FF: A story of hearts part 9 pg47 (23/02) - Page 11

Amazing ff Kristin

Kristin that was gorgeous.

You describe and set the scene brilliantly!!
I loved Jigar showing a little backbone and making it clear that he is able to do the work.
The scene between Jigar and Gopi was great, I love how Jigar is able to see the differences in Gopi. Gopi staying firm to her decision is wonderful!! Once Ahem finds out about Sanjana he's going to have to get onto his knees and beg for forgiveness, although knowing Ahem it won't be easy to get him to admit to his mistake!!

Can't wait for the next part!!

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

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What can i say with this part? it's absolutely perfect. I love how Gopi can socialize well with her neighbors. I love ur Gopi so much. Aww...Sanjana is so cute. She is just like a brat. So Jigar saw her, so how will he tell Ahem? And this is complicated because Gopi already has shown Jigar pic to her daughter and doesnt want him speak to Sanju.

Very well written, kristin. Thanks for the update and thanks that mentioned me here.

Love you
Monyka

😳 Thanks so much Monyka! Really glad you like it. well its going to be a it complicated for Jigar now. I like this Gopi as well. She had to learn to stand on her own feets and now she can.

Love you too
Kristin

Originally posted by: taniks

That was awesome kirstin , ur desciption was so vivid I could imagine the whole scene. Beautiful told , the many emotions of gopi and jigar seemed so realistic . Pls pm me when u update.

Thanks so much taniks!!!

I'm really glad you liked it so much. I will pm you when I update it again😃

Originally posted by: sks21

it was amazing kristin...loved the update...
and loved the scene between jigar and gopi...it was very emotional
how will ahem react when he comes to know abt it and how will the family react??very curious to know abt it
update soon

Thanks a lot dear 😃

So glad you liked the scene between Jigar and Gopi I was a little nervous about this bit and now I am nervous about writting the part where ahem finds out 😕😆 gosh I'm hopeless. I will update next week. But am not sure when. I have some other work to do. So have to see how much time I will have.

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Amazing ff Kristin

it realy amazing you are a great writter

Cant wait to read the next part~!

😳 Thanks so much!! Its really good to know that you enjoy my FF so much and think I am a good writer. I will try my best in the future as well.

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Kristin that was gorgeous.

You describe and set the scene brilliantly!!
I loved Jigar showing a little backbone and making it clear that he is able to do the work.
The scene between Jigar and Gopi was great, I love how Jigar is able to see the differences in Gopi. Gopi staying firm to her decision is wonderful!! Once Ahem finds out about Sanjana he's going to have to get onto his knees and beg for forgiveness, although knowing Ahem it won't be easy to get him to admit to his mistake!!

Can't wait for the next part!!

Thanks so much Nazma!!!

I love Jigar here, too. That's a little weird because I made him like this. But you know how much I love him anyway. Also your right ahem won't have an easy time in the future. But I won't say more here. You will have to wait and see 😛

Can't wait for the next part to be finished😆

nice detail... can't wait til jigar lands back at mm and tells them about sanjana 😆

A really good update.

awesome update...loved it...finally gopi and jigar met