I love Gopi short ff part 9 page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Even after today i am still a goham fan

Aham in Jail sitting there, he was accused of trying to kill his wife Gopi, flash back he was kneeling down on the floor at CM with Gopi lying on the floor he body covered in bruises n a knife was in stomach, she was still breathing , Aham took out the knife thats when the police arrived, urmilla screaming meri dikri meri dikri uska krorapathi nah mar dala..
The police arrested Aham n took Gopi to the hospital she was in critical condition.
The modi parivaar were all there, they were having to listen to urmillas wailing. Telling everyone that it was modi parivaar son who had done this to her pyari neice.
Chirag who was in no mood to listen to all of this decides to go the jail n talk to Aham.
Aham was ranting now, i should have stopped her, she should never have gone there, what kind of monster am i. Chirag saw this and shouted AHAM he stopped. Aham tell me what happened
Aham stops crying n starts since Gopi left that day there hasnt been a day i have not thought about her, i just could not admit it to my self every day for the past two weeks i have been going to cm secretly seeing Gopi at first she did not see me i use to hide then i stopped hiding and pretending that i was coming to see kinjal but i was really going to see Gopi i missed her so much.
Kaka kinjal knew i wasnt coming to see her, she would tease Gopi that her pati dev was here, but Gopi never came out of her room. she avoided me i wanted to bring her home but she barely spoke to me.
Panna called me today jiju come plse Gopi didi is hurt really badly, all the neighbours could hear screaming coming from mahma jis house. When i got there i saw Gopi lying there with a knife in her stomach she was looking at me n smiling i looked at her took the knife out thats when Mahmi started to scream n wail.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Suk! fantastic start! go on please!
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part two
Aham you did not stab Gopi vahu, no kaka i found her like that.
At what time did panna call you? Aham says cant remember but it is on his phone . do you know where panna is Aham ? No Kaka i saw her with urmilla after that i dont know where she went maybe at the hospital
Chirag calls jigar who is at the hospital, Jigar is panna there with you all ? No papa she is not wait i shall ask rashis mom, mummy ji where is panna? haiha jigar panna has gone to see her friends from the orphanage since yesterday, when she finds out what ur brother did to gopi she will be devastated. she goes there every sixs months, chirag hears this n does not say anything, jigar says papa jigar beta i heard everything dont worry.. papa why do you want to see panna? no beta dont worry, urmilla who is trying to hear the conversation she looks worried.
chirag calls the inspector in charge what grounds do you have my nephew here, inspector tells chirag, that the knife was in his hand and that the girls mahmi said she saw Aham modi stabbing her neice. Chirag knew that aham was not lying , but why was urmilla?
He tells the inspector to go with him to cm, he asks him why he tells him that the person who stabbed Gopi may try again n he needs to confirm something.
chirag and the inspector drive to cm, Chirag comes out there were a crowd of people standing together bechari gopi bechari gopi that baymaan should be hanged for this, chirag looked at them and ask them who should be hanged for this, they look at him n say that wretched woman she did this, chirag confused which woman, the inspector ask them speak up they say her mahmi she is the one who did this to Gopi.
Inspector and chirag hear this but that cant be right ji sahb it is, but how urmilla was at our house when all this happened sahb her daughter came in her fancy car n drove away fast. They took panna with them Chirag shocked how can this be Rashi involved in all of this..
Inspector says to Chirag i am going to get two policemen at Gopis room now, we need to find out where panna is otherwise her life is going to be in danger.

next chapter coming up in a while

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow awesome i loved it plz go on 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love it, can't wait to read rest of it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The inspector calls the station to get police to the hospital, then he says to let Mr Modi out, Chirag hearing this says can i speak to Aham first. Chirag tells Aham he is not to be seen by any family member at the hospital, but kaka Gopi needs me, no dikra if u are seen by her mahmi or rashi they will suspect something is wrong and we dont want them to think anything panna's life is in danger. But kaka how will i see Gopi i need to tell her something, Dikra you have to wait, no kaka it cant wait, i have to tell her I love her. Aham felt good for some time now he has never admitted it but now he needs to tell her he loves her, Chirag knew that it was not use as Aham when he sets his mind to something no going back . Speaking to the inspector they come up with a plan that they shall move Gopi to another room as no one will be able to go in or out no one will find out that Aham is out of jail.
Aham goes to the hospital with the officers n hides in the room where Gopi was going to be moved he also had a doctors coat on just in case anyone saw him. The officers with a team of nurses n the doctor move Gopi to her new room, Ahams heart was beating fast i lost you once i cant lose you now, i wont let you go.
Everyone confused why they had moved Gopi, urmilla sees the police at the door n tries to go in, they stop her, but meri dikri, they tell her that they have been instructed to let no body to go in, she complains i am like her mother, kokila rolls her eyes.
Aham speaks to the doctor n asks him what is her chances, he tells him 50/50 to pray to kanaji. Aham starts to pray, kanaji i know i have done wrong, i need you to know this , plse dont take Gopi away from me i need her. Aham opens his eyes holds Gopis hand, Gopi if you can hear this muhja maffa kardho.
Gopi starts to moan, the doctor looks at her we have to be very careful, slowly Gopi opens her eyes, she looks at Aham n frowns, she asks if she is with kanaji. Aham smiles the doctor looks at Gopi n says that she has lost a lot of blood, she will need to stay at the hospital for a few days. Aham is smiling the doctor tells him her diet has to be a lot of iron, protein foods, Aham says ok. it will not be a problem. Gopi looks at Aham confused, Ahamji what r you doing here, he tells her that he will stay with her until she recovers, he then calls chirag to tell him the good news the inspector tells something to Aham as he has a plan. Mr modi I will let the rest of the family know, Aham tells him no the doctor looks at Aham tell them Gopi died. The doctor confused, he tells him plse the inspector has said this another life is in danger.
When the doctor told the family that Gopi had died , umilla looked at rashi with a sly look, now watch me haiha my dikra screaming the place down, vivan ji ur dikra killed my dikri he will join her now he will hang for this, kokila who is upset about hearing about Gopi hears urmilla shouting n screaming. kokila breathes hard , hetal holds her hand leave it in kanajis hand.
Rashi picks up urmilla Mummy ji come let me get u a glass of water, she takes urmilla. See my kalakari rashi, mummy i dont understand dikri now that Gopi is dead, kargri son in jail he will hang for killing gopi, everything will go to jigar you will become raini of modi mansion, kargri will die herself.
mummy you are wonderful kya plan hai.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Grrrrr.... what dirtbags Urmi-Gopi are....

SUk, the story is very intense and going nicely too... plzzz udate soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ suk....enjoyed the story line.w8ing update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks all

part 4

Chirag arrived at the hospital with the inspector they went straight to Gopi's room, Gopi dikra can you tell us what happened, Ji kaka mahmi ji came home with some papers, she told me Aham ji had sent them i asked her what they were, she tells me that my sassural and my husband do not want me anymore, they have asked me to sign the papers, when i kept asking her what they were she just told me to sign i refused panna came in and she read the words divorce, Mahmi was so angry at her she was beating her , panna is just a child i stopped mahmi from beating her she started to hit me instead, she was in a rage, she told me she will kill me and panna, she went into the kitchen n got a knife i told panna to run she did, i stopped mahmi from running after panna, mahmi ji pulled my hair and tugged me forward the knife went into my stomach.
I heard her calling rashi ben she told her to come quickly as she was in trouble, i also heard that she said that i had refused to sign the papers and they will not be getting anything. Panna was with mahmi ji after that. i saw ahamjis face after that i dont remember anything after that.
Inspector we need to find those divorce papers, this way we have a good case against them. Aham put his face down as he could not look at Gopi as she was in so much pain he also thought i am the cause of your pain as well. Kaka ji can i see ma ji, Gopi it will be risky as your mahmi is outside , gopi has a tear, kaka ji aham asks gopi needs mom plse somehow bring in mom here, the inspector says there is one way, one minute, Mrs kokila Modi, koki who is finding it hard to breathe ji inspector say can you come with me i want to ask you some questions, ji what about, about your son and dils relationship. urmilla is coming up with rashi they both pretending to cry. They see kokila with the inspector heading into Gopi's room, again urmilla tries to go in again she is stopped vivan ji why has the inspector taken kokila hetal tells her they need to speak to kokila about Ahams relationship with Gopi. urmilla smirks whilst pretending to cry.
Kokila goes into the room Aham goes over to greet her, mom Gopi is alive. Kokila par how come she looks at Gopi crying Gopi vahu i have missed you soo much. Kokila then looks at all of them whats going on she tells them the doctor told them Gopi had died. Aham tells he what happened he tells her that they have to be careful as panna is missing and her life might be in danger. mom Gopi wanted to see you thats why we called you. Gopi vahu i let you down, nahi maji what was suppose to happen happened thats all. kokila crying.
After an hour of talking Gopi fell asleep, kokila says she needs to rest, mom i will stay with her, dikra ok, i shall go out. mom remember dont say anything, kokila goes out urmilla says vivan ji inspector what was he asking? kokila looks at her he was asking about the time that Aham slapped Gopi, she knew she had to lie she prayed plse forgive me kanaji.
urmilla smirked again rashi smirked back, kokila witnesses all of this. you were saying my son will hang both of you will both pay for this dearly.
Edited by fanbidaai - 14 years ago
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part 5

kokila tells hetal we should go home as they need to see Baa n also cook, even though aham has done wrong he is still my son n he needs something to eat, kokila cooks gopi kichari n aham dalh roti, she puts it in tiffin, urmilla n rashi who witnessed all this, more drama haiha meri dikra will never eat again. Rashi starts mere choti ben, kokila looks at them walking past. Then rashi quietly says mummy panna, hai dikra lets go n see to her now, kokila hears this as she gets to the door, she turns n looks back she watches them they go towards the back store room, kokila says hmmm i think i know where panna is.. she calls chirag he was back at cm kokila tells him that they are looking in the wrong place they should look closer to home she tells him what she heard n saw. He tells her that they will be coming to the house. kokila leaves for the hospital, she wanted to see the tamasha what was going to happen but thought aham and gopi were more important.
At the hospital Aham had put his head down on the bed holding gopis hand, they were both sleeping, the nurse came in n woke up aham as they needed to do their routine check on Gopi, her blood pressure was high, Gopi woke up whilst the nurse was checking her. She saw Aham standing there he was smiling, she smiled back but felt awkward he knew something was wrong. Once the nurse left Aham sat down, he held Gopis hand she tried to take it away but he stopped her, Gopi i was so wrong please forgive me, Gopi looking at him still confused he then explains Gopi i should have come for i was being stupid, i realise how wrong i was. Gopi i love you. Gopi looks at him confused, kokila was just about to walk in when she sees aham holding Gopis hand, Aham ji what did you say, i love you Gopi, i know you said that but what does that mean i dont understand, kokila smiles, Aham smiles as well Gopi mah boath pyar thujsa kar tha hui, i want to tell the whole world, kokila smiles n walks in now that you have told your wife you can tell anyone you want. she smiles i have brought you some food. Gopi says maji i dont feel like eating, Aham looks at kokila n nodds his head she brings the food to him, he tries to feed Gopi, she refused him he looks at her mera liye, she smiles then eats. Aham eats afterwards, Gopi asks maji what about panna, ji hai i forgot we will soon find panna i think she has been hidden somewhere in our house. Gopi smiles she goes back to sleep. Mom i am sorry for the pain i caused you n Gopi. As long you have realised that dikra i am happy. i just want to see you together.

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