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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awww...Fantastic take S, *superlikes* 👍🏼

Finally got a chance to read and guess what loved it to the core. It was subtle yet effective, drives home the point without deviating much. Love the sensitive and understanding Ahem, he is as rational as he can be !!!

Please keep these li'l takes coming !!!

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

u did it again.

awsome, too good, mind blowing and aww sentimental.

I loved the last scene the hug was so cute, it was running before my eyes.

His 3 cute request were too good. I love it totally.

Well done there no one like u who can convey emotions through writings.

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Traxy101

@Traxy101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

This was a wonderfully romantic OS, loved it!

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suvaaslondon

@suvaaslondon

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Brilliant Shilpa as ever.

Hope the CVS take a leaf out of our many Os

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Shilpa, this was the best of the best-est of your OSs. I loved it completely.

Ahem must have planned right from the start upon taking the responsibility for being her teacher. This is why he was focused and his unalteredly determination to reach his goal. Along the way he has been manipulating her emotions and confusing her so that she looks at him being the primary being for her rather than his mum. His reward to her being his three wants. Still the selfish Ahem but in a very positive way. I loved your Ahem very much.

Well done!

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atop

@atop

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

It could never have been this simple, endearing, soft-paced and wonderful at the same time..You are a genius when it comes to displaying the softest and the boldest of emotions yet with a touch of feather and what ever I say, can never justify your stupendous piece of work..

I am gonna go and read that again and Shilpa, seriously, do give us MORE of OS's or SS's or anything, anytime u feel like..I know u are HARD core busy and I do respect that but anytime u feel, just pop in an OS because it truly is in a literal sense a spectacular read always..

Thank u so very much,,

Luv atop

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chik

@chik

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Indeed u are such a good writer so beautifully written.. Well if Ahem does this it will be so sweet

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: A2ZV
wow, amazing...so beautifully expresses.

Thank you so much, this is my hope and wish, or something similar to this happening in the show.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: NazmaJ
Hey

Absolutely gorgeous and deliciously romantic while still keeping to the essence of the characters.

Completely loved it and am fully in love with your Ahem.👍🏼

Thank you so much Nazma. I am glad you enjoyed the OS. I hope to see this type of thinking Ahem on SNS some day.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: taniks
So beatuiful , really love this ahem . He is so romantic , if only something similiar can happen in the serial it would marvelous. Thank you

Thank you so much. I too hope to see something like this on the serial, we can keep hoping that it happens some day.

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