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Posted: 14 years ago
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Haha finally Ahem is in pain! Love it. please continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's great Suk. I can't wait to see how Aham will get Gopi back.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gopi Gopi have you listen to a word i have said, Gopi looks n says sorry Baa, i know i should not have called Maji but i could not help it. Baa smiles Gopi kokila is missing you so much as well but she knows for you to have a relationship with Aham this is the best way. Baa i understand all of this, did we have to send the Divorce papers, Baa smiles i also was not happy about this but kokila insisted she knows her son unless something is done drastically no way he would accept you as his wife.
Gopi looks over to kokila mother who is nodding in approval, Dikra kokila is my daughter she knows what is best for you and Aham she has not failed you as yet just wait. Baa tells Gopi tomorrow you shall wear these clothes, she gives her a short skirt and very figure hugging top, Gopi says to Baa i cant wear this, Gopi Kinjal brought these over from America you will wear them, also your hair will be left open not tied up as for your sindoor you shall put it on at the back of head so that it will not be seen. you will leave your manglesutra tomorow at the house. Gopi is not happy she nodds her head.

Next day kinjal tells Aham that her friend Dana missed her flight so she will be seeing her again after that she would come to meet him in the office. Kinjal calls Baa, Baa change of plan my friend has agreed to stay on a little longer, gopi bhabi will not be needed i hope our plan works..
Kinjal decides to take Dana to where Aham has lunch on a regular basis, Aham walks in with Jigar he sits in his regular spot they talk about work then Jigar says Bhai isnt that Gopi Bhabi. Aham looks over there sitting is Gopi, Aham is shocked he runs over to her table, Gopi Gopi the girl looks at Aham sorry whose Gopi, kinjal who was in the washroom comes over Bhai this is my friend Dana i told you about her, Aham says sorry i thought you were my wife Gopi. She accepts his apology looks at kinjal confused. My brother thinks you look like his wife Aham is embarrassed. He leaves with Jigar. Bhai take a couple of days off n see if you can find Gopi Bhabi. Ahams says yes.

Aham is leaving the restaurant he looks over n sees Gopi wearing a green sari getting in a taxi she is smiling, he tells jigar look Bhai thats Gopi bhabi, Aham runs towards the taxi he is not fast enough the taxi leaves.. jigar tells Aham lets go we will follow that taxi he is driving his car. Aham tells him to go fast as he does not want to lose Gopi. They follow the taxi but then traffic lights go red and jigar stops they see the taxi in front of them it turns left, Aham is saying plse kanaji dont let me lose gopi. The traffic lights turn green jigar drives fast as he can he turns left then confusion as road is like a maze so many roads that turn into alleyways but which one did the taxi take. Aham has tears she was there oh God jigar i want Gopi back, i love her i never admitted it before because i was stubborn but now my heart belongs to her. jigar smiles.
Aham recieves a phone call its the private investigator, Aham sahb i have some news, your wife has been seen with two elderly women, she regularly visits a ashram about 30 miles from here. Aham starts to think Baa is at a Ashram but which one, he asks Jigar where is Baa jigar replies Baa is at a Ashram in Goa. Aham is confused so who is Gopi with..
Aham and Jigar drive down to the Ashram, they get there it looks deserted but once they go to the main hall everyone is finished eating, Aham has a photo of Gopi he starts to show it to everyone, the priest tells Aham, ji Gopi was here she is a pyari bachi her heart is in so much pain, she has not told me anything but i can see Gopi has been hurt by the people she loves she came to find peace and answers . She left today i dont know where she has gone. Aham is sad.. the priest says to Aham real love never dies but when you lose something that you love more than yourself thats when the real pain starts. Aham is lost.

Edited by fanbidaai - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG suk, 3 chapters in less than 24 hrs? Fantastic.. Dana is confusing me..lol..
Waiting for the divorce:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
wow Suk, another amazing chapter. Really enjoying the story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Love it! Ahem is chasing after Gopi too funny. Can't wait for the next part.
Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Love your quick updates! Such a treat to read
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Posted: 14 years ago
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suk my heart was beating tak tak tak till i finished the chapters. wow three chapters so soon, great. i m struggling to write even one,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kokila Mota Bhabi its time time to bring Gopi vahu back home , Hetal replies are you sure kokila, ji i am very sure. I will pack Ahams clothes you and chirag bhai also pack we are leaving. Kokila what about Rashi? Hetal asks, kokila says to her tell her we are going on a holiday to pack Jigars clothes. He will meet us there. Kokila Rashi i think we should leave her and jigar here, no mota bhabi i want her there with us so we can keep a eye on her. If she stays here then her and her mother will cause mischief when we get back. Hetal nodds her head.

jigar in the car driving back, bhai we will find Gopi bhabi, Aham in deep thought doesnt answer, aham bhai, the phone rings its the investigator again Aham sahb your wife has been seen leaving on a flight to Goa, she wasnt travelling alone. Aham tells Jigar go to the airport we are going to Goa. jigar confused why bhai because Gopi is going to goa to meet Baa. Aham is nervous.
jigar drives towards the airport, but bhai plse call home to let them know, Aham nodds his head he calls no one answers, thinking it is strange let me call kinjal phone he calls no answer. Aham says to jigar no one is answering bhai i think we should go home first, aham agrees to see what is going on. They reach the house and the security guard tells Aham that the family have left, he asks where i dont know chota sahb they did not tell me. Aham ask Jigar to call Rashi, again no answer. Jigar shows concern.
Ahams phone rings its kokila Aham Baa is sick we are all going to her, you know her health is not as good as it use to be. Our flight is leaving in 5 minutes. Aham you and jigar take care of yourselves, Aham says to kokila mom we shall be coming as well. she replies that is up to you. ok jigar knows the address shall see you there.
Kokila and family arrive in Goa, Rashi is wondering why they are there she could not even speak to her mum to let her know where they were going and on top of that she left her phone😊.
She decides to have fun as they are there for a couple of days, Hetal looks at kokila who knows Rashi too well. mota bhabi we will be staying at a hotel near the Ashram, i tried to get some rooms at the Ashram but they told me that they were full. once at the hotel they all went to there rooms hetal chirag kokila and parag leave there bags in their rooms and say to rashi that we are all going to see Baa, Rashi replies no she tells them that she will unpack and wait for jigar and Aham bhai. Hetal and kokila look at each other smiling. Hetal tells Rashi that as the rooms are joining the only phone that works is in their room. Also in the hotel rates are high not to drink the drinks in the fridge as they will get some from the store later on. Rashi says ji.
At the Ashram Baa is in good spirits her and kokilas mother are laughing as soon as hetal, kokila parag and chirag see them they all have tears in there eyes. They all hug each other. Kokila looks round Baa where is Gopi? Kokila modi she is ok she has gone to the beach. we shall go and meet her, kokila is excited she has missed Gopi soo much. They see Gopi all excited they run up and hug her she is in tears, Maji i have missed you all soo much. Dikra you dont know what hell you left us with but we knew if we did not do this then Aham would never have realised his feelings for you.
kinjal and Dana also arrive at the hotel, she tells Dana to get dressed in the Green sari. She does they both go to the Ashram as well, Gopi meets kinjal bhabi shouts kinjal oh its been so long since i have seen or spoken to you. They hug. Bhabi this is Dana Gopi you know the plan. you are not to be seen, Rashi is also at the hotel, gopi looks worried but kinjalben dont worry ma has a full proof plan.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gud one suk.. Hope Ahem doesnt fall in love with Dana..
And my poor Rashi.. It hurts!

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