ff-new avtaar {part-19, page-35}

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Wow, this was a another lovely part

Hope you continue soon!

I feel sorry for Gopi, i wonder what's going to happen next..

-Pooja

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

this twist sounds damn

good maybe ahem can

repent what he did to gopi

& start fresh intro to know

gopi well

lovely part

love it

xxx

waiting next part

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pihu rai

@pihu_rocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma
wow nice update good way the story is going
tank god rashi became positive

thanks shaina...hope u enjyed...

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pihu rai

@pihu_rocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: winter30
Fantastic update to your ff. Aww poor Gopi. I hope her memory comes back. Really glad , Rashi has realised that being bad is not good. You have portrayed the emotions of the charcaters very good especially Rashi. Keep it up.👏

thanks dear, i hope you liked it...

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pihu rai

@pihu_rocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Poojiebbz
Wow, this was a another lovely part
Hope you continue soon!
I feel sorry for Gopi, i wonder what's going to happen next..

-Pooja

thanks pooja dear...i will update soon...

ya me too but u will see different shades in the characters

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pihu rai

@pihu_rocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: simi91
this twist sounds damn
good maybe ahem can

repent what he did to gopi

& start fresh intro to know

gopi well

lovely part

love it

xxx

waiting next part