SS - Tujay Yaad - pt5 pg 14 updated 14/7/11

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All fanfics, short stories and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission
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Love stories happen when two people have the same feeling towards each other of liking, desire and passion. But this is a love story of two people who are together for all the wrong reasons.


A boy who doesn't understand the meaning of love but desires to acquire whatever he sets a liking for and a girl who is helpless and can save herself and her family by giving into his demands.

The story is based in a small town of Rajkot , where the smallest thing happening in one's house is known to everyone.

People here lead a very careful life especially women. Man dominating the office and society is so common that now nobody is complaining but have accepted it as a part of their lives and try find happiness in the remains.

Same is not the story of Modi family. Although they are high class rich people, they have their values and tradition in place but they believe in educating their daughters without any hesitation.Kinjal consider herself lucky to be born in this family.


Her mother has left no stones unturned to provide her daughter same education as he has provided to his son, despite of relatives and society pressure. They are a closely knit family.


Like every other girl Kinjal also goes out for shopping or meeting her friends, aware that one of the local goon- Umang has developed liking towards her. She is aware of his deeds and has fallen for him.


Her mother Koki has found out, left no stones and got her married to a guy who she dislikes Dhawaal Panday.


Aham who is the Modi heir, has been pissed by the fact that he has got married to a gavar, unpar who has no sense of the reality and likes to cook only.


Anita his ex girl friend who has been dumped by him has got married and given bith to twin boys last month and has moved on in life which annoyed him a lot.


He knew that he somehow had to go and do something about this Unpar. He came across a girl, he simply forgotten.


A bubbly jolly girl called Khushi who brings forth all the evidence she can, and leaves no stones.


Khushi has come to the office and Aham told her everything of what to do. He was now satisfied.


Gopi who has met some eye to eye contacts with him has no longer doing it anymore. She is trying her best to stay away from him which made him more annoyed by the fact that he knows that Gopi is scared of him.


Aham and Khushi now leaves the office and heads home.


Khushi who is a bubbly person, tried to remain calm. She tried to shut her mouth as she knows she speaks a lot. Aham kept looking at her stunned in the car, laughing about.


Aham: ab bas bhi kar khushi, no one should know you are my real sister who was sent to boarding school since childhood, samjay gai.


Khushi smirked: you tell me to do something and now tell me to shush, wow bro.


They arrive home, and tells the driver to take the suitcases to Kinjal room.


Both walk in laughing about. Aham tells her to shush and both walk in..


Aham tells everyone that Khushi will now live with us and teach Gopi. She is experienced. She isn't like that teacher who left in anger.


Khushi walks up to Rashi, and looks at her top to bottom and around her and faces her again.


Khushi: oh so you are the Orange girl...


Rashi: jiii.. nai nai am rashi


Khushi: i know your rashi no need to tell, your the orange girl for me ... come here..


Khushi whispers to her ear: bachke rehna, my eyes are on you. samaj gaye


Khushi looks back at Aham and asks him where is her room? Gopi takes her to her room and asks her if she needs anything.


Khushi looks at her, she walks up to the door, locks the door and asks her to sit down and listen carefully to her. Khushi tells her about she going to teach her to read and write but she will not enter the kitchen while she is studying, if she does she will be punished.


Gopi agrees to it, and walks to her room and sees Aham glancing at her. He looks down staring at her thinking what to do, shakes his head and goes to sleep.


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do comment. and lemme know how it was so that i can continue. 🤗
Take care

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Aamnakideewani thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmmm nice intro BTW looking forward to it
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Great start. Rashi has finally met her match!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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You have set the scene and introduced the characters. Given us a taste of the purpose in the story too.

I like the idea of orange girl - that angered Rashi a lot.
Now for Jigar to be introduced to her.
A good start.
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Wow..Great Start !!
Looking Forward to it..
Loved it
Thanks For the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gimme gimme more, gimme gimme...😆 Great start, please update soon. Khushi's personality is like yours.
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Great start.. would love to read more 😆
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Originally posted by: sensitivesheela

hmmm nice intro BTW looking forward to it



thanks Amina xx


Originally posted by: sandyuk

Great start. Rashi has finally met her match!


thanks sandy xx

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Originally posted by: swasthi

You have set the scene and introduced the characters. Given us a taste of the purpose in the story too.

I like the idea of orange girl - that angered Rashi a lot.
Now for Jigar to be introduced to her.
A good start.


hey Swasthi. thanks . xx

wonder how jake will be after using the word Orange Girl on Rashi LOL 😆

thanks
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Originally posted by: SNS_fan100

Great start.. would love to read more 😆



thank you

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