my firstff pt 12 pg 27 Conflicts and Complications - Page 11

Originally posted by: Bloem123

i love your ff Thanks for the Update !

Thanks for the pm 😃

Originally posted by: swasthi

The story has come full circle - now Ahem knows who Gopi is.

Looking forward to Ahem bringing Gopi's smile back.

A great update.

Originally posted by: atop

Ahem is going to make Gopi smile again and you just brought a full smile to my face with your ff..the cockiness and cheekiness was enjoyable and the transition from loggerheads to warmly hug was just so endearing..

So, looking forward to see how the relationship develops..continue soon..

Luv atop

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Awww...That was just to beautiful for words, absolutely wonderful update, the guy is already half way head over hills in love and he doesn't even know it, I can't wait for the next part.

Originally posted by: zee10

wow... Well writen. Keep going yaar

Originally posted by: Traxy101

I loved that ending, it was so sweet and romantic. I love your story so much and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Originally posted by: soni4eva

awww dat wa sooo sweet

i luv dis ff

ahem is so sweet

try n update soon plzzz

Originally posted by: pihu_rocks

well fabolous update and you are a very good writer..

i liked each and every part of scene...

i love this new gopi-ahem...

rashi-jigar chemistry may be good in upcoming update..

so please dear update soon...

looking forward to see it...

well this is a fabulous ff...so Ahem is going to make Gopi smile again...well where is the smiling? Oh how exciting...anxiously awaiting your next chapter!