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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aham decides he is going to celebrate gopis birthday later on, he invites everyone, he also chooses a sari for her with a jewellery set that would make anyone jealous. He told her that he was going to have some clients n friends around, he told kokila to tell jeetu mahma that they were having a celebration but not to tell them anything as he did not want anything going wrong the same went for jigar, rashi, hetal n chirag. This was going to be his gift to his wife n a big thank you to god for send her to him.
The party started aham comes down with gopi holding her hands she was shaking as its his clients will she be able to understand what they are going to be saying no like the disaster that happened last time, Aham looked at her n smiled. During the party gopi tried to escape Aham but he refused to let her hand go, this was irritating Rashi n urmilla, Gopi smiling laughing the more they saw the more they got jealous. Kinjal also saw she looked at rashi n urmilla she smiled, she went over to them kya jori hai kooobhsoorat taunting them both. Mahma hadnt arrived n aham told gopi to speak to his clients n not move until he came back, Aham went to call him, Mahma told him that he could not come as he had just come in, Aham insisted mahma ji u have to come to cut the cake with Gopi, Aham explains that they didnt cut the cake with gopi because of her parents dying the same day,mahma ji confused Aham what are you talking about, Gopi parents didnt die the same day they died about a year after what happened was a tradegy they were going to a puja there was a car accident gopis parents died but gopi survived.
Aham then explains what happened on janmastri, mahma n they both come up with a plan. Aham comes back smiling Gopi is no where to be seen he starts to look around, he runs outside n sees urmila n rashi before they could speak to her he tells her to come as he wants her to meet important people that are from the office, rashi looks at Aham jiju can i meet them, he looks at her where is ur husband why is it when ever i want to do anything with gopi u are there n something goes wrong, he holds gopis hand n smiles at her n takes her in.
At the Aham kisses Gopi on the forehead infront of all urmilla teeth went runnin, kokila saw n smiled, Gopi blushed he then let her to the dance floor, the lights dimmed n the spot light on goham he n gopi danced beautifully, kokila smiling she went over n gave blessings then parag m chirag hetal it was fantastic, jigar goes over to rashi bhai n bhabii look like a dream perfect, your wish has become true rashi.
After the dance Aham picks up microphone n explains why everyone is there, that because they didnt celebrate gopis birthday due to her parents demise, so now today we shall celebrate gopis birthday who like his mother is number one in his life.
They cut the cake Gopi first gave aham, then Aham gave to her, he then sang happy birthday to her the same way gopi first sang happy birthday to him Happy birthday to ooo
Gopi smiled n blushed but then Aham sang her a beautiful happy birthday to you. Then the dolh came in followed by Mahma he goes over to gopi n blesses her she hugs him, then aham says mahma has a story to tell, so mahma told the story of how gopis parents died n how she was orphaned but he is ashamed to say that his wife n daughter took advantage of that, urmilla comes running what are you talking about he is crazy, kokila looks at urmilla chup let jeetu bhai speak. So he tells them everything about what rashi n urmilla done to gopi, not educating her, abusing her but this one is what really hurt him the most that they would use gopis parents death on her birthday, for my sister it was the happiest day of their lives gopi was the apple of their eye. Gopi now is crying, Rashi is looking shocked, jigar is looking at her, rashi goes up to gopi plse forgive me, gopi is so angry n she is crying she takes all her energy n gives a slap to rashi on her face everyone hearing it, urmilla goes up to her n is about to hit her the modis come in front including mahma, Aham tells everyone sorry the party is over, everyone looking at rashi shaking their head. Mahma tells Aham he is sorry if he had known this would never have happened, aham was holding on to gopi she turned to hug him he told her everything will be alright. kokila, parag gopi n aham dhawal kinjal all went upstairs leaving rashi urmilla hetal n chirag njeetu bhai downstairs, then they heard the screams gopi gopi plse save me gopi heard it n turned to go back down aham looked at her n said no. mahma told kinjal n dhawal he was going home if they would like to come jigar was fuming he was so mad he dragged rashi outside of the gate she was holding his feet n begging but he was not having it he pulled her off n said no, hetal went over to urmilla you have been a thorn in our family life we forgave i saw everything what rashi did but always covered it up not now not after this what type of mother are you. you ruined your daughters life. jeetu tells urmila dont come back to my house, there is not room for you anymore n goes off in the taxi
Back upstairs aham n gopi both in the room talking aham tells her that he wanted this day to be perfect for her but when he found out the truth he did not want to celebrate the day with lies because it would have been lies.
kokila looks at gopi you are a innocent girl that is why we love you so much never change.
Aham n gopi went out alot, Gopi was becoming more n more fluent in english which amazed aham, they even went to switzerland again n they had their suhaag rath.
As for rashi n urmilla who knows who cares i hope you enjoyed. Oh n kinjal became miss universe they moved out of rajpal nagar n brought savitabens house next door they lived with jeetu bhai n the two families lived in harmony both ate dinner at the modis that had become a ritual for them, jigar got a divorce n married sonum ..😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww so sweet, a thank you to god on Janmashtami for sending his wife to him.

A very thoughtful and pro-active Aham you have written, not one who is observant and doesn't say much as we have seen in Saathiya.

Sonam reappears and Rashi leaves. Gopi will have peace from Rashi at least now.
Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hopefully the C.V.'s are watching 👏
I liked the touch about Kinjal eating at the Modi's because as we know Kinjal can't cook so there would be even less chance of her learning to cook after becoming Miss Universe and there is only so much Pasta Dhawal Ji can eat 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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excellent Story , this is the way it should be.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Really nice update.
Loved the thinking and active Ahem.
Great going.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏 very nice story ..i want that crv,s read this story and played like same...if this happened then it will be great...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one Suk...
i would say you server the just desserts to the deserving people... lovely
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice os, if only something like that would really happen
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanbidaai

Aham decides he is going to celebrate gopis birthday later on, he invites everyone, he also chooses a sari for her with a jewellery set that would make anyone jealous. He told her that he was going to have some clients n friends around, he told kokila to tell jeetu mahma that they were having a celebration but not to tell them anything as he did not want anything going wrong the same went for jigar, rashi, hetal n chirag. This was going to be his gift to his wife n a big thank you to god for send her to him.
The party started aham comes down with gopi holding her hands she was shaking as its his clients will she be able to understand what they are going to be saying no like the disaster that happened last time, Aham looked at her n smiled. During the party gopi tried to escape Aham but he refused to let her hand go, this was irritating Rashi n urmilla, Gopi smiling laughing the more they saw the more they got jealous. Kinjal also saw she looked at rashi n urmilla she smiled, she went over to them kya jori hai kooobhsoorat taunting them both. Mahma hadnt arrived n aham told gopi to speak to his clients n not move until he came back, Aham went to call him, Mahma told him that he could not come as he had just come in, Aham insisted mahma ji u have to come to cut the cake with Gopi, Aham explains that they didnt cut the cake with gopi because of her parents dying the same day,mahma ji confused Aham what are you talking about, Gopi parents didnt die the same day they died about a year after what happened was a tradegy they were going to a puja there was a car accident gopis parents died but gopi survived.
Aham then explains what happened on janmastri, mahma n they both come up with a plan. Aham comes back smiling Gopi is no where to be seen he starts to look around, he runs outside n sees urmila n rashi before they could speak to her he tells her to come as he wants her to meet important people that are from the office, rashi looks at Aham jiju can i meet them, he looks at her where is ur husband why is it when ever i want to do anything with gopi u are there n something goes wrong, he holds gopis hand n smiles at her n takes her in.
At the Aham kisses Gopi on the forehead infront of all urmilla teeth went runnin, kokila saw n smiled, Gopi blushed he then let her to the dance floor, the lights dimmed n the spot light on goham he n gopi danced beautifully, kokila smiling she went over n gave blessings then parag m chirag hetal it was fantastic, jigar goes over to rashi bhai n bhabii look like a dream perfect, your wish has become true rashi.
After the dance Aham picks up microphone n explains why everyone is there, that because they didnt celebrate gopis birthday due to her parents demise, so now today we shall celebrate gopis birthday who like his mother is number one in his life.
They cut the cake Gopi first gave aham, then Aham gave to her, he then sang happy birthday to her the same way gopi first sang happy birthday to him Happy birthday to ooo
Gopi smiled n blushed but then Aham sang her a beautiful happy birthday to you. Then the dolh came in followed by Mahma he goes over to gopi n blesses her she hugs him, then aham says mahma has a story to tell, so mahma told the story of how gopis parents died n how she was orphaned but he is ashamed to say that his wife n daughter took advantage of that, urmilla comes running what are you talking about he is crazy, kokila looks at urmilla chup let jeetu bhai speak. So he tells them everything about what rashi n urmilla done to gopi, not educating her, abusing her but this one is what really hurt him the most that they would use gopis parents death on her birthday, for my sister it was the happiest day of their lives gopi was the apple of their eye. Gopi now is crying, Rashi is looking shocked, jigar is looking at her, rashi goes up to gopi plse forgive me, gopi is so angry n she is crying she takes all her energy n gives a slap to rashi on her face everyone hearing it, urmilla goes up to her n is about to hit her the modis come in front including mahma, Aham tells everyone sorry the party is over, everyone looking at rashi shaking their head. Mahma tells Aham he is sorry if he had known this would never have happened, aham was holding on to gopi she turned to hug him he told her everything will be alright. kokila, parag gopi n aham dhawal kinjal all went upstairs leaving rashi urmilla hetal n chirag njeetu bhai downstairs, then they heard the screams gopi gopi plse save me gopi heard it n turned to go back down aham looked at her n said no. mahma told kinjal n dhawal he was going home if they would like to come jigar was fuming he was so mad he dragged rashi outside of the gate she was holding his feet n begging but he was not having it he pulled her off n said no, hetal went over to urmilla you have been a thorn in our family life we forgave i saw everything what rashi did but always covered it up not now not after this what type of mother are you. you ruined your daughters life. jeetu tells urmila dont come back to my house, there is not room for you anymore n goes off in the taxi
Back upstairs aham n gopi both in the room talking aham tells her that he wanted this day to be perfect for her but when he found out the truth he did not want to celebrate the day with lies because it would have been lies.
kokila looks at gopi you are a innocent girl that is why we love you so much never change.
Aham n gopi went out alot, Gopi was becoming more n more fluent in english which amazed aham, they even went to switzerland again n they had their suhaag rath.
As for rashi n urmilla who knows who cares i hope you enjoyed. Oh n kinjal became miss universe they moved out of rajpal nagar n brought savitabens house next door they lived with jeetu bhai n the two families lived in harmony both ate dinner at the modis that had become a ritual for them, jigar got a divorce n married sonum ..😃


faanbidaai what a thought keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Suk ... a perfect os for a quiet weekend.
Ahem is at his best - building bridges along the way. This is the move we would like to see tomorrow.

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