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sunshine33

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Please continue.. It's really really good

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

loved it....waiting for the next update

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ANJ4

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Yuks you are so right - But I think ahem is on the rag all the time - even on the show. Love chapter 1 it just flowed into chapter 2 - what great writing . But you stopped - I wanted to read moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Update update

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madhu_sridhar

@madhu_sridhar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mridhu

Aham smiled, he adored the kid. She was a beautiful baby. Everyone at home had been elated when Aabha Modi was born ' obviously!

Baa had been so happy to see the next generation. Kaka and Kaki ' he'd never seen Kaka and Kaki so happy earlier, neither had he seen them behave like children themselves, which they did when they were around the baby.

Jigar, Aham chuckled as he thought of Jigar, his younger brother had been ecstatic. And that would be the understatement of the century.

And papa and mom ' they'd been '

Don't go there Aham

He pursed his lips together, enough of reminiscing - he needed to shut out everything.

now that line caught my attention...ahem describes everyone's feelings in the house towards the baby...but what stops him when it comes 2 koki n parag ?? could it be possible that koki n parag are sad that they could not be grandparents yet?? i'll try 2 wait patiently for the next part...

a lovely update mridhu....good flow in the story...keep us entertained😊

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magss24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

fantastic update.. eager to know why gopi is goin to MM.???

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br2499

@br2499

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Oh! beautiful mridhu! Loved both the updates. Looking forward to more.

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Mridz

@Mridzy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

@ Yuks - Thank you so much, babe - Hormonal Woman?! Like I told you, this was exactly what that kept me from writing the FF - I did not want to go too much off character, that the character is no longer recognizable!! But you said Aham is also like this in the show - I'm gonna take your word for it, cause sometimes I just do not understand the dude!

Thanks for reading and commenting

@ Shilpa - Thanks Shilpa - I was hoping the baby moment will bring about some tenderness, hope the required effect was projected

@ Suk - Thanks, but my name is Mridhu! 😊

@ Rubina - Thank you for reading

@ FsgtsaraKhan - Thanks a lot for your kind words

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Mridz

@Mridzy

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

@ Sunshine - Thanks for reading and your wonderful words

@ Kav - Thank you. Next update will come soon

@ ANJ4 - Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you liked the story and the flow! Working on the next part. update coming soon

@ Madhu - Thanks for the review Madhu - Why Aham stopped when he thought about his parents - dare i say, for me to know, and you to read 😃. Thanks for liking the fic, Madhu

@ Maheswari - Thank you. I promise that the reason will be revealed in the next part!

@ Bee - Thank you so much!!

@ Rubina - Working on it - will try and update by tomorrow for sure!

@ ALL - Thanks everyone for reading and leaving me with wonderful comments!!

And it warms my heart that you guys are waiting for an update here. Thank you!!

Mrids

Edited by mridhu - 14 years ago

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HansaN

@HansaN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

please update needed urgently. thanks

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki
aayi naa kuch khabar writer ki
ye hume hai yakeen, bewafa woh nahi
phir wajah kya hui, aage na likhne ki....

hwz the parody mridu... chalo gal waiting for what happens next

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