FF: A story of hearts part 9 pg47 (23/02) - Page 35

Originally posted by: hansa2

wow love it gopi has change now ahem will not be able to force her i love ahem feel jelous thx for pm me

Thanks so much hansa!!!!😊

Yes he will have a tough time with her now

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

This story is very addicting. Good for Gopi. She finally found she has a spine and she is putting it to good use. I love that she has changed so much and matured so much and yet she still refers to her husband as Ahemji...Cho Sweet

Thanks so much dhabu!!!!😊

I wouldn't be able to write a spineless Gopi so she had to change but her respect for him is still in place

I finally caught up with the parts I missed whilst on holiday.

Originally posted by: swasthi

I finally caught up with the parts I missed whilst on holiday.

You have brought in an incredibly complicated Ahem into your story. He is so bewildered and perplexing that it seems he is in total shock and denial of his feelings. He can have all his emotional support in the form of his mum next to him but he needs to unpack his feelings and come clean with her.

He will be so heartstricken when he finds out his daughters health. More so, him meeting her too, even if accidently.

I look forward to see how you develop the story further. Do update soon.

Thank you Swasthi!!!😃

well you are the first to put Ahem's feelings and behaviour in such nice terms till now everyone only called him an idiot 😆 but I agree it is in there but he has to admit to himself what mistakes he has done and learn that Gopi's world does not revolve soly around him anymore.

Next update is going to be hopefully tomorrow. Fingers crossed that I am getting on with it

Hello Kristin,

sorry for the late comment. I requested you to update and then I forgot to comment 😕

What should I say? It was another wonderful part. I like your determined Gopi. She has suffered so much pain. It's so unfair. I like it that you did not change Ahem's character. He needs time to change and to realize his mistakes. He can't become a softie all of a sudden. It would nice to see him reading Gopi's letter. That would be a opportunity for him to get to know Gopi and Sanjana better. And again I request you, please update soon 😃

Originally posted by: sathya.s

Hello Kristin,

sorry for the late comment. I requested you to update and then I forgot to comment 😕

What should I say? It was another wonderful part. I like your determined Gopi. She has suffered so much pain. It's so unfair. I like it that you did not change Ahem's character. He needs time to change and to realize his mistakes. He can't become a softie all of a sudden. It would nice to see him reading Gopi's letter. That would be a opportunity for him to get to know Gopi and Sanjana better. And again I request you, please update soon 😃

Oh thank you dear 😊 and don't worry I don't mind your comment being late at all

I didn't want to change Ahem's charakter to much, because I based the whole seperation thing on his anger and stubborness so it wouldn't have been right to change him all of a sudden into a considerate human being. That will still take a little bit but it isn't that far off either.

Regarding the update I did plan one to do yesterday but got a lack of creativity so decided to do it today and today I didn't get a chance to be longer on the lappy then 20 minutes so I will do it tomorrow, hopefully. You never know with me and my plans sorry

Please update soon... beening for your story... it is that good...

Hi all 😊

Thanks a lot for reading my FF and liking it so much and leaving all your lovely comments. I was planning to do an update this week after a having a writers block however there is a personal issue I have to deal with in the moment so the update will take yet a while longer. I am really sorry about it and will try to update soon

thanks 4 leting us know judst can't wait for the update ... what will gopi decide ... I was hoping she make ahem suffer a little more... ahem has made us fan suffer and well as poor gopi...