FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb - Page 30

Originally posted by: sks21

omg shaina first of all love u...coz ur an excellent writer...
that's the reason why milan was a huge hit...
and coming to this ff seriously never expected this huge shock well done girl👏
...for a moment there u made me doubt gopi a bit its coz of ur wonderful writing...never expected ahem to be lying to rashi coz i thot he valued their friendship...well he is ahem modi right he'll do anything...and i'm feeling bad for both gopi and rashi...coz rashi valued her friendship with ahem so much feel like he cheated both gopi and rashi...
so when rashi was shouting at gopi he kinda defended her i guess ahem is feeling guilty for what he did to gopi...and rashi what is she going to do now??coz she has come to know ahem's true colours...will she continue her friendship with him or will she hate him??too many questions
and loved it how u have described each and every character in the end and said the story begins now...well indeed shaina...loving ur ff...well done bravo...
will be waiting for ur update...

ha ha thanks sks...

i am glad no one is mad...well to say everyone actually expected this shock, but i misled them.😆

oh i made u doubt gopi, how?

ahem lied to rashi to save his long last friendship, because somewhere the back of his mind

he knew that what he did was wrong and rashi would go agaisnt it..so he tried to hide the truth and bury it and make gopi leave but he never knew that it would turn against him

and agreed he cheated gopi deliberate and rashi..without thinking

i wil justify ahem's feeling after the next one

as i know i have left many loose threads...and coming to rashi reaction u wil see

it is clear that she is not going to take this lightly, so wil she break her childhood friendship for a girl who just came in her life . lets see

ha ha well i was telling everyone that the story wil start after the flashback so its my way of remidnign it..

afterall..the maha update should have a maha ending right.

thanks for the fab comment sks...loved it👏

Originally posted by: vibz88

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gal it was awesome. I cant explain.i was so lost in the story.excellent .hmmm so ahem has nt changed.he just took revenge.but playing with someone s emotions for so long.smooth talker.so gopi still loves ahem?i liked when kinjal said dhaval will take permission from koki for wedding night.curious to know how will he fight for staying with kinjal.am assuming tat they will fall in love.the description of the char in purple was amazing. It was like being transported to sydney sheldon world.amazing. U r the best ff writer on this forum.sorry if i offend others but u win hands down!

thanks vibha..i am glad u loved it as this update was very well planned.

of course..what do u expect of ahem modi...a tough shell to crack so easily..

his majestic ego is his biggest hurdle..lets see how it breaks.

gopi stil loves ahem?

well that is the question i am asking myself...at present i too dint decide whether gopi loves ahem or not...while the story progress it wil change with ahem i think...

ha ha i thought of introducing dhawal actual during ahem's engagement but as i am describing the characters now..so i had to introduce him...

so u are right..as u can see that he is loyal to koki utmost...so a very tough competition is going to lie ahead for him..the love or the respect of his loved one...

omg..did u really compared to shidney sheldon..

she is my fav..after james hadley chase...

thats a really huge compliemnt dear...i am top of the skies right now..😆

ha ha but i still think that yuks is my inspiration for writing..the credit goes to her.👏

thanks for the super duper comment vibha...have to get back to u too right😉

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

Res...thanks


OMG sweetheart. I really love the last line of Rashi. "No Ahem, u didn't". I feel that ur Gopi is more sympathetic than Gopi in SNS. I can't imagine Ahem can do this. Is there more for the flashback? I want to know what he felt after he hurt her. Well, still no Jigar? I has been waiting for too long.

Overall, it's a superb update...

hey darling

what a coincidence.. i love that dialgoue too.

well gopi's character is yet to determine..but she wont be so sympethetic for sure.

even though she feels concern, worried for ahem..still she maintains her distance..

their relation is a roller coaster ride...the first half gopis hurdles and the second ahem's.

ahem's reactions and thinking will be the next update as i know i left many ends loose.

ha ha for the first time i see that u are impatient for jigar.

still 1 or 2 more updates..he wil enter.

the time is getting close.

Originally posted by: rsshree

thanks 4 the pm saina

nice update, so the fault lies😃 wit aham

yep..it was his master plan all along..

thanks and my pleasure. glad u liked it

Originally posted by: tina_1234

ohh gal awesome part...loved it..i was sooo right...wat did jigar do tht ahem hasnt forgiven him...full of twists nd turns...amazin part...bring it on

thanks tina..so i dint fool u..better luck next time for me.

ha ha u are the only person who noticed about jigar and ahem tension...

when jigar enters..and the story moves about the brothers u wil see what was the cause happend between them.

thanks a lot tina...i wil bring it on soon

Originally posted by: magi11

res warning:read the comment at your own risk

ha ha ha k wil do that..but i have confidence in u 😉

uffo... i missed my first place...even this time... next time i will turn into a perfect stalker...

so sweet...so u want first place then...then keep looking out from 6 to 7..it wil be my update time..if i dint update by 7 then it means it wil be after the show is down immediately..got it..best luck next time.

ummm... what name shall i give for this comment... got it... heartbreaks😆😆😆..🥺🥺🥺...

heartbreaks...superb maggi...awsome...so true😆

why is ahem is so keen on sending gopi away from his life... is he feeling guilty about wat he has done or he has a soft corner for her???is it tat he doesnt want to see gopi in tears or is he worried tat if she stays in his house she has face more insults from his prestige maniac mom..

i could feel that in a corner of his his heart he wants gopi to stay in his house..

guilty 😲

after all i have done to potray ahem..u feel that he is guilty...my my..it means that i have to protray him more

i know that lot of people are confused with ahems feeling , so next update wil clear it out..dont worry and dont think too high on ahem modi...k

why ahem dont want her near him...u wil see in the next update...and i already warned u.

it looks like ahem is not much interested in anitha ... he just looks for a reason to stay away from her... but why has he accepted to marry her is it because of her status......

frankly i too dint thought about anitha a lot now...but planning to make that he is intrested in her...somehow i cant write that part...but have to ...lets see how wil it move forwward.

i just loved the part when he said"i think pink will suit her"he was actually admiring gopi tat he didnt know wat he said..

well agree with that..it wasa a open compliment to gopi...and only rashi got that.

now coming to kinjal ... ok the girl is really worried about her fiance.. wats the prob with umang.. he is like koki...😡n dhawal seems to be sweet 😃..eager to know how u r goin to bring them together...

u wil get a heart attack if i reveal how will i bring them together...u wil be more confused than ur right now.. and umang what can i say...i should change the titel to prestiage i think

since the start...all i wrote is about ahem prestage, koki presitage..and now umang🤢

n the flashback omg... ahem is such a heartless guy...just to show gopi bad in front of others he played with her emotions...felt very bad for gopi...😭😭😭..he broke her heart in the name of love( heartbreak no 1-love)...

he he i warned u that ahem is not going to change so easily...afterall its ahem modi we are talking about ...

and i agree that its a real mean ful to do it...but lets see how the twist..help us further.

anitha ewww... wat can we expect from her ... even she is heartless like ahem.. tats y she is ahem's gf...

i see that everyone got a hatred on anitha without much effort...well i wil keep that in mind next time and make her positive in my next ff.😉

rashi... oh i just love this gal very much...she has been watching the interactions between gohem n i just loved the way in which she brought the truth from ahem's mouth...just by provoking him she got the entire truth...

u love rashi..did i hear it right..or i got deaf..

what to do..i cant help myself when it comes to rashi...i just love to potray her clever and as being the friend to ahem...she is the only person who can understand even his silence too...

so gopi is gonna have a tough competion now...

but ahem broke her heart too... she had been believing him blindly..

he lost a best friend like her(heart break 2-friendship)...

agreed, this shows that ahem thinks about himself..but did he reaally think about himself when it came to rashi..well we have to ask modi about it.

and the last part was amazing when rashi didnt support him...

i love that line too...ahem got a tight slap on his face...

ok ...i think u must be confused after reading my comment ... i thought of writing something but ended up with something like tis..am just confused with ahem's emotions.😕...man he makes me go crazy even in ffs😆...

he he dont worry u conveyed what u meant...even sometimes we dont know what we are saying but our main motive is to express our heartful feelings..and i appreciate for ur fab comment..u are better day by day...👏

n did i mention the third heart break... its not much difficult to guess... he broke my heart too(heartbreakno3-no name sry)..very emotional update...see tats y i have given 3 heartbreaks in the beginning...😆...

oh well dont blame ahem here...the reason of ur heartbreak is me..as i am the sole reason responsible..dont worry i wil heal it somehow..just stay with me😉

and i wil give u a name

heartbreak no3 --------hope (ur devotion to ahem)

and agreed ahem can make anyone insane with his role..kya character hai.

n once again dont get confused by reading my comment ... i just dunno wat i have wrtten...

tats y i have given u a warning ... later dont tell tat i have confused u...

anyway tat was a fabulous update shaina... just loved it...

now waitng for the story to begin...

u dint confuse me but have made me happier..😃

well done and fab comment👏

i must say that the readers of saathi re are competing with each other on comments...

wonderful work dear.

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

wow saina, what an update.
an egoistic aham and sweet gopi.
i hate this aham, but i have full confidence i you.
i will making him lovable and romantic as the story progresses.
keep up the work.

thanks shruthi..

he he finally u too hate ahem...i am loving that sound...its music to my ears.

dont worry stay with me and u wil find ahem modi such a lovable person that u wil tear my head if i wil say one word against him😉

all the ahem haters will cry buckets of tears for that egoistic fellow

why does he have to be hero yaar, always i have to make him positive somehow.

thanks and enjoy

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Wonderful Shaina,excellent,im shocked at Ahem,what a prick!😆

Loved Gopi,aww thats so sad,Loved how Raashi was disgusted with Ahem!

Shaina,your the best wrter ever,keep up the outstanding work😃

And thanks a billion for the pm!

👏

thanks chika..he he ..welcome to the ahem modi hate gang...

well i think that the girls made a huge impression on everyone

i have to maintain that ..now...

haaan so sweet chika and tanks a lot for the kind words...

well the pleasure is mine...glad u enjoyed it dear.