FF:Save the last dance updt pg 9-4/1 - Page 2

Originally posted by: br2499

wow Jake! ⭐️ Good start! Is this your first attempt? Then you had been hiding your creativity behind your BRATness. I like the name Dinshaw. Do the other Modi's (Aham, kokila, parag and Gopi) come in this story?

All the best in your attempt to redeem Rashi😆

Thank you hben... this is my first attempt at a non-humour fiction... ROFL... and dinshaw is actually the name of my grandfathers business associate. maybe i should write a Disclaimer😆

All other Modi's will be their and i mite attempt at a parrellel gohem track for fiza ben...😃


If you want to read my comic feature go for JIMM : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1541766. All the Best😉

Originally posted by: simran15

Interesting prologue, lets see how will the story pan out.

Cant promise anything, chechi... this was on the spot idea and i always write like that... so how it develops is a mystery to me as well... i must say gud luck to you if you keep reading my work😆

Originally posted by: saomom

@ bold - 🤣🤣 🤣 I feel like hitting Rashi too!😉

Great start Jake!

Hitting will be the last thing that comes to his mind once he sets eyes on MY Rashi... ROFL and thanks for appreciation... Your comment makes me write more, mom....😃

Originally posted by: saomom

*oops*

??????????????😕... Did u double post or did call me names before you edited?😉

Originally posted by: crms

Wow. Very good start. Hope u will keep Umang Rana in the story.

Anything for you Madhu khaki... Anything For you... I will definately keep Umang Rana... Rana, what a surname!

Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

thats superb start bro...

Thank you, sadhliben... i know how much you hate rashi... But then we poor Rashi fans need something, rite?

PS : the current dp is good... smiling Ahem atlast!!!👏

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

All other Modi's will be their and i mite attempt at a parrellel gohem track for fiza ben...[:D

So kind of you jakebhai.. if you do this for me then I might make Rashi a positive character in my latest FF..

Originally posted by: saina01

So kind of you jakebhai.. if you do this for me then I might make Rashi a positive character in my latest FF..

ROFL.. No dont make any change on my behalf.. Write it just as u orginally planned

Very cool, Jakebhai!! Awesome start.....love that there is a FF based on Raji!! Very nice change......We need to meet THIS Raashi now!!

Please do continue and wishing you the very best for the new year!! Happy 2011!!

Originally posted by: desisrock

Very cool, Jakebhai!! Awesome start.....love that there is a FF based on Raji!! Very nice change......We need to meet THIS Raashi now!!

Please do continue and wishing you the very best for the new year!! Happy 2011!!

hey, thanks and same to you.. Where were u, mitaben? Busy with work and 2010? Lol