FF- Rashi plans backfires as Aehem overhear it all

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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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Am going to try writing ffs again, so am going to try, as today the forum is dull maybe because, the cricket match, so i congratulate india team and supporters from the bottom of my heart, it was a fab match today and i am dancing, and munching about after their winning. So i hope they win the world cup. I hope you all like this short ff, maybe if i go half way through and like it then i will make it longer , so here i go:

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Gopi was fasting today. Aehem refused to come home and break her fast as he did not accept her at all. He sat in his chair, in the cabin, in his office, and started to think back, from day 1- marriage till now. He realizes he had feelings for this girl, but how can he tell her all this? She already doesn't understand him, she is always afraid of him, she always puts on her pallu whenever she sees me, and goes away? So whats the point in him telling what he feels for her. And of course he never told anyone his feelings, and loneliness to anyone. He never had a proper relationship with he family. He always used to stay away from everyone, He always used to run away from the family happiness and occasions so whats the point he thought. He then comes back to the reality. He sees the time which was already 10 o clock, so he had to leave, as that poor girl must be waiting for him to break her fast. He puts his netbook in his case and zips it up.

He leaves the office and sits in the car and drove off. While he was driving, he thought he had to start his life afresh. He had to joke, laugh, have masti everything with everyone. He can't sit back hurting himself and feel left out.He parks the car perfectly in the lane, and shuts the door. He locks it and walks up to the house door and opens it. Everything was dark, and quiet. Must be everyone had gone to sleep. He shuts the door quietly, and walks to the main hall. He sees Gopi sleeping at the feet of the temple. He knew it for sure that she will be waiting. He saw mani and told her to take his bag upstairs and she took it and put it on his bed and went to her room and slept. He goes up to Gopi and kneels down, and lifts her up. He could feel her breathing softly against his chest and holds her tightly and takes her upstairs and shuts the door with his foot as he was holding her.

His heart was beating faster, faster as it could. he felt much worse than he was with Anita. He thought he had to get her a tutor and a etiquette lesson so that she can be stronger than before and fight against Rashi and many more and give them a tight reply. He made her lie down on the bed and shut the lamp beside her. He went to the bathroom and had a shower, wore his sherwani and came outside. He saw how she was sleeping like a baby, how innocent she looks, and he was annoyed by the fact that he could not recognize her properly and always judged her in a bad way. He had to find out the true self of Rashi and her Mother.

He knew they were after the sandooq and he also overheard her talking to urmi about stealing the sandooq and taking it to the CM. He was annoyed. He had to do something as rashi was planning to give sleeping pills to Nani, his nani. He was totally going over the top. He sat beside Gopi and went to sleep.

Gopi wakes up seeing that she was sleeping all night beside Aehem on the same bed, but she wondered how she came there. She ignored all this and went to have a shower and and came out in her golden green sari. As it was a day after holi, she thought why did i fast on holi, it was a bit awkward and stupid. Koki knew about it and was happy. Aehem wakes up and sees her in his favorite color, and goes to the washroom and changes to his suit. He come sout and sees her fixing the bed. He could not stop looking at her at all. He felt a bit awkward and started to feel a bit blush.

He ignored all this and went to the dressing table and put his watch on. he sees that he forgot to zip his trousers quickly does that before anyone sees it. He combs his hair and goes down. He sees everyone looking at both of them. He looked down and went and sat beside them. He was getting annoyed by the fact that Rashi was getting irritated seeing him beside Gopi as she thought Gopi was much safer if he was around. No doubt that everyone was scared of Aehem, as his anger is na jaiz, it was impossible. He gives daanth,(shout) he gives the answer to the daanth(shout) and he never took daanth(shout).

He looks up and sees everyone looking down, not daring to stare at him, but he speaks out, why are you all quiet, no need to be afraid, am only a kid to you and all of you are scared of me. They looked around, with relief, and started to talk. He speaks out : i found out something nani, someone is trying to put sleeping pills in your food, so that they can steal your sandooq and take it away, they also have made a duplicate key of the sandooq key, and its someone in this house, as far as i know its not Gopi. So you all cannot blame her.

Everyone was shocked. Rashi was so shocked as what she heard, she thought how does he know , mummy going to kill me, now this plan now backfires. Oh god what shall i do now. Aehem was looking at her, this is noticed by Koki, and comes to know that Rashi is behind it, so she left it all on his hands an she thought she will speak to him later about what she does to Gopi. Nani was surprised, someone in the family wants the sandooq badly. But who can it be.


Although i have wrote 21 ffs, so this is my 1st attempt of writing how Aehem rescues the day and becomes close to Gopi, i want to know how did you find the 1st part so i can know if i should continue or not. please let me know.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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There is no need in asking how the 1st part was as your ffs
really drive me nuts (in a good way hehe)
cuz i really do love Goham and so happy that for once Ahem
is saving the day... I would be dancing if this could happen in reality
with Gohem :)
please do continue and thnks for continuin the ffs
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks behna for the update. please continue. really nice.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks vishwa and rubina, due to me going high after india winning the semi finals this idea came and thnk
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Welcome shoiab, I thought no one is writing any so I should start a brand new one after partying for the cricket winners, also sad pak lost they were great
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its great!! please do continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi ayesha the ff is very nice its very diff from what u have written till now...first time ahem is doing something good...plz continue update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes pls continue but dont show Rashi being forwarned and prepared...let them be caught red handed

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