FF: SAATHIYA [part 15 updated] - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb update i really loved it is fabulous
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb update. I am really liking the way ur proceeding the story. All the 3 parirs. It not boring dear

but the track is building up intrestingly. Give us lovely updates soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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A good update ... with all relationships taking shape. It was really good to read Ahem helping Gopi with her homework. I hope to see this in the serial.
Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow! thanks for considering me and writing a raji scene too... u r really nice... please update soon.. and also try to include some raji scenes 4 us.. raji fans...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i wish this happens really in the serial...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
nice update, looking forward to more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Really sweet chapter, glad Ahem helped Gopi
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Really nice chapter, glad Ahem helped Gopi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 6
Recap:

Ahem helps gopi with her homework

Rashi is reading recipe books and jigar and her have a cute night

Dhawal is working hard while kinjal makes tea for him

Gopi is getting dressed in the morning while ahem is staring at her

Gopi is opening her sindoor box and is about to apply it when she sees ahem in the mirror staring at her. Her hand freezes mid air and she looks at him nervously. Ahem gets up and walks towards her, the closer he comes, the shakier her hand gets [still mid-air]. He stands behind her and both look at each other in the mirror. He sees her shaking and holds her hand. Gopi's heart was in her throat. He holds her hand and applies the sindoor on her. They continue staring at each other, gopi in disbelief and ahem, well, for him it was like his body took over his mind. "gopi vau!" kokila called out. "coming maaji" and she quickly got up to leave but she couldn't as ahem was still holding her hand. She stands there waiting for him to let go but doesn't say anything. "gopi vau!" ahem gets irritated and yell "cant you hear mom calling you?!why are you still standing here staring at me?!" She stammers "ahe..mm ji….my…my…hand….you…." she needed to say no more. Ahem looked at her and then at his hand gripping on hers and then released her without a word. Gopi turned quickly and sped out of the room. IN1 *what the hell did you just do?! Whats wrong with you! damn! Im beginning to fear that you are falling for that gawar!* IN2 *shes not that gawar, she can write her name, knows the alphabets and can count to 100! And besides shes my ….wife!* he kicks the bed and goes to the bathroom to get ready.

Kokila: where were you gopi vau? Ive been calling out for so long

Gopi panting: maaji, ummm…ahemji…

kokila's eye brows shot up: what did ahem do? Did he again yell at you or say something to you?

gopi shaking her head quickly: no maaji

kokila: then??

Gopi blushing: maaji, ahemji was holding my hand so I was not able to come

Kokila trying to hide her smile: and why was he holding your hand??

Gopi blushing more: maaji he was applying sindoor on me.

Kokila almost jumped in happiness but controlled herself: ok. I was calling to ask you where the new puja thali was but its ok now, rashi got it. All this was heard by rashi behind the pillar and she almost fainted hearing about ahem and gopi but she couldn't be bothered as she was more concerned about her new dish she was preparing which she read last night. Well our rashi [I actually like her a lot] nowadays complains less, does more work, and for sometime now has not been calling her mother to update about the modi's. on the other hand, urmila, has been more irritated by her daughter not calling her and moreover dhawal and kinjal coming closer day by day.

Well that's all for today. I hope you like it. I know it's a short update so im sorry.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heh! Aham applying sindoor on his wife, hmm...great stuff.

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