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shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: Sandy914
OMG shaina!!!! still it is humorous for me, The way Ahem's character is portrayed is too good..

ha thanks sandy...ahem have real different shades yet to come..wait and watch

Originally posted by: tangam
nice...interesting build up

hi tangam..thanks..

Originally posted by: tina_1234
amazin part...loved it!!

thanks tina..

Originally posted by: varshu27
absolutely wonderful shaina...i like the jigar u have potrayed...i loved the argument between him and ahem...

thanks varsha

ha jigar and ahem are my special characters in this ff..thanks for liking them

and soon the story behind the brothers rivalry is revealed soon.

Originally posted by: Xarina
'i am enjoying this so much. You really have a way with telling the story. X xx

ha thanks xarina..i wont dis argue with the above statement..everyone says that to me.😳

Originally posted by: famzii05
fabulous update shaina!! loved it!!
love to see jealous ahem on gopi and jigar!!

thanks famzi..

ha ha more of the jelousy track dear.its just the begining..😉

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94
Amazing Update shaina Thanks for the pm~!

thanks sisi...

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: _Precious_
Fabulous update Shaina. I just loved the insecurities in the minds of Ahem and Rashi seeing the closeness of Jigar and Gopi. Jigar, I can't imagine him taunting Ahem directly. And the staring moment between Gohem - is it an indication of their returning love? I don't understand if Rashi and Jigar have mutual feelings for each other? And for Kokila, she is showing favoritism to her children in the show also. Jigar has so many doubts regarding Ahem's plan but he could not tell what would be the most practical thing to do now. Hope Jigar and Rashi will be saved from Ahem's anger since his plan was foiled by them. I guess Kinjal's matter should be left unsolved for Gopi to stay in MM for some more time.
Overall, I liked the update very much. Thanks for the pm.

hey nisha...thanks a lot..

ha ha ...well what to say...we all know the reson of ahem insecurites so what rashi is hiding well long way to know..

ha...i know its a bit difficult to imagine.jigar as a figthting type..will have to blend the water more.

well the starting scene..hmm..what it means and how does they felt will be reavealed in the next part..dont worry..and is it a return of love..well difficult question...the time wil answer it.

ha ha..i confused everyone with raji and as i said...the raji love story is not yet fully planned..and i am decideing upon their past yet..so cant say anything for sure.

ha ..u are right..koki shows so much indiffeerence to rashi..the further track wil show the pbm of rashi life and the way gohem solve it. the track is heating up.

Yup whatever jigar poited are all reasonable but the pbm is ...

he dont have a answer to ahem question..what wil jigar do to save his sister life..well have to see

well disturbing ahem modi plan and living is a impossible task..lets see how they survive.

Ha u always gets nice points nisha

well kinjal pbm being solved leads to gopi departure but i must tell u..gopi have to departure some or other time..the sooner the better.😉

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shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: hansa2
shaina u r too good love this part i love the way dall fall on urmi and the way jigar grab gopi to sit near him i think ahem still love gopi .please come soon yaar

thanks hansa...ha ha...]thanks..

The fun just began dear..more is awaiting..

u are going to get a lot of kalakaries..not lot..some...actually and jigar and gopi are sure going to get heart attacks to rahem..

ha h ah a..sorry for the slow track ...well ahem dont actually love gopi..yeah he dont..but some where his brain still treats her as his ex girlfriend..remmeber he is the first person who told her i love u..the effect wil linger for sure...

lets see what and how wil ahem realize his feelings..😉

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shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
👏shaina dear loved the update...

smehow my mind is still over those few moments of gopi and ahem when all the youngsters left... very well written short scene...

so girls are going from friends to partners - gopi going from jigar to ahem and rashi from ahw👏
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Munnni..hai..thanks..a lot.

ha ha youngsterswell ahem and gopi are youngsters too dear. dont forget that.

yup its a magical scene and this scene is more imp in the coming parts...though a short scene..it plays vital role in ahem realization..

well well...u can say that..in one case and not in another..

well in which case...u solve.😉

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shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: tuhinabanik

OMG shaina my curiosity has no boundsss . What's in store for us in the next update?

welll...

all i say is a positive shock and a neg shock..oh so u are going to get two shocks..sorry😆

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shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Hai guys..thanks for the waiting and for the lovely response..enjoy

Part-11

Kinjal was waiting alone feeling scared and gohem was hiding near a bush looking at her. "i hope everything goes k"gopi worried "dont worry dear..i am their for u"ahem mocked "shut up"gopi scolded. Suddenly a car is horned and ahem sprang into alert position immediately. "Its him.."gopi whisphered when he landed from his car. Suddenly out of nowhere a car came dashing towards them and abhay ran away immediately frightned.

"Dammn" ahem cursed and rushed forward like a bullet but unable to catch the culprit. Ahem looked towards the car ready to kill them for ruining his plan and silently and slowly jigar and rashi came out from the car.

"U.." ahem shouted read to kill jigar and lunged forward. "U...idiot...brainless idiot...Have u gone mad"Ahem balled his fist ready to punch Jigar face. "Bhai..listen to me please..."Jigar said in a catious smooth voice..taking one step back. "SHUT UP...just Shut up..i told u..i told u..to stay away, warned u not to do anything reckles But...U like always.."Ahem moved forward clearly not in a mood to listen to anything or anyone.

"Ahem..calm down please" rashi shouted clearly frightned, kinjal just stood staring looking shocked and gopi was right behind ahem too shocked to response. "Bhai..listen to what i want to say" "What would u have still to say...u have ruined my entire plan" Ahem belowed "whats more left to say..u reckless fellow, " "Bhai...listen to me ..once..u wil know the reason why i came here, " "yes u came here to destroy my plans..to prove urself again and again"

"Oh come on bhai.."this time jigar shouted clearly his patience weared off. "What do u think that with this stupid plan u could have solved every problem, Such a loophole plan, that their is not even one possibility of sucecess..only U can come up with such plans Bhai...All u would have done is to make a mess of evverything like u always do" "JIGAR" Ahem raised his hand ready to puch his face. Kinjal closed her eyes tightly immediately

"Ahem"gopi shouted and caught his free hand immediately to stop him and rashi sprang between both the brothers protecting jigar from ahem.

AHem hand stopped just inches from rashi face, their was a terrified but determined look on her face. Gopi gaped at ahem shocked and Ahem was blowing fire and both the brothers were glaring at each other. A whole minute of silence surrounded the atmosphere. "Leave" AHem thundred..looking at rashi...but everyone knew he meant gopi. Gopi gripped his hand tighther in response. "I said LEAVE" Ahem thundred on gopi and snatched his hand and turned towards Rashi.

"Move aside" Ahem warned controlling his fury. Rashi was really scared, but she dint move an inch from her postion. "I told u rashi move aside" Ahem warned again, Rashi dint move. "Move aside Rashi" THis jigar said it and Rashi spunned towards him suprised. GOpi looked at Jigar suprised. "This is between me and bhai, we wil deal it move aside" Jigar moved rashi aside by placing his hands on her shoulders and stepped forward.

"Whatever, we did it was all my plan..rashi dont have any hand in it, she dont even know we would come here, she was just trying to help" Jigar said in a calm tone. Ahem moved his eyes at rashi "i told u to stay away from this" he thundred and rashi lowered her head. "She came with me because i need instructions for this place" Jigar replied. "Shee is not supposed to get involve in this." AHem thundred back "if this leaks out, then mom

would forgive me, she would forgive u, and kinjal but she would never forgive rashi...and i think u too know..how much rashi values moms opinion" Ahem challenged back and this time Jigar was lost for words. "U said I dont value my family, but jigar if u would have really valued the family, then u wouldnt interfere here at this time with another girl getting involved. All u could think is i cant protect anyone but do u really think that

i could risk some one life for my stupid plan. DO u really think that i dont think for the future at all. Do u. really think that i would leave Kinjal All alone in his hands...Do..u...then let me make one thing clear...DHAWAL!!" Ahem shouted. and slowly just Dhawal rose from darkness just a few feet away from kinjal. No need to say everyone where stunned with his presence. "Dhawal!!" Jigar questioned stunned. Dhawal came and stood beside Ahem silently.

"Now say...do u still believe i would leave the girls unprotected. and let that man go away so easily. I was with gopi and Dhawal was with Kinjal for their safety. U knew just a single part of my plan. But i planned to finish this matter totally today. And all because of ur stupid intervention my entire plan is ruined. That man asked me specifically not to play any tricks..and because of ur stupid mistake, now he would think that we were trying to trap him

and only god knows what wil he do now...and its all because of u jigar..only U"

"Bhai...but how is dhawal involved here if u wanted to keep it a secret." "Do u really think that i could draw 5 lakhs, without letting anyone know from the office. 5 years in Mba dont teach the world politics jigar..come to the real life and then learn. I needed a man whom i can trust completely...A person who is capable to handle the issue if anything goes out of hand. What do u think that conductiong all those meetings secretly at house, no one would notice anything.

See the time jigar...what do u think...that at this time of night wont the parents get suspicious on us seeing us all dissapared at once. We need a alibi who can back up for lie if we are caught. And we all know how much mom trusts dhawal. One word from him and she would never doubt anyone of us." "But...what if?" Jigar looked suspiciously at Dhawal. Gopi too understood what jigar was trying to say. The matter went too senstitive to handle and if dhawal let it out, then everything is crashed down.

rashi threw a angry look at jigar and kinjal a nervous look to ahem. "Jigar sir...dont worry, i wont let anything out at any cost...I owe so much to ur family sir...i would rather die than to betray and spoil kokila madams family name." Dhawal said in a utmost sincere voice, that even gopi couldnt doubt his sinceraity which was ringing in every word. "But..u are cheating koki auntie too staying with us?" gopi questioned remembering kinjal words of dhawal utmost devotion to koki.

"No pbm madam, i know koki madam wants her daughter safe, and if it is possible with a little lie..i would be happy to lie my entire life" dhawal said and kinjal looked pleased at dhawal.

"can i know why u spoiled my plan or do u want to continue this family drama still?" ahem asked and everyone brought back to reality. "i think its better we go and deal in the house" gopi said clearing dont wanting another scene on the road.

"yeah i too think so" rashi said suprising gopi thinking in the same way. "I want to know now" Ahem said. "Its fine rashi, i too think its better to say now than to prolong the issue" Jigar said and started. Actually after they left Rashi was prowling around the room tensed muttering curse after curse to ahem when jigar entered her room in a hurry "i know how to catch him" Jigar said and rashi blinked in suprise "How" she asked.

"come with me" jigar said and they left and came directly to here. "I thought a lot about the issue...and i dont know why i felt that something wrong would go on today and i was thinking a way to catch the culprit without actually involvin anyone." "will u come to the matter straight" ahem shouted. "Then i remembered that the man always call kinjal from his phone" "What a discovery!"ahem mocked and goshi looked at him saying shut up.

"Then i got it, that we could trace him back with the number, we can get his address as i saw he dint change his number at all while calling even though he called so many times" Everyone looked at him stunned. "of course.."gopi muttered suprised. Jigar beamed. Ahem and rashi looked at each other faces. "Is that ur super plan?" Ahem mocked again. "finding address with a cell phone number, for ur kind information,,those are confidential and not be given to anyone"

"I can do it ahem sir"dhawal replied immediately. "I have lot of contacts and within tomorrow evening i wil get the address". This time jigar was impressed with Dhawal efficeny. "Good dhawal do it immediately" "K sir i wil right now"dhawal beamed and left noting down the number.. "Wait" ahem shouted. "Do u really think that it would be his address, for sure...he could use a false address too, he could have called from a stolen cell phone..so many possibilites" "But bhai...thats thats...that not right..its illegal" Jigar said in utmost horror.

And ahem immediately closed his eyes clearly controlling himself and rashi banged her head. It was then gopi realized what they meant of jigar following the principals very strictly. Clearly his foriegn principles are not applied in India and a man like jigar could never imagine in a illegal way...like his elder brother.. "Jigar..it can happen here"gopi clarrified. "This...This..This is ur super idea of all the times. WIth this stupid idea u came her to ruin my plan"Ahem asked temper rising again.

"For ur information bhai my plan is more pratical than urs is" "Can i know in which matter, is it greater than u" "If i get a address we could catch him directly. What do u think that the person would come up only a single copy of photos, what if he had backup at his house. Just imagine if we get his address, we could get all the evedinces with back ups too." "And what if we dont, the only chance we could have stopped him is to nab him which i planned and thanks to u it went out totally out of hands"

"WHat if he had a back up"jigar shouted. "what would he do the back up if he is in our custody?"ahem shouted. "He could have given it to one of his friends..he could have hid it, he could have already made arrangments to hand it to umang if the plan fails. " "No one can think with such criminal minds like u jigar modi..he is a money digger, not a blackmailer" "U have turned him into a blackmailer bhai..dont blame me now" "Thats all u do..interfere in others work and leave if something happens out of hands"

"And all u do is to rub ur carelessness on other shoulders and blame them for ur failure."

"STOP IT" Rashi shouted and both the brothers looked stunned at her. "For god sake stop it.enough of ur bickering..i cant take it anymore.Its ur sister life for god sake not any game of chess that ur figthing who is the winner here. Just stop it both of u..do u realize how serious this matter went now." "But rashi he spoiled everything" ahem complained in a child like tone. "I did what i thought was best" Jigar complained. "Jigar stop it" this time gopi shouted. "All u two do is to blame each one out

but none of u dint even realize what kinjal is going through, ur egos are spoiling her life here, u can have ur competetion back, u have ur entire life to fight , but dont fight over her life now" gopi scolded. and ahem and jigar looked at kinjal who was more depressed than before. Slowly they realized what they were doing. Both went near kinjal "i am sorry kinjal i promise nothing wil happen to u, everything wil be fine..just fine" jigar assured and kinjal hugged him tears flowing from her eyes.

"I am sorry bhai...its all because of me that u all are facing so much difficulties" "Hey little sister...do u know what a brother is supposed to do...he is supposed to protect his sister from everything, we are doing our duty...theirs nothing difficult in it. We got involved in our lives so much that we dint even realize we are playing with urs...Sorry kinjal forget everything now and give me a little angel smile so that we get some encorangement to proceed on" Jigar smiled and pulled kinjal lips to a smile with his hands.

Kinjal laughed and hugged jigar "Thanks bhai" she muttered. "Anytime little sissy anytime" Rashi cleared slight tears from her eyes but gopi was only observing Ahem, their was so much emotions in his face, angry, concern, love and strangely gratitude too...but none was coming out of mouth. Kinjal turned towards Ahem and Ahem moved his eyes down and looked here and their..."its getting late..we have to go" He said and made kinjal sit in the car and came back. "One word of concern wont kill u" Jigar mocked

"Why do i need a act when i have a drama king right beside me..."Ahem started again. Goshi looked at each other exhausted."U could have repeated what i said" "i dont copy anyone" "Well thats news to me" "Stop it"both the girls shouted again. "Ahem, jigar u cant go on like this...we cant go on like this...we need a perfect plan now..and not even a chance of mistake.."Gopi said "Gopi is right, Ahem, and u dumbo(jigar flared) we both need u, both of u are incomplete with each other, Jigar if u have the plan

then ahem u have the brain...and we need both right now. U cant solve competing with each other. we have to solve this as a single team" rashi pleaded. "Rashi is right..its not about u, not about us..its about kinjal so for her sake please...say peace"gopi pleaded. "U were better being enemies"AHem muttered angrily and gopi and rashi sighed. "AHem u are doing it...either ur way or my way...decide urselves and no drama" rashi warned. "Jigar..u are very responsible...if u think ahem is reckless than take responsibilty and side up with ur brother"gopi said.

"i am not reckless" ahem shouted "Why do u always fall on her" jigar shouted, "why do u always support her?" ahem shouted, "she is my friend"Jigar said proudly "Ha...she is my ..."ahem started but rashi came and stamped his foot. "Ur what?"jigar asked curiously. "Serioulsy...stop this right now..we are going to solve this as a team so lets join our hands together as a team..."Gopi said and extended her hand. "I am in"rashi said putting her hand on gopi and both looked at the brothers. "its getting late" ahem said.

"i think it wil rain now" jigar said nd slowly they made their escape and gopi and rashi looked at each other defeated.

"come on slowly..."ahem said and silently they were creeping back to their rooms. "Where did u all go" kokila thundred on them the moment they stepped inside and all froze. "Zoo" rashi said. "Mandir"Jigar said "cinema" kinjal said "Party"ahem said all simultaneously and looked at each other faces cursing one another in minds. "So..what option should i take out of the four?" Kokila asked. "Kaki..woh"Jigar started but ahem took in immediately "acutally we went to mandir first..and later we went to zoo...and as it was boring so we went to cinema"

Gopi looked at ahem in a confused shocked expression and rashi was fighting hard not to laugh. "U have missed party ahem."kokila said. "oh...yeah..well...as cinema was boring too so we went to party" ahem replied in a obvious tone. Kokila shook her head "Jigar...i thought u are responsible of all, what happend to u that u joined them too." "woh kaki..woh..." "Mom we really dint plan him but unfortunately he tagged along" Ahem said in a dull complaining voice cursing his fate and this time gopi fought back her smile.

"shut up ahem...thats all u do..mock and insult others, if u want to roam around without responsibility then fine..atleast leave ur brother out of ur company..no need to spoil him too" koki complained and no need to say ahem temper rose like a fire and went to his room swiftly. "Rashi..kinjal"koki thundred "i dont know about others but i think u know how the girls are brought up in this family, what are our rules, how can u wander such late at nights with the boys..what happend to ur disciplane" koki scolded clearing insulting gopi.

"badi mami woh..." "dont give any reasons rashi...u are half responsible for ahem being so stubborn and irresponsible and u kinjal do u realize that ur marriage is fixed...and u should be responsile now" "woh maa..sorry"kinjal muttered. "Now go to ur rooms" koki thundred and the girls left. Giving a final look at gopi koki went away and gopi realized that she dropped one more step infront of koki eyes.

"Dont worry...everything wil be fine trust me" jigar said and gopi ignored him. "i know ur upset with kaki words but i wil tell her thats it all bhai mistake, she wil believe it" "wah wah wah...backstabber"ahem shouted coming with rashi "why she should get the blame for ur mistakes." "what is my mistake..if u dint drop down in between we would have been crept silently back" "why do u always blame me?"Jigar shouted. "u started it first"rashi complained. "oy bhai ki chamchi..shut up"jigar scolded.

"if i am a chamchi u are the chamcha"rashi started. "if i am a chamcha u are a kadhai" jigar replied back. "u are a glass..not a porclean glasss...a stained glass" "what...u are a not washed porclean plate" "uncooked brinjal" "rotten tomato" "tainted wall paper" "shineless flooring" "Frog" "fish" "lizard" "cockraoch" "Kokila auntie.." gopi said and immediately jigar and rashi stopped their fight and loooked at the door of the terrace. Their was no one. Gopi burst into laughing seeing their expressions and Jigar looked at her.

"U..."jigar scolded and ran after her and gopi ran away from him laughing. Both ran playing catch catch around the terrace laughing and Rashi and AHem looked at them their mouths wide open. "Ouch..jigar u are hurting me"gopi shouted when jigar caught her hand and Rashi saw ahem took a step forward involuntarily and smiled. Jigar released her hand immediately and gopi turned and shouted "Stupid" and ran away and jigar ran after her. "Aa hetal auntie save me" gopi jumped and hugged hetal and jigar stopped.

"Stop both of u..nauthy"hetal pulled gopis ear and gopi put a cute puppy face "sorrry"she laughed and all the 3 laughed together. "i think something is burning" rashi said to ahem and ahem snapped his head towards rashi. Suddenly his phone rang and he saw the familiar number. Jigar looked at ahem and he signalled them to come to them. After sending Hetal they joined him and ahem picked abhays call. "U have cheated me." "I dint"ahem said cooly.."u were a scary cat that ran away at the sight of seeing a car."

"u wanted to trap me" "it was just a appraching car, what do u exepct that no one would go by that road, at that time." Jigar sinalled ahem to continue as he was getting a call from dhawal. AHem nodded, "if u wanted a deserted place, then choose wisely" "i wont fall for ur trip again modi" "well u are the loser." Their was a pause. "if this is a trick u know me very well" "this is my sister life...do u think i would play games with her." Jigar signalled and showed a piece of paper. "So the deal is still on i think"abhay said.

"of course..but this time i would say the place..and i would send the person." "Fine" "So today...at 10 again...the ghati road" Jigar gave a thumb up. "Thats far" "If u want to be alone..then come their..i would be their waiting for u..ur wish"ahem cut the call. "Have u gone mad?" gopi and rashi asked and both the brohters grinned. "This time...Not at all"ahems said looking at the piece of address of abhay rashodi...

"I dont like this..u shouldnt come"ahem said "we are...cominng"rashi and gopi said together. "i think its better the more the fast we wil search the house" jigar said. The house was filled with darkness a good sign for them. "Ahem said they were two door to the building."we are going to spilt..its easy if we search in two parties..one boy one girl" "i am not going with this idiot"rashi said immeidately "i am not intrested too"jigar replied.

"fine..me and rashi wil go and u and gopi go to the back door" "K..lets go partner"jigar said to gopi and both clashed their fists as a sign. Rahem started at each other faces. "Lets go partner"ahem copied immediately and rashi too did the same glaring at jigar. Gopi smirked. "ouch its so dark"rashi muttered "shut up"jigar said. "why cant we open the flashlights" gopi asked"lets go inside first" ahem said. "some one is coming"jigar said tensed. "Disperse now"ahem ordered.

And they ran to their respective goals with their partners. "Thank god..its some one else..."ahem sighed. "yeah...thank god..hope ahem and rashi reach safely too"gopi replied. "yeah..wait..what did u say?"Ahem asked confused "Jigar is that u?"gopi questioned doubtfully.Ahem flashed his light and... "GOPI" ahem shouted. "AHEM"gopi shouted. "what are u doing here?" "what are u doing here?"gopi questioned back. "Where is rashi ..and why did u come with me?"

"Me...u have caught my hand and dragged me along"gopi fighted. "i thought u are rashi" "and i thought u are jigar" "Wait..if u are with me then..."ahem trailed and both looked at each other faces."OH SHIT!!" both shouted together.

"Thank god...we have reached safely...are u k"jigar asked "yeah i am fine"rashi replied. "Why are u sounding so different?" "Same to u too...why are u speaking like this?" "Are u k?" "Same goes to u" "wait" jigar said and both flashed their flashlights at each other simulataneously and both shouted at once "YOU!!!"

i told that their wil be two shocks for raji lovers...well gave only one in this update..wil give the next heart attack in the next update...k sorry.

So the partner got changed...

will gohem can co-ordiante with each other.

wil raji bear one another..

will the four suceed or something else is awaiting them.

will jigar and gopi closeness bring change in ahem and rashi thinking...

Stay tuned...and Enjoy😉

Suggestions are gladly welcomed.

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kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

shaina another wonderful update...
loved the update dear...
so i did not go as planned and the brothers fighting again...i just love their fights
and was really shocked to know that dhawal was there with gohem and kinjal wow shaina really didn see that coming...u give such nice twists
and poor gohem koki always insulting them
would love to see ahem more and more jealous about jipi
and so gopi went with ahem and rashi with jigar was hoping for that...would be nice to see how they will act...
well shaina i really dont want to guess and will wait for ur update and see how u will give us heart attack...so will be waiting for next friday
so loved the whole update
thanks for the pm dear

Edited by sks21 - 13 years ago

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magss24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#438

wonderful update...

the comment on the next will be long..

sorry...

Edited by magi11 - 13 years ago

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#439

RESERVED!👏

Shaina,that was a brilliant update😆

Loved Jipi playing with eachother and Ahem getting jealous,i hope theres more scenes like that😉

and omg Shaina,you are too much,Raji's fights😆

Wonderful update!😛

Can't wait till Friday and thanks for the PM😳

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shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
RESERVED!👏

Shaina,that was a brilliant update😆

Loved Jipi playing with eachother and Ahem getting jealous,i hope theres more scenes like that😉

and omg Shaina,you are too much,Raji's fights😆

Wonderful update!😛

Can't wait till Friday and thanks for the PM😳

ha thanks chilka and sorry too.

actually i planned many jealous scnene in this update..but dont know i couldnt fit it inside after starting the udpate.

Maybe...i wil get some space in the coming update...it is first time that i am thinking something and writing sometime..saathi re is confusing me a lot..its better for me to clear all the misunderstanding fastly..😆

and coming to raji fights...well its just a sample..get ready u wil have to bear the foursome fights now.😉