Itna Kaafi Nahin Hai...100% Ishq-Pt 17, updt pg 40 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sarah, that was lovely!
Can you translate this for me? 'Gopi mere saar ki kasam khao aur kaho ke tumhe mujh se koi shikayat nahi.'
Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: saomom

Sarah, that was lovely!

Can you translate this for me? 'Gopi mere saar ki kasam khao aur kaho ke tumhe mujh se koi shikayat nahi.'
Thanks!



'Gopi mere sar ki kasam khao aur kaho ke tumhe mujh se koi shikayat nahi.'
gopi pledge on my life (literal - Sar = head) and tell me that you don't have any complaints with me

sar -= head
saar = essense, as in God, who is the essence of life
shikayat = complaint
Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: estty

hello as da african i can't really read the hindi in the story so pretty pls with a cherry on top if u can translate for me i wuld really appreciate it.. thanx ....da african.. loved the story



Oh yes it'll be my pleasure... After all i want all to enjoy 😉
Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: upasana.diya



agree with Sam... wonderful comment Sam

and by the way Sarah beta... agar aisa kuch likho jisse mujhe emotional upheavals se heart attack aane ka khatra ho to plzzz put a warning😊... mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya ki main Ahem ke aasuon pe roun ya Gopi ke acche kismat pe khush houn aur mera dil baith gaya...😕

wonderful update hun... waiting for more from you


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@sam: yup will definitely update... Mere liye bhi to sirf itna likhna kaafi nahi hai...

@Diya: why 😭 then there won't be any surprises... Waise bhi kabhi kabar heart attack ana hi chahiye na? 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khansk



ohhh dear... don't cry... i don't mean tell me everything... just say "beware faint hearted"...lolzzzz... just kidding... surprise us... we love surprises😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg....! dt update was truely awesome..!!!! plzzz continue soon...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Read all the 3 parts..Bahut accha laga..Immensely talented writers in this forum.

Looking forward to ur next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ruksm

Read all the 3 parts..Bahut accha laga..Immensely talented writers in this forum.


</div>Looking forward to urnext part..
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Hehe 😳 thanks...
Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanya.dsouza

omg....! dt update was truely awesome..!!!! plzzz continue soon...!



Glad u liked it! Thx!
Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok babes and hunks ( if there are any guys around) so Aham has finally came down to earth, apologised and accepted Gopi and Gopi is continuously thanking her kanhaji and going with the flow as she did not know when this dreamworld of hers would end...

Here's part 4... Enjoy!!!

Gopi couldn't take Aham's stare anymore. The intensity of his stare was making her go weak in her knees. She quickly turned, picked up the tray and briskly walked to the kitchen. The shyness and nervousness in Gopi was killing Aham. He wanted her even more now. He blew out the candle and followed Gopi into the very messy kitchen. Gopi was shocked to see the kitchen in such a state as she was very sure she cleaned it up. But she soon realised that her Ahamji had came in and got food for her. She couldn't help but smile at how Aham did certain things. If she or Mani were to heat up the food, it would have only taken at most 5 minutes and no mess. But here, her perfectionist husband took 20 minutes and a whole lot of mess.

Gopi started cleaning up, not aware of Aham in the doorway. She thought hw might have gone to bed. She was extremely happy and said out loud to herself, "pyar na sahi, magar khyal to rakhte hai na. Bas yahi kafi hai(he may not love me but he cares for me. This much is enough...)". Aham's heart swelled hearing this. She was so simple, just little things like this made her so happy and he knew it was time he confessed. He watched and observed Gopi's every move, every time her hair swished, he felt like running his hands through them. Every time her pallu moved and he caught a glimpse of her stomach, he felt like trailing his fingers over the soft flesh. His eyes travelled further up and he found 2 round eyes looking back at him. He was caught. But he did not move. He still leaned against the doorway, arms crossed staring at her with a slight smile playing on his lips and a twinkle in his eyes. Gopi immediately looked down and stuttered "ji aap woh... aap tha-thak gaye honge aap jayiye mein saaf karti hun ( u must b tired, u go n i'll clean up)," Aham just said "nahi,", walked in, and sat on the kitchen counter. By now, only the dishes were left and Gopi proceeded to washing them but her mind was on Aham who was facing her back. What was he doing? Was he staring at her? What was he thinking?

And true enough Aham was staring at her although he vowed that he would be affectionate first and then passionate no matter how much self- control it would take, wild ideas of what he would do with his shy and nazuk(delicate) Gopi was running through his mind. When he saw that only a plate and a glass was left in the sink, he got to his feet and started walking towards her very slowly. Upon hearing the noise from behind, Gopi turned and found her Ahamji still not changed from the previous description ( imagine him really hot here like how i have described him during the previous scene, top few buttons undone etc etc) walking towards her ever so slowly. She quickly turned and said a prayer to kanhaji and continued washing but failed because her heart was beating so hard, it threatened to come out of her chest and not to forget her hands that were shaking and refusing to cooperate. By now she could feel Aham's hot breath on her neck an although she could not feel him, she knew that he was very close behind her. Gopi closed her eyes in anticipation, forgetting about the dishes. Aham noticed Gopi's shaky hands but now instead of being angry with himself, he felt satisfied for he knew it was out of nervousness and not fear. Oh how he loved her! Another thing which amused him was the fact that Gopi would not be able to wash the remaining dishes in this state and he knew just what he had to do...

To be continued...

Sorry frens i noe its quite slow and we are still at the same night but pls do comment and of course for the comfort and respect of all members, if there is anything you would like me to edit, do tell me.... Loves!

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