Gopi passes out os part 3 page 2 n end

Gopi,kinjal n dhawal are walking towards the road with the sandook when Aham sees them he looks at them confused, he stops the car n gets out
Gopi kinjal what are you doing here?
Kinjal replies bhai we went to get Nanis sandook from the well.
Gopi puts her pallu on she then puts her head down, Aham looks at her Gopi r you ok? Gopi says ji he then asks her how come the sandook is down the well? she replies i cant tell you.
kinjal replies bhabi wont tell us anything but she asked us to help us get the sandook back to the house. Aham tells dhawal to put the sandook in the car he tells Gopi to get in, Gopi says ji Aham ji do you have any water in the car, he looks at her water no Gopi she tells him she is very thirsty he tells her to sit the house is only 5 minutes away he gets into the car n looks at Gopi then reaches for the seat belt n puts it on her, her eyes are closed he smiles, kinjal looks at Aham bhai we shall meet you at the house, Aham replies ok
At mm Gopi eyes were still closed Aham looked over n admired her, Gopi we are home? he takes the seat belt off for her n touches her hand it was burning hot, Gopi wakes up Ahamji r we home yet she asks he tell her yes go inside the house i will bring out the sandook. She slowly gets out the car n gathers all her strength n starts to walk, Aham walks after her observing her Dhawal n kinjal also arrive.
As soon as they enter the house Gopi says Maji , kokila turns round she sees Aham with Nanis sandook n Aham put the sandook down he tells kinjal run n get water for Gopi just as he says that Gopi passes out he catches her, Gopi Gopi he shouts mom she is burning up, Dhawal says but Gopi was ok she is the one who took the sandook out of the well aham starts to look at Gopis arms n hand her right hand there he saw two bite marks, he picks up Gopi n runs kokila runs after him Aham whats happened dikra whats happened to Gopi mom she has been bitten by a snake, Aham drives out of the drive way fast then call the commission of police to help him get his wife to the hospital within 5 minutes Aham gets a police escort, kokila is shouting Gopi vahu gopivahu. As soon as they get the hospital Ahams lifts up Gopi n runs into the emergency room. He shows the nurse the bite, the nurse tells him to go out she calls the doctor.
kokila outside Aham what is going on? mom Gopi went down the well to get the sandook kinjal n dhawal were helping her? The nurse comes running out n passes them Aham runs after her my wife how is she? she looks at him n says pray because the poison is taking over her body if we dont get the antidote then we are very sorry, Aham asks where is the antidote she tells him on the otherside of town, Aham says one minute he calls the police commission again n asks for a favour as traffic is heavy n we need the antidote can we use the police helicopter to get the antidote, Aham no probem..
The antidote arrives but gopi is on life support fighting for her life


Shall write again very soon confusion confusion

Suk where to stop, biting out nails waiting.

Oh Suk, hurry back don't leave us in suspense! Poor Gopi! Poor Aham!

Will she die? Anyway i dont care, do i?😉 she was plotting against my orange gal..
Suk ben, i'm waiting for the next

wow wat a great start plz come back with the res

Part 2
The whole family arrive at the hospital, Gopi on life support Aham was the only one allowed to see her, he goes in n sees her he has flashbacks of holi she told him she could'nt live without him, he was angry at himself as earlier today he had hurt her thats why he had come home earlier just to see her, he smiles when she gave him the tea she had this look a sweet look. Aham goes over n holds her hand he then whispers in her ears Gopi if you can hear this i cant live without you either. The doctor walks in the next 24 hours are critical.
Outside kokila asks kinjal n dhawal why was Gopi in that well, kinjal says Ma Gopi bhabhi just asked us to help her she just said that the sandook had to be taken out of the well n to Nani. Kokila looks at Rashi Gopi went with you earlier to get ma a present so why didnt she buy one, kaki ji i dont know i left her at the store. Ma kinjal say dhawal ji ki faye was their earlier by the well she said she was feeding cows but there were no cows there. kokila starts to think one sandook empty n the other one Gopi brings back home n now she is fighting for her life, she looks at Rashi, Rashi just puts her head down, Rashi says to jigar i am going to get everyone water, she leaves as soon as she is out of sight she calls urmilla n tells her what happened, urmilla says she does not care if Gopi dies or not n shes not going to come as too many questions will be asked. Rashi says mummy if you dont come they will get suspious of me n you come now. Ok Rashi i will come with your papa in a short while. mummy kinjal told kargri that you were at the same place earlier that day, Urmilla starts to sweat nahi dikra i am not coming i shall send your papa, mummy if you dont come i am going to die. ok i will come in a while. Rashi comes back without water, kokila says Rashi where's the water, kaki couldnt find any, jigar looks over n says water cooler is right there.
Aham comes out with tears in his eyes, kokila goes up to him Aham dikra Gopi vahu is she ok, aham looks at kokila n says the next 24 hours are critical, Aham starts to walk away from the family, kokila looks at him she is about to go after him, jigar says kaki i will go kinjal says ma i will also go, they both run after him. Aham goes outside the hospital n goes n sits on a bench he starts to cry. Jigar n kinjal walk over to him Bhai, Aham wipes his tears he looks at them n smiles. Bhai bhabi will be ok dont worry, Aham looks at him n nods his head, jigar she said to me she cant live without me, but the truth is i cant live without her i did not know this until now, why has it taken me so long to realise. kinjal looks confused bhai are you in love with Gopi bhabi, he looks at kinjal n says yes i am in love with Gopi. kinjal looks at him what about anita you loved her what i had for anita was different the feelings i have for Gopi are deep a different sort of love. But until now i did not realise any of this until earlier today.i have not even told her . Dhawal runs up Aham bhai the doctor is calling you.
Everyone runs back inside, the doctors looks at Aham Mr modi it seems your wife has given up the fight to live, we are doing all we can we have stablised her but her heart is going weaker. Aham walks back into the room, goes over to Gopis bed n starts to shout i knew it you were just doing a drama, you stole that sandook, you responsible for everything bad that goes on in my house. So Gopi ji you want to die then die what do i care, what does mom care kaki, Aham is crying whilst he is saying all of this. kokila n everyone are all crying listening to ahams shouting. Gopi you want to get out of my life i wont let you. The monitor starts to beat faster the nurse runs in then it starts to stabilise just then Gopi opens her eyes( reel filmy shytle) Aham ji why are you angry you know anger is not good for you. Aham goes over n kisses her on her cheek i thought i lose you he says, Aham ji i heard someone say they could not live without me i was sure it was you. Aham smiles Gopi its true i cant live without you.
Over the 5 days Gopi was in hospital Aham stayed with her taking full care n feeding her, reading the holybook n when he did not understand the meaning Gopi would explain it too him. Kinjal came to visit Gopi bhabi what jadoo have you done to bhai this is the first time he has taken time off work, Gopi smiles n blushes Aham hugs her, Bhai not infront of the children just then dhawal walks in, Gopi you scared us all. Aham gets Gopi release papers he tells Gopi she is leaving n her sari was in the bag, Gopi asked kinjal if she would help her, Aham looks at her what i cant help you put on a sari, Gopi blushes, bhai i will help Gopi bhabi you n dhawal ji leave now. Both leave kinjal gets a box out of the bag its wrapped up Bhabi this is for you, Gopi asks her what is it kinjal ben can you open it for me my right hand is still numb it will be difficult for me, kinjal does inside is a note n a green sari, bhabi there is a note shall i read it to you, its from Aham bhai he writes Gopi i know our marriage started off bad but i want to start fresh i want all past problems forgotten lets lets look towards the future as husband and wife plse accept this sari as my first present of love yours Aham.
Bhabhi i have to say sorry as well i was the one who order the necklace when you first got married it was to ruin your marriage to bhai i am sorry i told bhai this he knows can you forgive me. Gopi smiles kinjal ben as ahamji said past problems forgotten lets look towards the future. Gopi n kinjal hug kinjal helps Gopi put the sari on as soon as she does Gopi says kinjal ben i have no sindoor, Aham walks in he brings the bottle of sindoor that Baa gave to Gopi, he tells Gopi baa told me about this sindoor she had give you from today i will be the one who puts the sindoor on your head. Gopi starts to cry.
Yet to come Rashi threatens Gopi Aham overhears

See you tomorrow

You love Rashi, i'm sure of it.. Coz the dialogues of Rashi are perfect.. And Rashi rocks in ur stories though u try to potray her as evil.. So the inference is you love ur bhabi😛
loved your update, u are a visionery

Great job Suks!!!!! Please don't let anything happen to Gopi or I will be after the orange gal & her rabbit Mom. Excellent job! Thanks Suk for the happy ending!