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Your update was great , made me cry ... I know , I am a daddy's girl too. I have my dad wrapped around my fingers. Someone had once said , when I tell my dad to jump, he asks how high (LOL) But we have a special bond, I Hate that urmila has turned gopi's father against her... Can't waiting until gopi's father realize what a witch urmila is, and he kicks her out.

Poor Nisha.. She reminds me of someone. Sigh! And poor mamiji.. Now where will she go? Awesome update Shilpa ben..keep rocking

hi it was just fabulous part thank for this wonderful part

ohmygod that was fab plzzz cont

Superb update with many emotional incidents. Its truely touch my heart.

Originally posted by: hk01

please update!!!!
I only came across your ff yesterday - read it all in one go - its the best of all ff.
i joined the forum simply cos of your awesome ff. Are you not able to create videos of your ff, being the creative genius you are? 😃

Welcome to the forum. Thank you so much for this wonderful comment.
I have done VMs with my previous SS and FFs, but I haven't been able to come up with something for this one, because the story is different from the show. If I can come up with something for future updates I will make one.

Originally posted by: queenyuks

Excellent Shilpaben. Really excellent work

God, Gopi's father speaks Urmi's language.
Im a Daddy's girl, I cant even imagine being in the situation

Atleast now Gopi has Ahem and her brother to back her up
The support of your life partner is so important

I really loved this part. I hope Urmi ends up in a ditch somehwere

Yuks

Thank you Yuks.
Gopi's father in his grief blamed an innocent life for loss of his wife, he never got over her death and when Urmi came in the picture she made things worse for Gopi and now Raj is not spared either.
The father/daughter relationship may be too far gone to completely fix it, too much has happened for Gopi to except her father, but she may be able to forgive him.

I am also daddy's girl, spoiled rotten from very young age, so I don't even know if what I am writing can actually happen in real life, I figured this is fiction, so may be its ok.
Gopi has a full support system, now she just have to believe in herself and them.

Originally posted by: swasthi

I really loved this update.

Gopi needed him so much. She seemed relieved to see him at her father's home ready to take her back home. She even asked him 'Can we go home please?' She needed him more as the day wore on. She is unconsciously growing more and more needy of him.

He was outstanding with her. He was there at the crucial time ready to heal and rescue her. In the evening he felt it was not the right time to move forward in their relationship but wanted to show her how much she mattered to him.

This is were the misunderstanding is.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thank you so much Swasthi.
She unconsciously looks to him for support, she knows all she has to do is reach out and take his hand and he will make sure no harm will come to her, but first she has to believe in herself and him. If he could he would take all her pain and endure it for her, but she is not yet ready to share, and he is getting frustrated with the situation.
I hope to clear all their misunderstandings in the next update.

Originally posted by: 143badra

arre wa .. tht was a fab update ...

loved it ...

lot of misunderstanding ...

hope everything works out fine btwn Gohem ...

waiting for the next update ...

- - badra

Thank you so much. I am so glad you liked the update.
It won't be long before all is well between them and they will be tackling all problems together instead of individually.