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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
hi ayesha, really good update can't wait for aham to be jealous the amount of time his wife spends with the new person in her life. i wonder if he really is her brother?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
great one ayesha...i love gopi's name, 'vandana'.......and i need not tell you, coz u always update fast😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That's what you need to think about nafisa is her really her brother? How does he know so much of her? Is he with urmi plotting against her? Or is he not her brother ? If he is her brother why did he come quickly to RajKot to her? There is something suspicious to think about but keep thinking maybe u come to the final conclusion. Nafisa good guess, how wud he feel if gopi spends time with this new person ? Will he be jealous
Madhu , thnk 4 liking, we all know how fast I update this FF as u all know am a fast typer LOL yeh vandana her real name .. Will update in a few hours
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Ayesha, i guessed that something else was going on, with the changing of name and the initial reaction to him, not excitement of loosing her long lost brother, but almost anger, don't call me that! don't want to say exactly what i'm thinking as Gopi is like an innocent, so i will wait and read your next update, it's good you do the updates regularly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok then nafisa, I guess u have to wait until the next few updates to find
out the truth , good luck if ur right
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Ok! an intrigue. I am not good at guessing and so am going to be patient read whenever you reveal it. Nice update Ayesha!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thnks bee :) whatever the reason is, will be revealed asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Gopi: what, u still remember that name, dont call me that ever again.
Aehem smirking behind as its the 1st time she without the pallu infront of him

Chapter 12


His Phone rang, and he shut the door of his room. He answered : is this the time to call, don't you know am in your daughter house. I will sort everything out. You don't need to worry Mami. you have lied to the girls but i know what u and i have to do. Don't call me again, i will call you on the right time and remember if rashi calls you don't give her any plans to be a queen tell her, to adjust herself in her house and stop her evil minded as i know everything.

(yes he is Gopi older brother,.)

Gopi knocks on his door and tells him everything about her and her marriage life and he was shocked.
She was glad that her brother was back.
Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
ch 13

his brother shifted everything her in Rajkot, business entire everything. He bought a new house and moved there.

Gopi went to the room and sat down. She heard Aehem walking towards her. He hugged her from behind and spoke how much he loved her and told her they were going to london for a while.
Gopi was excited and now everyone started to call her vandana instead as Gopi was too simple. Vandana was excited, she heard a lot of things about London, the buckingham palace, the queen, madam tussauds- the wax museum surrently srk and dat wax models are there.

They left for London and arrived after 9 hours in the plane. They went for a tour to buckingham palace and went to their hotel and rested.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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_ch 14

They went to the hotel and had some private moments ( am not gnna discuss the scene - dn't want to be a besharm lol)
The Next day aehem left in the morning for the meeting he came for. Gopi woke up and saw she had no clothes. She remembered the scene of last night and got happy. She wrapped herself in her gown and got up. She went t the washroom and got changed. She cleaned the whole room and stood beside the window. She saw so many people in the beach. Some people in the swimming pool with their children and their second half couple. She got happy seeing kids.

Aehem comes back and sees gopi looking outside and hugs her from behind. He looked at the small kids and became happy as he knew Gopi wanted one.

They left to go to Madame tussauds and saw so many british wax models of the ancient kings and queens such as mary queen of scots, king henry VIII, and more. They went further down and saw many celebrities in their wax models such as david beckham, Srk, Sallu, Aish rai bachan, Amitabh and more. They went back to the hotel and spent time together.

After a couple of days, he took her to the hospital and came to know she was pregnant.

He was the happiest person on earth.

It was time to go back to india, they got all the stuff they bought, and left to the airport. They sat in the plane. The plane departured and took them 7 hours to reach. No one knew they came until they gave them a surprise.

No one was at home so Gohem entered the house, went to the bedroom and chilled out. The family came and saw the house was already opened, they smelt food being made, someone sitting at the dinning table.

Aehem got up and turned around. they all got a shock and ran to him. They were pleased to see them. They sat down beside him and waited for gopi to bring the food outside. They looked at her. She had gained weight since last time.She served and told them she is pregnant.

After 8 months.

She in hospital in the ICU, while everyone waiting outside , all the nurse, other doctors etc were with them praying as her life was in critical. The doctor comes out and announces its a girl.

thats it me finished with this ff - hope u all enjoyed

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