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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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The weekends were getting on my nerves, and had loads of depression so i thought start with a ff and take it all out and focus on this, Sns is getting on my nerves, no love blossoms happening with Gohem, when will CV realize, I began writing this FF - Gopi Tapasya, and started to enjoy it in the 1st part already, do read and comment, for sure. I hope u all like it. i know u all out there are getting bored so enjoy reading
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Part 1 -

Aehem and Gopi loved each other more than their own lives. Every year on 14th may they celebrate this day as it was the day they met and fell in love. Apparently what had happened was, Gopi left her diary at home in her parents bedroom and left for college. They're she started to study like everyone else and behaved totally weird in front of the lecturer. Once she get mad, she actually does, she was like, she answers back when she is angry, she taunts you, and take taunts whenever she is in the mood.


She was very hot tempered. Aehem who right at the top smirking at laughing as he got a girlfriend who is such like his mother, but she was sweet and cute. Back to her parents bedroom, her father om prakash has come out from the washroom after taking a shower and saw a diary on his bed, he went forward and picked it up and began to read the diary. He was shocked, began to get really angry. How can his daughter do this. Love? How can she do this? She well knows love wasn't allowed in this house no matter what, after his sister malini had suicide because of her love cheated her so it was forbidden totally.


His wife Shanti came in and saw him reading the diary. She got scared, she well knew Gopi loved Aehem, and cannot stay without him, For the past 3 years she kept that a secret from Gopi father. His wife Shanti, got scared and frightened and quickly called Gopi and told her about the diary scene and put the phone down. She turned around and got a slap from om prakash. Gopi who got seriously scared, and didn't know what to do as she was scared of her father a lot. He was a very strict person and everyone had to obey his rules.


She had urgently wanted to speak to Aehem about it, and she found him in the canteen with his friends and her friends, she ran up to them and spoke, "aehem, aehem aehem". They turned around and she spoke and told them everything about what her father had found out. She was dead totally dead. They tried to think and make a plan and told her to go home and fix the problem, while we handle it here, and fake something. Gopi went home, slowly, in a scared way, got some spirit and went inside and saw her father standing in the hall waiting for her.


He slammed the diary really hard on the table and the glass broke. Both mother and daughter got scared and stepped back from him. Om prakash went up to her and shouted: how dare you, you know this all isn't allowed in my house, you very well know that if someone is in love they have to leave his house in a jiffy otherwise I will apparently kick them out.


Gopi: but dad, you misunderstood me, I really love him, I can't stay without him no matter what happens, if I have to leave him then I don't know what I will do in my craziness of love for him, whatever happened to bua, was not my fault, that was her own fault, destiny, she fell in love with the wrong guy and killed herself, and my aehem isn't like that at all. Why do you hate him? After all he is a Modi? Your biggest Enemy? Just because Chirag kaka never married Malini Bua doesn't mean his whole family is the same.


A tight slap came, she had been slapped by her father, from now on she was not allowed to step out of the house, no matter what,happens, she switched of her phone and hid it so that her father doesn't see it, She stood up, her father dragged her to her room and locked the door from behind as she wasn't allowed out of the room as she was getting spoilt day by day and was getting out of control.


She cried out loud and recollected all those love moments she had and didn't know what to do, She from now on refused to talk to Aehem and obeyed her fathers orders, and ignored him totally. Her eyes started to get black from her eye lids, she was getting a bit weak, and all she could think of was her love.


Aehem called her continuously day and night for the past 5 days and she did not pick it up. He was getting worried and he was sure he had to find out why there was an enmity between the shah and the Modi, He had started to take care of the Modi industry and everything transferred to his name, house, property, land, everything except one thing, he couldn't get his love. He was angry, he had to do something to get his love back, he couldn't stay away from her one bit, took her father taunts and left the house.


Also came home very late at nights and never ate his food properly, Koki was getting all tensed and annoyed as because of chirag enmity he had to leave his love, and craving for her day and night, but he is helpless, she had to bring them together no matter what.


He had to find a way, but how. His heart told him, Gopi was craving for him day and night, cried the whole night, and needed him badly to take her sorrows out. He went to his mother's room, and cried his heart out and was confused as he didn't know what to do, except from asking chirag kaka what was all this? . He stood up and saw his father getting angry as he saw his son pain and went up to his brother and called him in a fit of anger as he couldn't stand his son pain at all.


Chirag had come down and saw parag shouting and in a lot of pain and spoke in anger: see my son , and how he is sacrificing his love just because of your enmity of those shah parivaar, what it with you, the past was past, can't you end this enmity. My son who is tolerating all this for nearly 2 weeks and now he is in this state of position that he will leave this house any time just for the sake of his love.


Chirag: but i have ended this enmity long ago, i dn't have any enmity at all, if Aehem loved Gopi so much why doesn't he go and hand his hand for her.


Parag: my son will not go to their house until u and om prakash don't sort their problems out and let these two lovers reunite, dn't let them sacrifice it just like malini and you did, your refused to et married because of baa permission, what is that girls fault, she can suicide any time do you know that?


Chirag held his hands together and folded them and spoke: parag, don't you worry, i will not let these two lovers separate, i myself will go and speak to om prakash and find out what is going on, and hand his marriage to them.



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I dunno how this ff will go, but i will try and make the love blossom of gohem happen and make you day dream.
But what will happen, will they ever come to know why and how chirag never married malini, and why she suicide and enmity came in between these two families, the Modi like Gopi very much and wanted her as their DIL, but they were scared what if Om Prakash do something? what will happen and what will they do ? I will make you all think until i update the next chapter asap. Do comment.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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ayesha looks that u r portraying gopi like a mogern girl in your new ff
very good
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thanks suk and shoiab. Will continue tmz at 8pm got college x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ayesha,
Good job! liked that this Gopi can get angry & Ahem desperate that she was not picking up the phone. Interesting family feud. Please continue!👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was nice ayesha...plz continue...
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thanks for liking, wn't be able to update today, am severe ill with fever and sever stomach. will be doing it tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78

thanks for liking, wn't be able to update today, am severe ill with fever and sever stomach. will be doing it tomorrow

Get well soon.!
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welcome aviva, i made a start i think ill be able to update it tonight, if not then tomorrow,
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78

welcome aviva, i made a start i think ill be able to update it tonight, if not then tomorrow,

Good. I want u to get well soon first but I am also waiting for the next part.
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Chirag held his hands together and folded them and spoke: parag, don't you worry, i will not let these two lovers separate, i myself will go and speak to om prakash and find out what is going on, and hand his marriage to them.

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Chirag ;eaves the house with the men and goes to shah house. Om Prakash welcomes them in and they tried to calm everything down, but Om wasn't ready to get Gopi married. Chirag also explained to them that its not his fault, he has moved on in life, he has a family, it all happened because god tested them, and whatever happened its wasn't in their hands.


It was in Gods hand, but Om didn't agree at all as he was suspicious as his daughter life will be ruined but he let go of his anger.


They sorted all the problems out and ended the enmity in a jiffy, and agreed to get them married, but after a month time as Gopi was finishing her career in college this month and they wanted her to complete it first.


Gopi went to college and only 3 weeks till she be leaving college forever. She was excited so she went to the canteen and had some mischievous with her friends, while Aehem wasn't in college anymore as he started to handle the business and became known as a famous business tycoon, just in a month and became successful.


He was a tough guy, and found out he be getting married, and jumped out with joy and started to get shy. He ignored the fact that he was getting workaholic. 3 weeks has passed by, Gopi had left college and started her new life. She was getting married.


A simple wedding, they had a private engagement on tuesday and they waited until thursday for the actual marriage which was going to be a great pomp.


The wedding day had arrived, everyone was waiting for the bride to come down, and the preist had started to chant mantras. As the video below, will show how it be like.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y0VVbViKjjM[/YOUTUBE]




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Thats all, as am not well, so i had to madke it short, hope u all enjoy. Sorry again that it is short

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago

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