FF- kuch kuch hota hai. Ch18/pg26 updated Last cha

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All fanfics which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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As i was earlier talking about aehem acting out in srk way on his thread, with sam, nafisa told me to write an ff about him and gopi in srk kajol way., hope you all enjoy.i will be putting this in english a few works like saas will be in hindi/gujrathi. please note, this is not related to the movie kuch kuch hota hai, this is total different and nothing from the movie will be in this.. Enjoy.

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Part 1

Aehem walks in the room seeing gopi ironing his sherwani. She gets a fright and quickly puts on her pallu. She forgets that the iron was burning the sherwani. She started to fix it.

He comes in and sees the sherwani burning and shouts: what is this, you have burnt my expensive sherwani, how many times do I need to tell you stop touching my things, can't you bear this thing in your mind? Are you mad that you can't understand anything.?

Gopi: lekin.

Aehem: chup ek dum chup, jao yahan sai, until I don't fall asleep, don't show your face to me.

Gopi just looks at him, her eyes watery, and puts her pallu on.

Aehem: can you not here, go and don't show me our face.

Gopi starts to shed tears , listening and staring at him, and runs downstairs. She was shedding tears continuously and sits down at the temple feet and starts to shed even more tears.

She asks her kanhaji: why does this always happen to me? Am I this bad? Since I have lost my parents, my despotic mami has raised me. I am a orphan girl has always been ill treated by mami and rashi. All my life being deprived of mother's love, I lived with immense hopes in my heart with only one expectation from life, an affectionate life partner and finding a mother in her Sasuma. But this did not turn out right, I did get love from my saas, she has accepted me as her own daughter and loves me so much, but my own husband, thinks of me as a fool, thief, a coward, not up to his standard, can't love me, why? Why did I have to marry a guy like him? A guy who loved a girl before marriage, I knew when kinjal told me, then rashi read the letter saying he did not love anyone, so I got ready? Why did I have to marry? Rashi who on the other hand, I have not understood, before marriage she always believed in having the best and n her own ways and wanted to get married in a affluent family. Her desires was total different from me, but why did maaji chose me instead of her, surely she is lucky not having a husband like aehemji, but I never understood why does she want her husband and mother in law in her rule, as she said before marriage? You must know all this kanha ji, but why treat me as a maid, just like aehem ji as well both treats me as a maid, when am not one, and is a human being. This complication relationship is getting on my nerves, I cannot bear anymore, and with false hopes. I have decided, I will at once leave this house, when I know maaji had told me not to. But its for everyone betterment, please guide me...


Aham is thinking, wherever i go she is there. At work, I'm am always thinking of her, Jigar is always telling everyone at the office of his bhabhi, at home his Mom is always forcing her to be around him. No peace for a minute he thought. He walks in Koki room and she speaks: Aham why is my Gopi vau crying, in the temple, i have heard what she was saying to God?


"Please Mom don't start this meri gopi vau thing, she burnt one of my shirts and is now ironing on my other shirts knowing I need to wear it just look at the state of it, by getting me married to this gavar girl you will always thing nothing but headache. She tells him to calm down and she leaves from there.

Gopi comes in to Koki room and sees her there and tells her: maaji, i am leaving this house, i know you have said i will not leave, but let me go. I cannot stay here or else i won't be at peace, after all i have hurt aehem soo much, laptop, navrathri, kinjal engagement, naap incident, his shirt burning this morning when I ironed and how he shouted at me because it was expensive, i cannot stand it at once.


There aehem listening to all this. something was happening to him after she said i am leaving. He was boiling with anger but why. But he was glad she was now leaving but why wasn't he feeling happy at all. Something is surely fishy he thought.


Koki stares at her in a shocked way, was glum and upset. She gave her blessings and some money as she will need them, she goes to her room, packs her clothes while he was in the bathroom. She took out her fathers pensions and put them in her bag, and zips it up.


Everyone gathered downstairs, crying, and upset. Jigar tells her to stay back but she refuses. She agrees to him saying he will drop her off. She started to get everyone's blessings, ignores rashi and walks outside, while Aehem coming downstairs, thinking what is going on.


He sees Gopi walking towards the door with a big handbag, leaving, while jigar is dropping her off. Chirag, Parag, and everyone ignores him and refuses to talk to him. Gopi leaves and sits in the car, and jigar takes her to the hostel where panna stays and drops her. He drives back home looking upset, and hurt and parks the car and goes inside.




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Posted: 14 years ago
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very good ayesha its my heart voice which u have written in your have wrtten in your ff. waiting for your new ff
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PROLOGUE


chapter 1 - page1
chapter 2 - page 1
chapter 3 - page 2
chapter 4 - page 3
chapter 5 - page 6
chapter 6 - page 8
chapter 7 - page 9
chapter 8 - page 10
chapter 9 - page 11
chapter 10 - page 12
chapter 11 - page 13
chapter 12 - page 15
chapter 13 - page 16
chapter 14 - page 19
chapter 15 - page 21
chapter 16 - page 22
chapter 17 - page 24
chapter 18 - page 26
Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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well done...👏

this is first fan fic of yours i feel you have put a lot of effort in delivering it to a good standard, the others i feel they are written with just half hearted attempt this one you have spent time thinking it through and it shows sister good job.


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Thank you nafisa sis, took me an 1 to sort this out (Y) xx glad u loved it
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Part 2 -

He goes inside and sees everyone sitting down. Aehem who was reading his file, was busy, and did not notice Gopi was gone. He simply ignored it. Koki and everyone stood up, even Aehem.

Jigar goes up to Aehem and speaks out : bhai... Our switzerland tickets had arrived, its in 2 weeks time, me, u, rashi and kaki will be going. Me and rashi are going to spend our honeymoon at the same time. He looked at koki, shook his head slightly and sat down.

Rashi: jigarji did you drop gopi to my pihar?

Jigarji... Jigarjii she began again, while everyone staring at him.

Jigar: what jigarji jigarji... Am already stressed out and your doing it more by making me remember bhabhi. Yes I dropped bhabhi, but not at your pihar, why with your mom, when she already made her life hell in childhood, don't you worry, she is safe and sound.

He drank water and looked at koki, and both made an eye contact (surely something going on between them).

Rashi who was standing behind, looked upset, as it was the 1st time he shouted at her, but she was excited to tell her mom about the honeymoon.

But how as aehem already took her phone off her as because of that day he been humiliated by both sisters, he knew rashi was cunning and Gopi was a fool because of her. Aehem looked at rashi, getting tensed and more, signaled jigar and he looked at her. Everyone was calm, upset, sitting down reading newspaper while a rukus came at the door.

Mani, raju... It was nani. Koki mother once again came to the Modi house. Nani entered as soon as she heard gopi left the house. Now it was time for her to get everyone sorted as baa told her to. She was happy about the Switzerland trip, but disgusted by aehem and Rashi deeds.

She sat down and started: ( here we go again rashi thought) aehem where is your wife gone? Did you not have some shame in you for letting your wife leave. Anyway what do I care you treated her as a maid just as rashi did in her pihar, you have always done that since u got married, pyaar kisi aur sai, aur shaadi gopi kai saath, kya zamaana agya, I got a grandson like him who hates all unpars maybe me aswell, as am like gopi too. Rashi go and get me water.

Hetal: kaki how come you are here? You left 3 days ago?

Nani: haa, my village got flooded, cause of that my house got knocked down so I came back here as I have no where else to go to.

Everyone sat there quietly, all upset, glum and missing Gopi. They stood staring at aehem who was peacefully focused on reading the newspaper which he forgot to read in the morning. He did not remember Gopi, that shocked the whole family.

After 15 minutes everyone departured to their rooms and went to sleep while Koki couldn't go to sleep as her vau wasn't there in the house. She was missing her already.

The next morning, everyone woke up, again here we go rashi does not collect the milk from the milkman, it was mani who did that, as she knew rashi will be getting taunt by everyone especially aehem bhai.

Everyone came down and say the temple all ready, and rashi started pooja. After pooja was done, she gave prasad to everyone, aehem growled at her, and walked to the dinning table.

Everyone sat down, and began to serve themselves. Aehem had his 1st bite and took it out and looked at rashi : rashi what is this,do you call this food,disgrace, there is no salt no pepper or any masala in it, learn first then cook, is that what you been taught in your parents home.

He and jigar stood up, and left for office. They were missing Gopi and her food, aehem started to miss her slightly and it not even been 2 days yet.


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Well how did you think of the first two chapters? Sorry part 2 is short. Hope you all enjoy and do comment .
Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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very nice wating for next part
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Hey it is fantastic. Pls continue..
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gimme gimme more! well nice, waiting for the next part Ayesha behn.
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👍🏼 waiting for the next part

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