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-Eris-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Welcome to the forum. Great start.do continue soon

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dr.cb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wonderful strt
can u plz pm me aftr u post ur part 2

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sweety

@sweetsugar

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

That was a lovely start ...i love the bonding tat u have created between the brother-brother and sister-sister ..Hope we can see something of this sort in the show too.i m really found of Jigar Ahem scenes...i agree with you ,Ahem and Gopi have a lot to sort out before they deeply fall in love.

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--HANISA--

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Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

welcome to the forum nice love it update soon

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Nazma

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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Welcome to the forum!!!

I really enjoyed this first chapter!!

You have set the scene brilliantly!!

I can't wait to read more!!

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_cuttie_pie_

@_cuttie_pie_

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

greatt part..waiting to read more

post the next one soon 😊

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

What a fantastic update,loved it very very much,please continue soon and pm me if possible!😃

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Welcome to the forum

Amazing start Cant wait to read the next part~!

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Traxy101

@Traxy101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

This is the beginning of an amazing story, you have set the stage perfectly and your writing is very good. I hope that you update soon!

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Fahima

@famzii05

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

lovely! really nice...loved jigar and how the goshi (gopi and rashi) realtionship is going! dont keep us hanging,, continue soon...can u PM please if you do PM's...thanks!

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