordered me in such a tone and told me that I never cared for the woman at home that I sent 2 guys immediately. Otherwise I felt Aham Bhai would have personally flown in to help." Jigar had teased her. She had laughed at him and his optimism.

The thoughts of Jigar led her to another day. The day of the pooja. Everyone had been so happy. She had been in a dreamworld all day. Ahamji had been home and had taken care of her every need that day. And Rashi Ben, she had recited Geetha. But all that had been farce. A lie.

"Come in Kinjal, Dhawal ji and vevan ji" Hetal Kaki had welcomed them all. Everyone had noticed how Urmila alone had been talking to herself all the time. They had found it odd and had left it at that.. However Kinjal ben had suddenly questioned Rashi about the sloka. "Rashi. Will you again recite that Sloka for me? I seem to have missed it.." Kinjal had requested. "Kinjal ben.. I have work." "Its ok Rashi Bhabhi. Baa will also like you to repeat the sloka again.. Wouldn't you Baa.. And Faye don't leave just yet.. Don't you want to hear your daughter reciting slokas?" Kinjal ben had continued.

Then everything started to fall down like a pack of cards...
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That's it for now. I will be updating 1 more chapter to complete what happened in another few hours. Comments please!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
that was really lovely part! ooo, rashi getting caught!! i like the progress and koki and gopi make such a good saas bahu joid, more like mother daughter!! conttnue soon. are you finishing it? or only what has happened?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update!! Hey update the next chapter soon. He give her a nice punishment will be lot of fun to see our drama queen suffer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: famzii05

that was really lovely part! ooo, rashi getting caught!! i like the progress and koki and gopi make such a good saas bahu joid, more like mother daughter!! conttnue soon. are you finishing it? or only what has happened?



I am not finishing it.. 😆 Not in the next chapter at least. May take be 3 to 4 more updates to finish it completely. I need to get back to the present. And Aham will just have to turn😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Everything is falling in place...waiting for the next chapter!!!

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That was a brilliant update!
Can't wait for the next hour to read another part!
Loving the SS👏
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Here you go.. As promised. The next part.

Chapter 5

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"Come in Kinjal, Dhawal ji and vevan ji" Hetal Kaki had welcomed them all. Everyone had noticed how Urmila alone had been talking to herself all the time. They had found it odd and had left it at that.. However Kinjal ben had suddenly questioned Rashi about the sloka. "Rashi. Will you again recite that Sloka for me? I seem to have missed it.." Kinjal had requested. "Kinjal ben.. I have work." "Its ok Rashi Bhabhi. Baa will also like you to repeat the sloka again.. Wouldn't you Baa.. And Faye don't leave just yet.. Don't you want to hear your daughter reciting slokas?" Kinjal ben had continued.

Rashi ben had now gone really pale and had looked at Maami and then at the floor. "Kinjal!! What is all this?" Maaji had questioned. "Mom. You always find fault with me. DOn't you. Now what do you say to Rashi. She has all of you fooled again by using a bluetooth to recite slokas. Faye has been telling her the sloka and Rashi has pretended that she herself knew it. Check her if you want." Kinjal ben had shouted. She had seen Jigarji go towards Rashi and remove a similar device Aham ji had given her from Rashi Ben's ear. He had looked really angry. Rashi ben had bent her head in shame.
"Chi Rashi." Everyone had been surprised at the voice that uttered this. It has been her Kaki who had said it. Hetal Kaki had been shattered that day. She had cornered Rashi ben and had questioned her on her actions. "Rashi I knew it was not right to trust you. You who have not been interested in pooja paat before today. You suddenly recited slokas like Gopi and I should have known." Something had happened to Rashi ben after that. She had heard Kaki for a few minutes and then had started shouting. "Mummyji. Please stop. Where did you get a voice to talk now. You never talk when Kokila Kaki taunts me. Do you? Your praise is always for Gopi Gopi Gopi... You and your son have no backbone. and that Gopi gawar. My mother was right. Till she is here I will never get my rightful place in this house. You ask me why I did all this.. That's why.to get my rightful place. What did I not try to get Gopi out of this house. But no.. She was always brought back. Why? Nobody came to take me back but when it was Gopi, Aham jiju himself was sent. What do you see in her? Do you know if I wanted I can easily get her to do stupid things. She is STUPID. That gawar washed the laptop because I told her to.." Rashi ben had then proceeded to say every little thing she had done with a look of hatred.
Gopi shuddered. So much hate. She had been broken that day. It had been beyond her imagination that Rashi ben and Maami could be that cruel. And all because of her. "It's not your fault Gopi. It never was". Aham's words echoed in her head and she continued thinking..
"Why Rashi ben. I thought you loved me." Gopi had asked pleadingly. Rashi had just looked at her with hatred. Gopi's hands involutrily tightened around the arm rest as she though of that day again. She had been wrong and at that moment had realised how naive.

"She still manages to stay your favourite right?.Gopi vahu.. Meri Gopi beta.. Everyone seems to keep saying her name nothing else. And.." Rashi had continued and had turned to Kinjal ben next. "Don't you dare be righteous with me Kinjal. Don't I know what you did? You told Gopi that Aham Jiju loved Anitha did you not? and you gave Jiju's letter to Gopi that said he loved Anitha. I am pretty sure you wrote it.. And what about your drama to get yourself married to Umang? Don't tell me you forgot that.." Rashi ben had continued until there had been a SLAP.. Jigar ji had had enough. He then had proceeded without a word to drag Rashi ben out. Maami had run after her hurling curses at her in laws.
A silence had engulfed the room. When suddenly Ahamji had spoken out. "What letter was Rashi talking about Kinjal? I wrote no letter..NOW TELL ME.." It was the first time after that awful night when Ahamji had slapped her that Gopi had felt fear. Real fear. She had heard his voice go from dangerously low to a scream and had closed her eyes.
"I did it all for you Bhai." Kinjal Ben had cried. "I wanted you to have your love back. Anitha Bhai. How will Gopi ever measure up to her. She is a nobody Bhai. So I wrote a letter saying you loved Anitha and that you were not interested in your marriage with her. She still came to the Mandap Bhai. She did. Does this not tell you that she was after our money?" Gopi had fearfully looked at Aham. She had been sure that Ahamji would now send her out. She had just realized what her Rashi ben had done..

"She did not know to read then Kinjal. She would not have had read the letter." Ahamji's voice had been silently menacing. "Bhai.. Please Bhai.. I did it for my love.. I did not want Umang to leave me.. So I tried to seperate you two Bhai. I pretended about the Jewellery and also about the necklace. The 5 lakh one.I am sorry bhai. Bhabhi please.. I am sorry." Aham had looked at Kinjal and Gopi knew that he was on the verge of an explosion "Enough Kinjal." Maaji had stopped Kinjal Ben from saying anything further. "Dhawal Kumar.Please take your wife from here this instant." She had thundered. "She is no longer my daughter. Please take her out.."

"NOOO.. Why do you love her more than me.. Rashi was right. This Gawar is a manhoos alright.. First her parents, then her maami, her sister now me.. She has taken you all away" Kinjal ben had spurred venom. "SHUT UP KINJAL." Gopi remembered opening her eyes to see her Ahamji closing in on Kinjal Ben. She had been frightened he would do something he would regret. Before she could do anything, her maaji had stopped him. "Take Gopi to your room Aham. She should not be here."
And Ahamji had silently looked back at her for the longest time. He had walked back and had lifted her up without a word and had taken her to their room.
He had proceeded to set her up on the sofa all the while watching her face. Gopi had been crying. She had not dared to look up at Ahamji or Maaji as she had felt it had been her fault. She was manhoos as everyone said. She had brought misery on all. "It is not your fault Gopi. It never was". Gopi had heard Ahamji tell her softly. The concern in his voice had broken her. She had sobbed her heart out that day and he had listened to her without uttering a word.
She had not dared look at him. But when she was done... When she felt there were no more tears left, she had felt him sit down facing her with his hands holding hers. "Gopi. Remember this always. Whatever anybody might say, None of this is your fault. None of this. So please stop blaming yourself."
Ahamji had proceeded to make his point across in such gentle tones that she had started crying again. She had let out all her sorrow and her Ahamji had been there soothing her and rubbing her back until she stopped.
"I was a fool and I am sorry I hurt you Gopi. I really am. Will you forgive me?" He had choked. When she had looked up she had seen pain and something undeciperable in his eyes. Fear. She had dismissed that thougt immediately. Ahamji was never afraid.
"It is not your fault Ahamji and that there was nothing to forgive. I never thought you were wrong Ahamji. Believe me." She had said.
Dead silence surrounded them after that. Ahamji had however not let go of her hands..She had felt him tighten his hold when she was talking and he had looked at her with an expression that she could not understand. But there had been something in his eyes that had made Gopi Shudder. She had not understood what it was exactly but she had known that he was angry. She had been frightened. Ahamji had looked ready to cry then and had asked her to rest. He had very carefully helped her to the bed. Then he had left her turning back to see her once. "I am sorry." she had heard him say softly. But she had already been half asleep by then.

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Let me know how it is.. The last part did not come out as good as I wanted it to. But I just could not get the right words.
And a word of apology. I was hoping this chapter would cover everything that happened in the past till the point where Aham is today. But unfortunately, I got carried away with Rashi's outburst.
Hence the reason for Aham's outburst or what he did could not be included. Please bear with me till then..

Comments and Feedback please:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was an amazing update,so emotional,so intense!😛
Loved it very,very,very much!😃
Thanks so much for the pm,pm me agan when u update hehe😳
This SS is def fab! 😉

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