New FF - Anita to bring him to right track ;)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 1

It has been 7 months nani had edict in the modi house. She is going to stay permanently. Ahem is shocked, he couldn't handle the feigning in front of his nani.

How can I keep on doing this he thought? He thought why should I fake this relationship. Sometimes I feel Kuch kuch hota hai from inside, but then its kabhi khushi kabhi gham later on. Then he thinks kal ho na ho but he has to reveal it one day?why he thought?

Everyone was prosperous that the relationship between them has changed which hasnt at all and gopi knows that to. She served him breakfast, just as usual, toasts with boiled eggs.

He started to eat them then recollected the natak he had to do. He spoke: Gopi, sit down and eat?

Gopi : you eat first then I will eat later on. Why is he doing the natak he thought? He glanced at her. He looked around and went to office. He was in a foul mood.

He finally thought, it has to be unconcealed to nani, it has to. I am fed up, utter fed up with this gavar. I cannot take my mother's promise and fulfill it now,so he left everything and went back home. He called everyone to the main hall.

He had to speak to nani, he had to break his uncommunicativeness but he was in painful sensation.

He reveals the truth to nani. The bitter truth infront of the family. And there comes a tight slap. A slap from nani, her own blood grandson, a stoned hearted man, how can that be?

Gopi had left the house that day. A few hours back before he came. It had been revealed to her by Gopi. Suddenly she goes to her room and locks the door.


next part updated tomorrow

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Posted: 14 years ago
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How can that be! He thought Gopi left without informing him. He had his hand on his cheek, tears in his eyes, it hurted him so much. There koki was so sad, 1st her daughter now his son. It was a disgrace for her. The next morning, gopi had gone to jaipur to the Sood parivaar, where her fathers side was, her chacha family. She went to her dadi and cried alot. She told them everything, everything what aehem did. Viren got mad, viren had already gone mad after why his parents sent him to boarding, and now he forgot all this and helped his sister. How can aehem do this to her. Just because girls in our family are not allowed to be educated, os ka naajaiz faida logo os ko uthai, everyone was in terrible anger.
They all calmed down and vandana and chanchal took her upstairs and made her rest. They stayed with her all night. Poor her had a high fever all week.
Aehem was in bed, he was so ill, and had high temperature. He needed gopi but no on knew where she was not even her mama and mahmi.
Everyone searched for her everywhere but no. Aehem was admitted to the hospital, he had never been ill that before.

After a week aehem got better and had been discharged from hospital. He went to office and everyone greeted him and gave him flowers as he had been ill.

Gopi life had been changed but she missed ahem so much and refued to get married. The Sood family decided to move to Rajkot. While they shifted, they cleaned the whole house and sat down. Gopi did the kitchen work with divya and nivi.

After a few hours it was night time, they went to sleep.

The next day everyone woke up, gopi cleaned the mandap and did the aarti. She gave offerings and went to cook.
Aehem had been missing Gopi a lot , and wondered where she could be. He thought if he was in love with gopi but then he thought no it can't be. His nani wasn't even talking to him no one in the house was except jigar and chirag.

Next ch- to meet anita - big hungama - ahem sorted out - search of gopi - then remarriage

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Ahem was missing anita, he wasn't actually sure if he loved her. He has ruined everything, the peace in the house, anita and gopi he had to talk to them.

Anita phone comes and he picks it up and answers : meet me beside the resort today after ur important meeting if u have one.

Aehem finished all his assignments and his meetings. He asked kaka if he can go now as he isn't feeling alright and he let him. Aehem goes to the resort. No one was there except anita and him.

Anita : I have not asked u to come back to me and begin our life anew as am married now, seems like ur still the same? Why did u leave Gopi? Don't u even know what a gem she is? A girl who even better than me, so what she isn't educated u can educate her.

Aehem : I can't stand her, since that day she risked my mother life, I cannot trust her anymore

Anita : u have to, coz ur heart says u love her, ur face clearly shows u love her but then leave your ego, u have to.

Aehem : I know I love her, since the past couple of days I started to feel restless , I wonder how she is and where she is.
Anita : that's like it but u have to leave ur ego

Aehem : I can't
Anita : oh yes u can , be mature aehem , be strong u get over with it. I have brought her with me . If u want her back. Then u have to drop all the thing u have ego aswell.
Aehem : I promise u I leave everything just bring her to me once.
Anita : there can u see her far away 1 mile can u see . If u love her open ur arms ans she will come running to u and hug u , if not she will get her answer am away, good luck

Anita goes and aehem changes.

Aehem takes his arms out and gopi sees it. She runs towards him. She runs and then hugs him. He twirls her around and says I love you so much and am sorry .

Gopi was relieved to hear all this and took her pains out.

She promised him she will never leave him at any cost and they both go back home.

At the modi mansion everyone was tensed just as usual after gopi had left. There was no laughter and happiness. The bells happens. Mani opens the door and sees aehem standing there.
Aehem : mom there's a surprise for u ?
Koki : kya,
Aehem walks aside and koki and eveyone sees gopi. They all run to her and hugs her.
Aehem speaks out : sorrry I had hurt all of u , I couldn't understand what was in my heart then finally anita showed me the right path. Me and gopi will be doing 7 phere again on our anniversary . this made everyone happy.

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago

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