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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Gud that u translated. Fine job.. Ab toh mere Rashi par reham kar..

for Rashi... no way...
i'll let you do the honours... i'll never be able to make justice to her...

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: br2499
Diya! I liked this more than the others.👏

Aham channelling Darcy! If it really happens in SNS, he has some hope.

ahha... so how much was NHQ Bee???

am glad you liked it and i hope for him to be portrayed as you said

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: babyblue352

Completely agree with Bee here! Simply beautiful! Loved it Diya. You really have a way with words!

Thank you dear...
am glad you liked it..

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

wow diya beautiful poem. it brings out the conflict of aham. if only he does something like that in SNS. and thanz for the translation.

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br2499

@br2499

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: upasana.diya

ahha... so how much was NHQ Bee???

am glad you liked it and i hope for him to be portrayed as you said

I guess, we should call it AHQ here.

Brooding, reflecting, Darcy like Aham -definitely 100 in log scale😃

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saina

@saina01

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Hats off to you diya..
This was so totally Aham.. It's very true though that looking at his tough exterior we tend to forget that he has feelings as well which he is trying hard to hide..

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crms

@crms

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Diya, very thoughtful. You have a way with words. And your english translation is helping a lot.

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Sujata

@rahuldravidfan

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Wow Diya... really loved it...it's true Ahem's feelings straight from the heart.... very nice... my favourite lines are

"dekhkar is chehre ki berukhi, poochte hai kis baat ka hai ahem

kya jaane koi, ye ahem nahi, koshish hai chupaane ki gam"

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: shruthi2010
wow diya beautiful poem. it brings out the conflict of aham. if only he does something like that in SNS. and thanz for the translation.

sorry dear wasn't around for a while so didnt see the comments

thanks for the kind words dear...

well i can't make him a dracula so amde him into a reculse😉

Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago